Fan-Fic..*Dil Ka Rishta*CONTIUED *PG 38* - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ouma plz cont soon

lob ju😳

maryam

Edited by nottyangel - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sorry sweetu I'm buried in h/w, which is in for tommaroe, I've learnt my lesson, dont leave things tot eh last mintue, Tommaroe I promise..

Luv ya..

Ouma

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Just read it...soundz like an amazin story...waitin to read more...😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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just read the first part gr8 job waiting for next part 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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G:Abb tum dono larna band karoe....

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CONTINUED..

K:Kya Ma, ajj main jhari hoon hamisha kiliye, aur uape sirf mujhe gali dehri hai, Mom where's that talk about "responsiblites"

Gayathri laughs and sits down next to Kripa, who puts on sad face. Gayathri strokes Kripa on the head and smiles.

G:Beta mujhe essa karne ki koi zarorat nahi hai, mujhe yeh pakka yekeen hai, ki tum uapne "responsiblites" samajteh hoo...I trust you beta.

Kripa smiles, but a killing thought wiped the smile away, and in a instance, she looked down, she had a flashback of her childhood. From the first day she started skool, to a time when they had a picnic, to the time when she went to one of Angad's concerts. A tear gently trickled down her powerded face. Gayathri notices, she looks down, and puts her arm around Kripa.

G:Kripa beta, waha j..jakar, sab ko khush rakna, j..jaise t..tum yaha par karthi hoon.(she breaks of and starts crying, she gets joined by Kripa)

They both cry, Gayathri hugs her precious daughter, Kripa cried heavly, a sad version of the kyph title track plays.

They end the tearful hug, Gayathri wipes the tears off Kripa, and then helds her by the chin, to hold her face up, Kripa looks into her mothers eyes, which were despartley trying to smile, but deep inside them she could see the unhappiness.

G:A..abb tum rona band karoe, aur hasso, ajj tumhari shaadhi hai, ajj meri beti ki shaadhi, hai..Ufff main toh bhull gaye, kaam hai baki, main jhathi hoon..

Gayathri runs of wiping her face, Kripa new it was an excuse, she knew her Ma, will go and cry somewhere eles.

Kripa sta there and looked into her reflection again, thousand questions were running through her mind. Willl she be able to keep the family happy? Will she keep them away from any problems? Will she solve all there problems?(I knwo typical Sas Bahu Saga- but fan-fic not like that lolz)

Kripa thinking to herslef..

K:Kya main woh khushiya de paonghe? Ajj meri sapna pora hoga, par kya yeh rishta pyar se baara hoga?

Kripa loses her self in her thoughts, then here dad comes in, he sits down and talks to her encourages her......................

Khanna House

Pritvhi walks out of a room, wareing nice Kurta and Kameez(Cant think of name) with a red long coat on top, he looked very handesome but was very busy. He walked around the main room oredering people to this and that. Naina comes behind him.

N:Pritvhi, Pritvhi, Pritvhi,

N:Ji aunty,

N:Angad tayaar hua hai kya, Dulhan nikale gaye, woh arehai, aur yaha par sab kuch ready nahi hai Uffff...

She bangs her head and walks around, Pritvhi tries and relaxes her,

P:Main abbhi Angad ko dehck tha hoon,

He rans upstairs to Angad room. He find Angad doing his collor button. Pritvhi leaves the door open, AniTTah is walking up to the stairs, which face directly to Angads room, where the door was open and everything can be seen. She stops and spys on Pritvhi, since AniTTah has a very evry big crush on Pritvhi..

Thinking to her self..

A:Wow, Ajj bahat Hot algra hai,..Hmmmmmmm

Pritvhi walks upto Angad and drops his Mobile on Angadz bed, Angad turns around and relises Pritvhi had entered.

A:Hey, How you doing Man..

P:Fine, Wow ur looking very handesome, in the Duhla clothes.

Angad smiles and says "Thanks Man"

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A:Dehcko na Pritvhi, yeh label, ka main kay karoe, Not omeing off..

Angad tries to pull it off...

P:Hey..Ease man..Ease, lemme doit..

Pritvhi fiddles woth the label, but was unsuccessful..

P:Okay, Man, sorry, par mujhe yeh karna paregha,

A:Okay Go ahead..

Pritvhi bends down and bited the label off, BUT from where AniTtah was standing it looked like he was kssing ANgads neck....🤢😆ect..

Mishti walks back, she gets her right hand upto her heart, Heratbroken, Devastated..

The man she loved turned out to be gay, she walks down the stairs in a stance, when she misses a step and fal in to a boys arm, he was called RAJ!

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Preview:WEDDING FINALLY AND BIG TWIST...

Sorry for boredom..

Luv ya..

Ouma

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆
that was fabbbb ouma
plz cont sooon
Edited by ~Angel~ - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
really nice fan-fic ouma!!! continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
jaldi liko whats the twist? continue now plz!
Edited by tru_capricorn - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
that was great plz cont soon. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
oh wow great job!!! you hve to continue A.S.A.P!!!!!

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