~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

WELL I THNK IT WULD BE AT 11 TONITE

waiting for it.........

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#732

i know i promised i'll update my ff today......

but the light went out......

so i typed it as a note on my cell phone.........

but couldn't transfer it to my pc........

i sent it as a multimedia message to my friend......

who'll somehow upload it and e-mail me tomorrow......

plzzzzzzz understand.......

i'll update tomorrow.......

pakka..........

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
u updating??

ya i am but 1 hour lage ga

actually me sogaye thi abhi uthi hu

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

ya i am but 1 hour lage ga

actually me sogaye thi abhi uthi hu

no probs....... i'll wait....... 1 hour se zyada toh nahi lagega na

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

no probs....... i'll wait....... 1 hour se zyada toh nahi lagega na

nhe pakka 1 ghanta thn the update will be there

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

nhe pakka 1 ghanta thn the update will be there

ok...... waiting for it

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#737

part 16

all returned from the lonavla

and routine lfie and duty were continued

mayank and nupur both had started feeling sumthing for each other

mayank ha realised his love for her

but still nupur hadnot realised it

samrat knew about it

and was trying hard to make her rea new day

all interns were doing their duties

mayank was in locker room lost in his thots

m: kiia nupur mere baare me sochti hoge kia wo mjhe pasand karti hoge lagta to hai but koi signal bhi to nhe deti ?

s: ofcourse dude( cming frm back side)

m: tum yaha

s: ha me waise if u want my help i can

m: kaise

s: well me nups ko jaaanta hu wo relations se dur bhagti hai

m: to phr

s: phir kal se mission nupur shuru

m: ha mission nupur me kuch samjha nhe?????????/

s: are budhu kal se hum nupur ke dil ki bt jaane ki koshish karege

m: kaise

s: well its a 6 day program to knw her heart feelings

m: acha to kal mjhe kia karna hoga

s: day 1 ignoring nupur

m: thnx dude

s: mntion not

waise maine tmhe kubul kia apni angelic nups k liye us ka khayal rkhna

m: sure ye tumse mera vaada hai

s: to kal se shur hoga mission nupur but ek baat jaan lo kisi bhi tarah nups ko pta nhe chalna chaye warna wo din mera is world me last dy hoga

m(controling his laughter) ok dude me jaanta hu us ka gusa to aafat hai khuda hi bachaye

n: reall to mera gussa khatarnak hai

sayank were shocked at it as they thot that there plan has been revealed but luck was with them so nupur didnt listened all thing but listened last sentence by mayank

so now mayanks life in danger

n: ha to me khatarnak hu aj btati hu me kitni bhayanak hu just wait and watch . chalo gunjan

g: ha chalo ab dkh hai inko jo humari burai karte hai

now it was lunch time

all interns were eating lunch

girls were ignoring boys

sajan were trying hard to convince them

but all end in vain

s: plz sorry yr ainda aisa nhe hoga

( tillthn dia nupur and ggunjan hid sumthing at thier back)

n: acha but agar aisa hua to phir

m: nhe hoga

( now each boy was in front of one girl)

mayank-nupur

samrat-gunjan

diya-benji

n: thik hai but

all boys:(confused) but kia

all girls: ye(they hit cake on their face)

now it had started into a big fight all were throwing things on each other

didnt realised when dr kirti cameand thet also thruogh noodles on other

dr k: interns

no response

dr k:(with full pressure) internnnnnnnnnssssss...... kia horha hai

all interns came back to sense

d K: 1 hour baad sab mjhe sahe haaal me miley for overduties

all inters: but

dr k: no but sss aj to ap ko punish mileygi for sure

all interns heads down: jeee mam

end

i knw its short but i am tired now

but kal i will pakka give you long one

till thn enjoy it

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#738

wow........

update chota ho ya baada hota toh hamesha ghakas hai......

glad mayank realized his love.......

the sayank scene was rocking.......

and the mayur fight was so cute.......

food fight in canteen was such fun.......

i felt like i was a part of it.......

dr. keerti scolding them was adding a touch of reality.......

i am so happy you will update again tomorrow......

waiting for mission nupur to start..........

goodnight......... i can sleep happily now.......

luv

mahima

p.s...... send me the reply link

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

wow........

update chota ho ya baada hota toh hamesha ghakas hai......

glad mayank realized his love.......

the sayank scene was rocking.......

and the mayur fight was so cute.......

food fight in canteen was such fun.......

i felt like i was a part of it.......

dr. keerti scolding them was adding a touch of reality.......

i am so happy you will update again tomorrow......

waiting for mission nupur to start..........

goodnight......... i can sleep happily now.......

luv

mahima

p.s...... send me the reply link