MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 61

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey kiran 🤗

it was sooo small part........😡😭 .. . I hope nupur succeeds in watever she is doing ..
glad ridz asked her to inform mayank .. but cudnt she call him too ?? I hope she meets mayank before leaving .. she really needs her strength for doing such a nice thing ahead..

Hope dey meet n go together dere.. continue soon.. thanx 4 d pm ..

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey kiran..nice parts..sorry for the late comment..
nupur didn't come to office n mayank got worried..when he called her she said she'll explain later..
nupur had to call riddhima n tell her smtn..what?..
armaan saw riddhima in her cabin sleeping n he couldn't help but admire her..aww..ridz got a call from nupur later on..n she got a lil worried..armaan told her he'll always be there n she was touched..sweet..
so nupur wanted to go to shimla to talk to sam..ridz felt it was a bad idea for her to go alone..n tried suggesting things to her..but it didn't work..she asked wether she had told mayank..but she said she hadn't..so she asked her to tell him..
when she went to his house..his maid opened the door..bt he wasn't there..n she had to leave soon..why was destiny not allowing em to meet?..ugh...as soon as she left mayank came there..n his maid informed him that someone had come..
PS: edited comment on pg 78
thnx 4 d pm
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing ff.........
very nice..........
plzzz do continue n add me to ur pm list......
plzzz show some more scenes of AR.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi friends.... Thank u so vry much 4 all the comments. Truly, I luv it wen u ppl frankly express ur thoughts about the updates..I knw most of u aren't rly happy with MayUr seperation. But as I said, love will find a way and that too soon....so read on.....
Part:17:
"Nupur didi...aapka phone hai..."the sweet voice made Nupur turn and look at the even sweeter face...the face of her sweet little cousin...
She smiled and said:"Aa rahi hoon.."
Nupur had been living with her dad's younger sister all these days, her "Bui"....Bui was somebody Nupur loved dearly. Someone who was as strict as Nupur thought her mother would have been but she also knew that she loved her as much as her mom would have loved her.
She got up and got hold of her duppatta. She was truly struggling with it. Not that she had never wore traditional dresses but ever since she moved to Mumbai 5 years back, she had got used to jeans and T-shirt. Now that she was with her "Bui", she had to look all that "ghar-e-loo" as Bui thought she should.
She walked to the hall and picking up the phone questioned:"Hello?"
"Thank God!!"
The voice on the other side reminded Nupur that she had promised Ridhimma she would call her up everyday but past two days, she hadn't called her up.
N:"Sorry Di...main bhool gayi thi..."
R:"Aur yahan meri jaan mein jaan nahi thi.."
N:"Sorry..."
R:"Koi baat nahi...kaisi hai tu?"
N:"Theek hoon...tum kaisi ho?Ummm...aur...aur sab?"
Ridhimma knew whom she was referring to and questioned immediately:"Tune Mayank bataya kyun nahi Nupur?"
Nupur told Ridimma what had happened at Mayank's place and then asked her if he had contacted her after that day to which Ridhimma replied:"Mayank ghar aaya tha....woh bohat naraaz tha Nupur..."
Nupur was more than just upset at this..she asked:"Kia tumne usse samjhaya nahi k main Shimla kyun aayi hoon aur main us k ghar toh gayi thi..."
Ridhimma smiled mischieviously to herself and making up a regretted tone said:"Woh kuch sunne tab na...aur waise bhi main usse kia samjhati jab mujhe khud kuch nahi pata tha..."
At that moment Ridhimma felt guilty for troubling her sister. Actually, Mayank had gone to Nupur's house just when Nupur had left for Shimla and when he knew about it, he definitely was angry with Nupur but then Ridhimma explained to him each and every possibility that might have resulted in Nupur leaving without letting him know about it and so things were settled then.
Ridhimma came out of her thought when she heard Nupur's tensed voice:"Ok...acha di...main...main tumse baad mein baat karti hoon..bye.."
Even before, Ridhimma could say anything, the line on the other side was dead. Ridz knew her sister was upset. She looked at the person sitting right in front of her and said:"Wo bechari pareshaan hogayi hai...sab tumhari waja se..Mayank tum bhi naa..."
Mayank got up and smiled. He said:"Acha aur tumhari bechari behen ne mujhe kuch nahi bataya uska kia?"
Ridhimma opened her mouth to protest but Mayank quickly said:"Usne bhi nahi bataya, main ne bhi nahi bataya...aur waise bhi tumne hi kaha tha na usse surprises bohat pasand hain.."
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Next day , Nupur got dressed up in a beautiful purple colour shalwar suit and taking her dupatta headed to the hall where her Bui was sitting with someone. She was all set to leave when Bui stopped her and said:"Arey Nupur...kahan jaa rahi ho..??"
Nupur turned around and said:"Bui...mujhe Samrat ko dhoondna hai naa?"
Bui:"Arey...wo sab baad mein...pehle tu us ladke se mil le.."
Nupur had that topic too many times and said in a bored tone:"Uff Bui...tum bhi naa...mujhe kisi ladke se nahi milna...tum kyun??"
Bui:"Arey...wo Mumbai se aaya hai...."
N:"Bui..tum toh aise keh rahi ho jaise Mumbai ka woh pehla ladka hai jo Shimla aaya hai..dekho Bui mujhe bohat late ho raha hai..."she took a look at her watch and started to move and said:"Mujhe jaana hai...bye...baad mein...bye.."
She had moved a few steps towards the door when a sudden feel stopped her. Something unusual......she knew this feeling...someone was around.....she turned around and what she couldn't have thanked her eyes enough for showing her the guy she so wished to see...her Mayank was there.......
Part ends....
Kaha tha naa?Love always finds its own way...
Do comment....
Kiran=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part dear.........
amazing............
thnx for the pm..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
*EDITED*

YAY!! M second...😉😆😆...

Hey Kiran 🤗

Yaar..where are you? ..its been so long... and now-a-days seems lyk u cum online rarely....

Anyways, the update was amazing as usual... but it was too short.....
Wohoo ..Mayank reached there ...i wonder if bui is asking Nupur to marry him... hehe......😉😆😆
wanna see Nupur's reaction.......☺️

Continue soon.. thanx 4 d pm ..

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Vini ❤️
Edited by coolvini4u - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part......mayank came to shimla ..m soo happy that every thin will be fine ...hopefully
update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
OKK great part...........but dont u think thoda chota tha bt its ok mast part tha issilye maaf kiya.............n thnx fr d pm aur jaldi update karna
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Kiran

lovely upd8

but short do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
try to update
longer part next time



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