Mayur FF - It had to be you-Ch 14 (Last prt)-Pg 67 - Page 33

hey!!
great part!!
loved nupur and mayank scenes...
esp the waking up scene.. lol
=P
nd also the ending...
realyl nice...
=D
do cont soon
HiNaL

updated my comments on previous page....

hey aparjita,

Man i lovedddddddddddddd this part beginning from the morning parts hehe, i was laughing like anything and equally embarrased as nupur, man i also have a list of embarrasments, man i have got way toooooo many of them.

The best part about them is that they make me laugh sooooo much when i remember them sometimes later but alas i never learn and do go through the same ones again.

i loveddddddddddddddd the MN and later shilpa and Nupur's scene. The trio were rocking,

awwwww that towel bit reminded me of khuda jaane, like parts post that song, awwwwwwwww that was soooooooo sweet.

You are an amazinggggggggg writer and indeed you have put foward a very strong script only if the MJHT writers could write so sensibly man, the show would have been on the top.

Continue soon man.

Hugssssssssss.

awesome update

Amazing update...... worth the wait.......Loved it 👏........ please do continue soon....... 😊

Thank God.. U updated... I thought u had forgotten abt this love of mine for this FF.. How beautiful it was... GOD Save me from Mayur... and the head massage... it feels so lovely and full of warmth when the person you love gives you a nice message.. Damn romantic.. and the coffee with French Toast... delicious combo.... And Shilpa Aunty.. Shez the best Mom!!!

Lovely update Appu........ :))

Made me so so so happy...............

It so 2 cute............the whole ruffling of hair, cooking and all.............

and really hope her dreams come true one day.............

Update sooner

Thnx 4 the update buddy.........it was awsm nd too cute............plz update sooner

awesome appu ...

i would love to see more of mayu and shilpu aunty scenes