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Posted: 15 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

updating in 3 hours

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Posted: 15 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

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waiting for the update........

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Posted: 15 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

waiting for the update........

am typing the part

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Posted: 15 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

am typing the part

will post in a hour

that's great

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#555

recap: mayur back sanu patch up

part 13

dr.armaaan call all intern along wit dr ridhimma

dr.A: hi to all interns aj hum senior doctors ne ye faisla kia hai k jaisa k kal se humara camp officially start hone wala hai to kyun na aj thori si masti hojaye

n: (excitedly) wowwwww!!!! nyc idea bro i mean dr armaaan

dr.A: i know miss nupur main ye jeh raha tha k aj hm cricket khelte hai is tht ok

all interns: yes sir

dr.A: to teams ye hai

team A:

captain armaan

players

nupur

mayank

dia

benji

team B:

captain ridhimma

samrat

gunjan

uday

dr sid

N:(in mind) oh no mjhe to sam ki team me jana hai but no problem bro hai na aur mayank bhi to hai

M:(in mind) wow nupur mere saath but shayad use samrat k saath jana chati thi

S:(in mind) oh no is chipku gunjan k saath god save me kash nupur meri team me hoti

G:(in mind) wow mw aur samrat saath saathand bechari nupur alag ohhhhhhhhhhh....

dr A: all members take ur position

tosss tym

guess who won the tosss

it was our A team yr apne dr armaaan ki team

after winning the toss armaaan tightly hugged nupur

and were dancing and saying hum jeeet gaye hum jeeet gaye

alll interns were shockedas they havent seeen dr armaaan i=lyk this

thn match begins

nupur and armaaan came to the pitch as an opener

and samrat was balling

samrat started balling to nupur to which she hits a six

as it was easy ball

n:(dancing) i hit a six pooor team b ohhhhhhhhh😆😆😆

dr.A: cool yr u r awesum my angel

n: i knw tht bro

nupur came to sanrat and whispered in his ears

n: itni easy balll mat chala tum log harjaoge

samrat shocked as how she knw that

n: muh band kar aur ache se khel

s: tjhe kaise pta

n: mere sweet bestie mjhe nhe pata hoga to aur kis pta hoga chal concentrate on match warna dono team walw hum dono ko pakar k maaare ge

s: ok sweeet heart but let me make one thing clear sam wont go against her nupur forever

n: i knw that

match continues

nupur and armaan succesfullly reached their team to 150 score

then gunjan cums for ballling when she ballled to nupur nupur hit he balll toward ridhimmma

samrat tries to catch balll but acccidently bumps with nupur

( it was by gunjan she extened her legs which make samrat fallls on nupur)

and our pooor nupur got out

N: nhe me out nhe hu ye sab samrat ki galti hai

alll members: nupur tum ot ho

n: whatever jarhe hu

S: nups

n: jarhe hu na

thn mayank cum for batting nupur wished him best of luck

but you knw wht

she was frowning a lot

now it was 15 min tea break

perfect tym for gunjan to create misunderstanding between sanu

gunjan cums to samrat and said

g: wow samrat nyc plan yr kitni safai se tmne nupur ko out kia awesum

s: kia keh rhe ho

nupur listened this and angrily rushes to samrat

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#556

first to comment...... yeh toh hona hi tha.......

kya update tha by god......

wow.........

i am on the side of team a of course.......

loved the sanu bond.........

waiting for the next update.........

luv

mahima

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

first to comment...... yeh toh hona hi tha.......

kya update tha by god......

wow.........

i am on the side of team a of course.......

loved the sanu bond.........

waiting for the next update.........

luv

mahima

i have updated more in same post read it

and nxt part will be there in nxt hour

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

i have updated more in same post read it

and nxt part will be there in nxt hour

ok....... raed the update.......

i hope sanu misunderstanding clears out......

waiting for the next update

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

ok....... raed the update.......

i hope sanu misunderstanding clears out......

waiting for the next update

thnx dear

but there is huge sanu fite cming up

just wait for it

actuallly i have threee more parts witten in my diary but i dnt get a tym to upload tht welll will upload it ne and thn tommorow also

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

thnx dear

but there is huge sanu fite cming up

just wait for it

actuallly i have threee more parts witten in my diary but i dnt get a tym to upload tht welll will upload it ne and thn tommorow also

wow...... can't wait