MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
part 1-

first of thx for the pm...........
your ff sounds very exciting.........
love mayur first meet............
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 2-

by god.........
love nupur's attitude......
mayank ke sawalaloon ka ji tod jawab.......
nupur rocks........
aab toh job deni hi padege........ lozzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 3-

fantastic job..............
aaj they were more interested in fight after their fall.........
liken jaldi puri duniya bhul jayege after their fall...........
once again thx for the pm........
plzz update soon...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey kiran..nice part..
Nupur came home but did'nt want to tell Riddhima about her interview..aww..
Riddhima opened the door n Mayank was there..he wanted to give the job to Nupur!..wow nice..Riddhima asked him to tell her himself..
he went to her room n then told her..she was shocked..n refused to come..n he threatned her..so she has to go i guess..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago

@MjhtFan_Mahima----thanx alot sweets...its so amazing 2 gt ur comments=)

@aish_punk-----hey aish!!thanx alot...glad u lyked it=)

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey kiran sweety

i just caught up with ur ff

haven't read ur other ff

but i can say ur an amzing writer

con't soon

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey everyone...

Thank u all for ur comments..
Before the update i need to tell u guys that the name of this FF if u see has been changed to:"Undefined Relationships--the eternal bond"
The simple reason behind is the track of the stry..
One mre thing....4m this part on the FF will hv sm seriousness included which is the main stry....😊
To get a little hint u cud go bak 2 pg-1 to read the character sketches=)
And nw 4 da update---
Part 4:

Nupur was truly in confusion all day long. She failed to understand why did Mayank appoint her inspite of the way she behaved with him..

Nxt day----

Nupur woke up early 4 she didnt want 2 b late 4 office....

In office, Mayank was eagerly waiting 4 his new employee. The girl who 4 the first tym had back-answered him. He cudnt explain to himself as to why had he appointed Nupur??She had misbehaved with him, she had insulted him in his own office n inspite of all this he had himself gone 2 her house 2 appoint her 4 da job!!!

Why was da question he didnt have an answer to!!!

Mayank:"Dude!!What's up?Why r u thinking of her?Bas kar yaar..!!"

Just then there was a knock at the door...

Mayank:"Come in!"

Nupur came in..she had a strange silence on her face..for a moment Mayank jst stared at her..n then Nupur:"Sir?"

When Mayank didnt come bak 4m his thoughts, she said it higher:"O hello!!So gaye kia?"

Mayank came back 2 reality n asked Nupur to settle down.

Mayank gave her a curious n cunning expression to which Nupur acted indifferently.

Mayank:"Toh kaam shuru karein?"

Nupur said it lower:"Jee mein toh aata hai is ka kaam yaheen tamaam kar doon..lekin......!!!!Bas yaar...ab is se face to face baat kar hi leti hoon!!"

Mayank:"Toh bolo na...main sun raha hoon!!"

Nupur looked at him shockingly bt then came straight 2 da point:"Problem kia hai tumhari?"

Mayank:"Kia?"

Nupur:"Dekho Mayank....mujhe pata hai k tumne mujhe ye job kyun di hai!!"

Mayank was stunned..he was afraid...did she knw abt it?bt then asked himself back again...what wud she know n how wud she know wen he himself had no idea as 2 why had he appointed her?

Nupur continued:"Badla lene k liye...hai na?"

Mayank:"Kia?"

Nupur:"Dekho Mayank tum..."

Mayank stopped her in between:"Nupur relax...aur koi baat ho na ho itna toh main surely keh sakta hoon k ye badla lene wali baat mere dimaag mein toh aayi hi nahi....aur raha sawaal tumhein job dene ka toh woh main..."he had 2 make up smth quickly:"Main ne...tumhein job tumhare...CONFIDENCE ko dekh kar di hai!!"

Nupur:"Look Mayank...let's make this vry clear....mujhe is job ki bohat zaroorat hai...for sm reasons i cannot share. Par main yahan kaam sirf tab tak karoongi jab tak tum professional raho ge?"

Mayank jst smiled:"Yup!!Acha ab kaam karein?"

Nupur finally smiled n said satisfied:"Haan..."

Gosh...she looks cute!!Mayank stared at her as if ds was one expression he had been longing 2 c...

Well...Mayank explained her the job she was supposed 2 do n da day went on pretty smooth.

At home---

Ridz n Noopz were having dinner n Ridz strtd da convo:

Ridz:"So?How was da first day?"

Noopz:"Gr8 Di....!!Itna bura nahi tha!"

Ridz:"Acha hai...waise bhi tujhe ye job atleast ek month tak toh karni hi hai...hai na?"

Noopz gave her an understanding look..she understood what she meant:"Pata hai Di...aaj uski bohat yaad aa rahi hai...aaj agar wo yahan hoti toh...!!!"

She then stopped n Ridz said:"Dnt wry honey!!abhi bhi tune kuch nahi khoya hai.."

Noopz:"Haan di...jo tumne khoya hai us k muqaable main ne toh kuch bhi nahi.."

Ridz cut her off:"Chal...i m sleepy...gud nite..!!"

Bt Nupur stopped her:"Di...!!!Tum kab tak ye sab ignore karo gi..huh?Tumhein pata hai k wo..."

Ridz interrupted her:"Bas!!!Mujhe kuch nahi sunna!!"
Nupur:"Sunna parega Di....!!Us sab mein us ki koi galati nahi thi...n u knw that...aur phir..."
Ridz had enough...tonight Nupur had picked up da topic da two sisters had been avoiding for FIVE LONG YEARS!!
Ridz replied angrily trying nt to show her tears:"Bas Nupur!!!Enuf is enuf!!Ab is topic par dobara baat nahi hogi!!"
And she left...Nupur sat down giving a sigh....!!!
Part Ends..
Comments please..
As I always say..please comment here n add me as ur buddy if u want 2 receive pmzz nxt tym i update=)
Cheers--Kiran😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hey kiran sweety

i just caught up with ur ff

haven't read ur other ff

but i can say ur an amzing writer

con't soon

-sanam-

Hey sanam...thank u so vry much 4 reading...😊
So glad u lyked it😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey kiran..nice part..
Mayank was waiting for Nupur..but he himself didn't know the reason why he appointed her!..lol..
She came in with a serious look..n she clarified everything with him..he agreed to what she said..thats nice...atleast she'll work here then..
Mayank found her really cute..aww..
n Nupur was talking about something..about someone..but who was she?..n what happened to Riddhima that she wants to avoid so mch..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago

totally loved it, but it was tooo small :(

agle baar laaamba update dena kiran :) 😳

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