Hi Mansi...
Arey yaar, you updated on time, but I guess I got late this time. Nevermind...
The questions bothering Riddhima were justified enough. She is bound to think of all that. Her belief that she loves Vivek is strong enough to keep her blind to see whats better. She must be feeling bad for the family she is married into. How could someone hurt people who have laid so much trust and love into you? And now, the new feelings erupting in her heart for Armaan, that has also adding to her anxiety and fear. If it was someone else, the feeling might havent been such strong or confusing, but this is Armaan we have in sight. He is such a gem of a man.
Hey what was that? "She smiled at his enthusiasm... Totally carried away by it... Lost imagining places he'd started describing, making elaborate plans to visit each..."
Why did you leave it hanging out there with three dot-dot-dots in the end? What was she about to imagine?
But yaar, I really-really wanted one thing... tch, but it didn't happen. Yoy must be thinking what am I talking about, aren't you? Well, I wanted Muski to accompany them. LOL, she had been their worst night mare then... of course in a positive way... LOL.
I wonder what was the truth Armaan was thinking about, and who was that mysterious caller? Looks like the man is very close to Armaan... maybe that's why he knows all his secrets...
In the morning, I was thinking that maybe Riddhima has heard Armaan talking to his calling 'friend', and that's why she was cold... and yes, I was right. Though I felt bad for Armaan, but surprisingly, I didn't find her accusations harsh this time. Maybe coz I knew that the truth is not too far to be revealed, or maybe coz this time I felt that even though she accused him for everything, but her heart was aware of Armaan's sincerity.
But what was that yaar, I was seriously starting to believe that it was actually happening in your story, however the moment I read Armaan 'confessing' his feelings towards her and her reply, I knew that it was another of Armaan's nightmare. Kya yaar, saari excitement udan-chhuuu ho gayi.
Anyways, his momentary aloofness towards her was natural. Atleast they had a good time after that. I loved the song. You know, prior to my accident, when I used to go for my morning jogs, this was the topmost on my list. I loved listening to it while running all the way on empty roads. But now... *sigh*
Anyways, the way you described the song was wonderful. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Especially the part when she fell on her bump, then he circled her like a chicken, her hugging the earth, them making the big-couple fall on their back, him stopping by every 'restroom'... LOL, then Armaan licking off his facial cream, I mean ice-cream. Felt like, I could see that all happening in front of eyes. Wonderful yaar...
The scene that followed, the night one, was also lovely. This part was a blast in itself. All AR... I wonder how did you manage to write such a wonderful part in such a long time, when you always take a little too much time to post the updates.
I also enjoyed the very-drunk Riddhima. Atleast it pushed the real Riddhima out of her. Her hidden desires, the secrets even she is unaware of spilled out free that way.
I guess both the realities are very close to Riddhima now, the one about Vivek and the other which is more important is about herself... about her own feelings for Armaan.
You asked us not to yell at you, but yaar, don't you think you've asked for a little for something out of our control? Hum to chillayenge, aur wo bhi ZOR-ZOR se...
Waise to, this part was more than just a HUGE treat, but you still have update the next one sooner... and I am sure ALL others will agree with me.
Thanks for the PM.
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