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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks...glad u lyked it...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Hey it was nice update

Liked Nups straight behaviour
Mayu was confused was Funny😆
Evn the way he got lost in her was sweet😳
N the way Nups call him back was Funny😆
Mayu mujhe nahi pata toh ise kaise pata hoga was really good one😆
Liked sis Convo
But was senti at end
Plz write big update next tim
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Hi Afsha...
thanks alot...glad u lyked it...😳
awww....u c Nupur's presence cn make any situation hilarious...😆
yup!!will surely write a longer update nxt tym..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

nice update.......

loved it.......
nupur's professional behaviour was nice........
i wonder wat was that topic which nups and ridz were avoiding for past 5 years.....

hey Mahima..
thanx...glad u lyked it...😳
will b revealing da truth soon...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey..
nice ff...
pm me whn u update..
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanx alot preethi...so glad u lyked it..😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasnim2623

hey..

nice ff...
pm me whn u update..

hi...
welcum 2 my FF...
so glad u read it n lyked it...
will surely pm u wen i update nxt..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi there to all my readers...thank u so much for ur amazing comments...they really mean alot to me..🤗 Here for all of u-- Part 5: Ridhimma stood silently on the terrace looking at the sky....trying to loose herself in the endless darkness up there...
She had promised herself she wud never cry at this....she wud never recollect those painful moments of her past...bt tonight...tonight Nupur had reopened that chapter of her life which had changed Ridhimma's lyf forever...!!!
Her mind went bak 2 those moments of her past where she had spoken to him n seen his face for the last tym....
Ridhimma:"Kyun Armaan?Why did u do this?tumne...ye....."her voice n endless tears allowed her to speak no more...
Armaan tried to console her:"Look Ridhimma....I can explain...meri baat toh suno..."
Ridhimma screamed:"Bas!!!Bohat dekh lia....ab kuch nahi sunna....tumne ye sab..."
Armaan cudnt see those teary eyes...he went closer to her n cupped her face in his hands:"Nahi Ridhimma....jo tum dekh rahi ho wo sach nahi hai....u knw i cn never hurt u..."he whispered:"I love u...Ridhimma, main....main tumhari khushi k liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...par ye main ne nahi apni marzi se nahi kia....tum baat toh suno..."
Ridhimma looked up straight into his eyes...she stopped herself from crying n said:"Kuch bhi kar sakte ho naa mere liye?"
Armaan:"Tum keh k toh dekho..."and he meant it...
Ridhimma:"Toh theek hai...chale jao.....chale jao yahan se....meri zindagi se...hamesha k liye chale jao...."
Armaan was taken aback by those words....he loved her...he loved her alot n he knew she loved him too....how cud he jst do wat she said?he cudnt stay alive without her....he cud jst manage to whisper with tears in his eyes:"Ridhimma....please...please itni...itni bari saza mat do mujhe...main mar jaon ga tumhare bina...please..."and his voice died away....
Ridhimma:"Aur main?Aaj k baad main jab bhi tumhein dekhoongi..tumhara chehra mujhe is haadse ki yaad dilaayega....Armaan please....please go....just go!!!please meri zindagi ko itna mushkil mat banao......"
And jst then Armaan wiped his tears n said in a vry solemn tone:"Sach kia hai ye tum nahi jaanti...par aaj jo faisla tumne kia hai Ridhimma us k baad main ye dua karoonga k tumhein kabhi sach ka pata na chale....warna tum khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar pao gi..."and he left...
Ridhimma opened her eyes to find nothing bt loneliness in front of her....Armaan was da love of her life....theirs was a perfect love stry..bt that one day changed it all....she swallowed hard n tried hard not to think of her past bt cudnt help thinking abt those beautiful moments they once spent together....strangely those beautiful memories were nothing bt a painful past 4 her today...
once wen Ridhimma had faced a serious accident, and wen she met Armaan aftr her recovery, he had told her:"Tumhare saath hone ka ehsaas mujhe zindagi deta hai Ridhimma...tum ho toh meri saansein hain...warna...Armaan toh kuch bhi nahi...."She knew he meant it...his wrdz were so simple...yet so deep....
She fell to the ground n cried...cried aftr 5 long yrz....
Nupur saw her from behind n evn though she hated to see her sis crying...she had a smile on her face for finally Ridhimma had faced this past....!!!
Nupur said to herself:"Di....I m bound to a promise toh main aapko kuch nahi bata sakti....par kash Di...kash aap ek baar Armaan ki poori baat sun leti toh aaj aap ki zindagi aisi nahi hoti....kash..."
Nxt day:
Nupur reached office n da receptionist informed her dt Mayank wanted to c her in his office...she knocked at his door n went inside...
Mayank was standing near his table n reading a file...wen he heard the kock he kept da file down..his face lightened up wen he saw her...it seemed as if he hadnt seen her for quite smtym nw...Nupur walked towards him n before she cud say smth he said:"Nupur...aao....kitne tym baad mile hai na?"
Nupur frowned n said in a confused tone:"Mayank...kal hi toh mile the?"
Mayank then recollected wat he had jst said...Damn!!he was messing up...!!!
Mayank tried all ways to make up smth wen Nupur started:"U ok na?Koi problem hai kia?"
Mayank immediately looked at da file on his table...he picked it up n said:"Ye...ye hai problem..."
Nupur:"Huh?Kia?"
Mayank:"Nupur...ye ek construction site ka project hai...humein jald se jald is ka design tayaar kar k hamare client ko dekhaana hoga...aur problem ye hai k v need to make it quick...as in jst 2 days..!!Ye project hamari company ki goodwill k liye bohat important hai...bt its impossible within 2 days.."
Nupur smiled:"Its not!!"
Mayank said seriously:"Nupur main serious hoon...ek acha design aur do din mein sab finalize karna?!Ye sab mujhse nahi hoga!!"
Nupur:"Mujhse nahi...HUMSE..."
Mayank looked at her in amazement while she confidently explained:"Mayank...do din ki baat hai agar hum din raat ek kardein toh ho jayega...aur phir tum itna darr kyun rahe ho...tum par poora bharosa hai..."
Those few wrdz...dt glow in her eyes...gosh!!she was simply marvellous!!!Her few wrdz gave him all da confidence n energy n da two set to wrk to make IMPOSSIBLE---possible!!!!!!!
Part ends...
Comments please..😳
As I always say please leave a comment here n add me as ur buddy if u want to receive a pm nxt tym I update....😊
Cheers--Kiran=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey!!
yes.. im first to comment!! =D
lol..
but ya.. the part was awesome
nd AR story.. =(
so sad....
nd the mayur scene was fab..
do cont soon!!
HiNaL

Edited by basket_101 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
H kiran,
Nice update.
hehehehe mu mayur r awesome as usual.
looved it so much..
keep updating t
take care

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Posted: 15 years ago
awww.. that was such a good part, loved how Riddhima faced the past and i hope she does find out what was real truth and loved Nupur's confidence.. wow, please do continue soon!~

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