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lol froggie that's scary..dammit...need to think :P
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hey amazing FF
do add me in ur pm list
Sumi
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aww thanks lina...lol and sure!!
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we do need to update dont we?
sumi think of something funny
ooo wait i think i know what our next os will be about :P
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lol alright these are all mine and Snehu's incomplete stuff :P

Ek tha ladka bara badmaash

Ek thi ladki bari hi natkat

ek ko pyaar ho gaya pheli mulakat mai

aur ek ko nafrat

Ladki baani emotions ki vicitm

Aur Ladka neh kiya emotions ka murder

Ladki nai soch revege lena

Ladka revenge main huva pagal

Dono lage revenge lena

Bhool gaye pyaar naam ki cheez

ek thi kismat sai meri pyaar main

aur ek ki kismat thi phuti pyaar main

par dono the pyaar mein

yeh alag baat hai ki sirf ek niya confess

waqt nai dono ki kismat badal di

ahista ahista ladka bhi deewana hua pyaar mai

par tab tak ladki chod chuki thi dewaangi

aur nikal chuki thi nafrat ki raah par

ladka nai kiya kiya papad beli pyaar kai chakkar mai

tubh ja kai maini ladki aur padhi uskai chakkar mai

par phir aaya ek aur mord

ladki ki papa nah kaha chohr

ladki nai saf saf kaha papa sai

shadi hogi to isse wara woh bhag jai gi iskke saath

par ladke ne kiya maana

kaha pehle maane ga baap phir hogi Shaadi

shaadi ki chakar mein ban gaya woh dewaane

cus sasurji to na maana

ek din us deewane yeh baat li thaani

keh woh larki se shaadi karke rahe ga

gaya woh seena thaan ki apne sasur keh paas

wahan joh dekha...gave him the shock of his life

sasur tha tayar shaadi keh liya

par Naina aur Mac ki

Naina ne dekha Yuvi ko

Tohda gusse seh

Par yuvi pyaar se

Papa ko manaya ladke ne pyaar se

Aur end meh ladki to mile ladke ko

Aur third wheel ko mili....azaadi

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Dil Mil Gaye

Didn't I tell to let me handle my work?

But I was just trying to help

That's what you said last night too and you burned the entire dinner

But...but you are pregnant Msukaan and I don't want to stress yourself out

Oye kankhajure tu muhje se door reh and I won't get stressed out saying that Muskaan left

Meet Dr. Rahul Gerwal, Senior doctor at Patiala, Sanjeevani. He's married to Muskaan who

Is also a senior doctor at Sanjeevani. They were in charge of the 5 new interns, who recently started their internship in Sanjeevani.

"I can't believe that Dr. Shashank has asked ME to move out" this was the fifth time Naina was repeating the same sentence in the last 75 seconds...according to her boyfriend's watch.

"Naina...I know you've been kicked out...we'll find a solution alright?" Yuvi hoped that this would get her to stop but who was he kidding.

Meet Dr. Yuvraaj Singh, he came to Sanjeevani to take revenge from Dr. Shashank and now was the favourite of the same doctor. And his girlfriend...Dr. Naina Mehta...who was still whining about being kicked out of the house.

"Tamana, are you sad that your parents are moving to their village?" Sid blocked Tamana...his girlfriend's way.

"Sid...why do you keep asking me the same question? Yes, I am sad!" Tamana couldn't keep her anger at check...she was upset because of her parents' sudden decision to move and now Sid was eating her mind up.

Meet Dr. Siddhant Modi...Houston return...idiot...who by the way is one of the best interns at Sanjeevani. And his girlfriend...Dr. Tamana Patil...a daughter of a sweeper who was now one of the budding interns.

Dr. Rahul, are you ok? asked Sid worried after he saw how tired Rahul looked

*sigh* yes I am. Let me give you an advice Sid, never ever get married

Date all you want but no marriage. Its gives to nothing but headache

I never plan to get married; I love my freedom too much to give that up

On the other hand Muskaan was driving everyone nuts because of her mood swings

Dr. Yuvraaj, don't you have a girlfriend? Why are you flirting with another girl?

Yuvi just stares at her

Quit giving me that look you idiot. I am not scared of you she said hitting him, wait till I tell

Naina about this

In the Cafeteria

"Doctor Rahul!"

Rahul turned around to see Yuvi approaching him with his trademark angry expression...

"Yuvi...what's wrong?"

"Dr. Rahul...I sincerely hope that your wife is still alive to give birth to your child...in few days!"

"What are you talking about Yuvi?"

"If Naina breaks up with me...I am going to burn down this hospital with your wife in it!"

Saying that Yuvi walked away...before Rahul could think through what he just heard...he saw Sid approaching him with a confused expression.

"Everything okay, Sid?"

"I am not sure!" Sid scratched his head in confusion

What's wrong?

I don't really know. Tamana just broke up with me for some reason

And Naina is after my life because I made Tamana cry

But why did you break up with Tamana. I though you loved her

So did I but then she said something about me not marrying her – though I

Wonder where she found that out from said Sid confusedly

I think I know, it's probably Muskaan...damn that woman will drive me crazy

If only she was not pregnant I would –

You would what Rahul? Beat me? Kill me? Divorce me? Said Muskaan crying all of a sudden

By that time all the interns were there and watching the entire show

"Muski, listen to me!!" Rahul tried to approach a violent looking Muski...when...

Thud

"Oh damn! That's got to hurt!" Sid covered his face with his hand...when he saw Rahul yelling in pain because Muskaan hit him where she shouldn't have

"Dr. Muskaan...."Naina approached Muskaan carefully

"Naina...remember my words...don't ever let these men take advantage of you! Especially if they are guys like them!" Muskaan pointed at all the guys standing in the cafeteria

"Yuvi...what is she saying?" Sid whispered in Yuvi's ear...who just gave him a side-annoyed look and walked away...well dragging Naina with him of course

"Yuvi and Naina are gone! What are you waiting for Dr. Sidhaant!" Muskaan yelled at a confused Sid

Hearing her yelled Sid ran away until he realised that he left Tamana behind. However he was too scared to go back so he called her up and told her to meet him outside the cafeteria

Anyone else wants to get kicked by me yelled Muskaan and the people in the cafeteria disappeared in a wink of an eye. Rahul tired to run away but it was impossible since he was on the ground crouched up

Yuvi and Naina

Stop dragging me Yuvi!

Did you see the way she kicked him?! I mean he is her husband for god sake!!

But its Muskaan we are talking about her Yuvi, you know how she can be at times

And besides she is pregnant right now so she is emotional and has mood swings! Naina tried to explain it to Yuvi who was pretty shock after seeing Muskaan react that way

Fine, she can do whatever she wants with him but what about me? She said I was flirting with a girl?

You WHAT?!!!! Damn you Yuvi maybe I should have asked her to kick you as well or better yet maybe I should do it myself

Yuvi who had never seen Naina so aggressive before started to run before he becomes the victim of her kick

Don't you dare run away from me said Naina as she chased after him to kick him

On the other hand Tamana was furious at Sid

What is wrong with you idiot? You think I am your toy? Jab chaha tab khela aur jab chaha tum chod diya

Yelled the ever so clam Tamana. She went on and on for good 15 minutes before Sid though that he had

enough of this and decided to run away.

Tamana who was shock at this ran after him only to see him get on a bike with Yuvi. Both of them left

saanjenvi in the middle of their shift.

Damn you Sid...wait till I get my hands on you! Though Tamana

Why did Sid ran way with Yuvi? Tamana did you guys fight? Inquired Naina

I broke up with that idiot because he is not serious about me! Wait till I get my hands on him. I will rip him apart Tamana said furiously

Yeh saare ladkai ek se hi hote hai. That dafford is cheating on me! We have to do something about this Tamana. We can't just sit still and do nothing

I agree par kare to kiya kare?

JP was listening to all this decided that it was time he helped his flowerjis. Maybe one of them mite fall for him for helping them out he thought dreamily

Waise flowerji mere pas ek idea hai, if you don't mind, I know of a way to torture Yuvi and Sid

Both Tamana and Naina eyed him suspiciously.

I thought you were on their side said Naina

Yea why would you want to help us asked Tamana still suspecting that he was up to something fishy

Hehe I am always on your side flowerji, mugal sari ki kasam

Hmm fine then tell us how to make them

Well we have a vacancy in our building, actually right next to us. Why don't you move in there Naina flowerji. Isse bahane aap ko rehne ka liya jagah bhi mile jay gi aur aap bade bhaiyya to torture bhi kar sako ge...ek tir do nishane he told them excitedly

Actually Naina thats not a bad idea. I can move in with you as well since I live by myself and not only will you get a roomi I will also get to kill Sid

Alright guys, then its decided. Tamana and I will move next to you guys however don't let the boys know about this plan.

Meanwhile at Yuvi's house

"Dude, please let me stay at your house!" Sid got down on his knees in front of Yuvi

"Get out of my house!" Yuvi tried to struggle get out of Sid's way

"You can't do this to me!!"

"Yes, I can!"

"No, you can!"

"Yes, I can't!"

"That's what I am saying that you can't" Sid got up from his knees and gave Yuvi his best victory smile...which Yuvi thought was pretty idiotic.

"Sid...I am not allowed to have another PG here!"

"So what?"

"What do you mean by so what?"

I am already living with JP and Jiggy as it is-

And now you will have an additional member –no big deal said Sid hugging Yuvi and moving in his stuff at Yuvi's place

Whatever, if I get kicked out because of you then I will make sure you no girl ever looks at you

But-

Oh and there are rules that you have to follow if you live here. You have to make breakfast, clean the house, do the laundries, dishes, vacuum oh and most importantly pay rent

I will do anything thing as long as I get to stay here...it's better than living on the streets

Hospital

Everyone was busying with their cases or surgeries. Muskaan was pretty normal and was making her rounds. Making sure everyone were doing what they were supposed to do.

Dr. Naina, can you please inform others that Rahul has taken leave due to personal injury and won't be coming to working for couple of days Muskaan told Naina

Sure maam

By the way where are the other two interns? Muakaan asked as she could not find them when she was making her rounds.

Now is my chance to rat them out and take my revenge on Yuvi and who know maybe they will be forced to do rectal as punishment thought Naina slyly.

By the reception

"Hopefully, it's Dr. Rahul who gives us the duty today!" Sid called out to a disappearing figure of Yuvi. "What's with this guy?"

"Dr. Siddhant, Dr. Rahul is not in today because of personal injuries!" the nurse informed Sid

"Personal injuries? Damn was the kick that hard" Sid scratched his head in confusion as he walked toward the meeting area

Back to Muskaan's Cabin

"I asked where are the other two interns?"

"Um...Maam...they are..."

"Sorry Maam!" Yuvi entered the cabin

"Is this the time to come? Do you want to be sent home like Dr. Rahul?" Yuvi looked at Muskaan in confusion while the others in the room tried to stifle their laughter.

Before Muskaan could say anything else...Sid entered the cabin...still scratching his head

"Dr. Siddhant! You're late!"

"Sorry Maam...was the kick that hard?" Sid bit his lips as soon as the words came out

Would like to know how hard that was Mr. Modi? Do you want me to demonstrate in on you? Muskaan asked him sternly while others snickered in the background

No maan he said backing way sacredly

Anyways if either one of you she said look at Yuvi and Sid are late next time then you can say bye to your job. Don't look so relieved Dr. Sid. Both of you will get punishment for being late. Rectasl for the one week

WHATTTT

But maam –

Two week

But –

Before Sid could protest Yuvi nudged him

You may all resume your duties

As soon as they got out the girls and JP ended up laughing and making fun.

Rect...you ...guys...Naina was laughing so hard that she couldn't even complete the sentence

Yuvi just dragged Naina away from there and who was still laughing the entire way until he cornered her in the fire-escape

Realising where she was she stopped laughing at looked at him

Why did you bring me here? she asked him feeling uncomfortable because of his closeness

See this, Yuvi got more and more close to her until his face was only an inch apart from Naina

"I can't think of anyone beside you...ever!" Yuvi whispered in her ears...which made Naina look up to him as a shiver ran down her body

"Yuvi...."

"I love you!"

Naina gave Yuvi a small smile...

"So you promise you weren't flirting with that girl?"

"Do you trust me?"

"Should I trust you?"

"It's your call!"

"I love you!"

"I know but a relationship without trust is a ship without enough lifeboats...like Titanic"

Naina didn't know what to say to that...so she did what she could best do...laugh

"You...you...gave...Titanic...no..."

In the Library

"I am sorry!"

"Sid...please!"

"I love you!"

"That's not enough!"

"What is?"

"Commitment !"

"I am ready for it!" Tamana looked up from her file

"You're ready for our marriage?"

"Marriage? But you said commitment!" Sid gave his trademark confused look which made Tamana snap shut her file in frustration

Fire Escape

"Naina...stop laughing!"

"But...Yuvi!" Naina continued to laugh...which further frustrated Yuvi

Yuvi let go of Naina and huffed away in anger out of the fire escape...leaving behind a now stopped laughing Naina

Library

What does marriage have to do with commitment he asked her getting more confused

Everything

But isn't being in a relationship a commitment in itself?

But don't you want to turn this relationship in marriage?

But I am still young, I can't think of about marriage for another 10 years!

On the other hand Naina was trying to make Yuvi talk to her again but he was being adamant

If you don't talk to me Yuvi then I will...

You will what?

I will...will go on a date with Mac

Fine by me, see if I care!

Fine then, Don't. Oh and don't come chasing after me or interrupt my evening with him

She said leaving him alone

Dam, I hope she doesn't really go on a date with him he said to himself

At RM's home

"Gosh...why does it hurt so much? I mean I have been kicked before!"

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lol something else - random

After the fire incident relationship between Yuvi and Naina changed completely. Yuvi wanted to explain things to Naina, to talk to her about the whole incident but Naina was not giving him any chance of it. He felt guilty for using her when she was the only person who truly cared and loved him for who he was, the only person who was there for him when he thought he was all alone in this cruel world. And yet he ended up betraying her. She was the last person he wanted to hurt but he still did. Since he made this mistake he will be the one who will fix it. He will make her trust him again and hopefully love him too.

Besides Naina there were only two other people in his life he could count on for anything thing – Mac and Raj. His two best friend, who were there for him when his world of happiness collapsed.

The day he found out that his old life had just been based on lies...he felt himself crashing into an unknown world. His friends were there to support him...well Raj and Mac were but his fellow interns left him as well. In a way it was the right thing...Naina needed them more than I needed them...but did I really deserve all this?

What I went through...no one would be able to understand...but I was expecting Naina to react like this...I wish she hadn't...I wish that she understood me...I wish...

"He's been like this all month...do you think it's time we make things right?"

"I don't think anything we do will help him...this is his life...we shouldn't interfere!"

"But Mac...we can't just leave him like this...he is...he is slowly dying from the inside!"

"Raj...I know that...but...I've met Naina...she is not an easy girl!"

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Fight in Love

This is a story of two couples...totally different from each other but almost the same. They never saw each other before but in the next couple of days, they will teach other the best of life and love. Oh...here comes our first couple...Yuvi aka Dr. Yuvraaj Singh and the girl with him...in the car...well she is semi-ex-girl friend...confused...so are we! Her name is Naina...Dr. Naina Mehta. These two are two of the best interns at Sanjeevani Mumbai and that's why they have been sent here....Gurushala. Well, why don't we go and see what they are talking...sorry arguing about now.

"Who gave you the license to drive this car? Can't you speed up?" Naina gave Yuvi her best angry woman look.

"Why? So we can go hit something? I knew from day 1 at Sanjeevani...you've had a death wish but not me!" Yuvi briefly looked at Naina before turning his attention back to the road.

"I knew you liked me from day one..."

"Like? Ha! More like saving you!"

Okay enough about these two. Let go meet the other two couple - Dr. Rahul and Dr. Msukaan from Sanjeevani, Patiala.

"Oye kankajuree... ulle ke pathe you stay away from me", yelled Dr. Muskaan

"You think I wanted to come here with you?" secretly Rahul did want to come here with Muskaan but he would never admit that to her.

Now that you have met both our couples...or shall we see madly in love couples...we shall move back in time and tell you a bit about them. Rahul and Muskaan met when they were kids....parents wanted them to get married...they didn't...went to different colleges...met again while doing their internship. Now that's where their real story started...they play acted to be husband and wife for individual gains...and then came the unfaithful day when they were force to separate. After the separation...or rather they admitted it after it...they were in love with each other. Before they could get together...Rahul left...leaving Muskaan heartbroken...he came back but nothing was the same ever again.

While our second couple...the new interns of Sanjeevani...Yuvi and Naina...met on the first day of their internship...got into petty fights...nothing major or violent like our other Punjabi duo. Common element in both stories...there was play acting in this story as well...but only from one side. Yuvi, for revenge purposes, pretended to like Naina...not love mind you but like. Though, Naina fell in love and did she fall hard or what. Revenge finished...so did their relationship...leaving both of them pinning for each other.

So finally Yuvi and Naina reached Gurushala and meets the other two

N: hi I am Naina and this is dafford she said pointing to Yuvi

Y: *rolls eye* Ignore her, I am Yuvraaj

R: Rahul and this is...

M: oye ullu ke pathai who told you to introduce me?

R: hey I was just trying to be nice

M: nice? Ha! Yea just like when you decided to leave me because it was for my own good or the time you decided to pretend to be husband and wife...

R: but you agreed to it as well. You can't put the blame on me

Naina and Yuvraaj continued to look back and forth as if they were watching a tennis match

"They are worse than us!" Naina whispered to Yuvi and looked at him.

Yuvi just rolled his eyes again and left the scene…

"Ugh…that dafford is never going to change!" Naina did not realize that she yelled that at the top of her voice…but it at least made Rahul and Muskaan shut up.

"Um…sorry…continue please!" Naina quickly left the scene…and as soon as she left the duo started to fight again.

By Naina's room door

"Are you hungry?"

Naina turned around to see Yuvi standing a few feet from her holding out a plate…

"Um…it's okay! You can eat!" Naina went back to trying to open the door.

"Need some help?"

Without waiting for an answer Yuvi took the key from Naina's hand and opened the door for her.

"Thanks!"

"Anytime!"

Saying that Yuvi walked away…but not without leaving the plate by the window...

Meanwhile in the world of Rahul and Muskaan

"I told you bhai saab, we are not married!!" Muskaan was starting to get really frustrated with the event coordinator who kept on insisting that she was married to Rahul.

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Awesome......all of them.....the song.......those shots.......everything is superb! I just loved reading them.....continue them guys......lolz.....end them in a proper way......am curious to know what happened after that.......my deadly combo.....do it! :P
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WOW! nice work guys..i've read Sumi's Yuna journey...if only there was a happy ending 😭 but i can live with it
getting late for school...will revisit this place and read all of ur awesome one shots
tc..Miya-

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