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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
hiii

Hiiiiiiii my loveable jaanus. M finally back with my new update.
Its been 2 months 21 days since last time i have made a post in this SS.
Really so sorry for this long delay. Dil se Sorry ! Dunia mein jint esorry sab Sorry !!
Ok bahut ho gayi dialogue baazi.

Ab meri matao aur behano plzzzzz apne pyaare se sandals mat uthana, mujhe mera chehra bahut pasand hain. Ande, tamatar bhi nahi.
haan, gaaliya deni hain to de dena. Khushi khushi accpet kar lungi.

Chalo i will stop my bak bak here and u all read the update.
n plzzzzzzz reply back n leave ur comments.

We all know that how difficult time we are going through in the serial now.
so something interesting to cheer u up.
Waise bhi Benia ko to gayab kar hi rahe hain to maine socha ki kyun na main apne SS se logo ko to khush karne ki koshish karu???

i hope u will like it.
please let me know

loads of love
vinu






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SA - ok beta. tumhari marzi. Waise tum abhi bahut acha session miss karne waale ho.

CJ - session??? Kaisa session aunty???

Everyone in chorus - Teasing Session !!!

CJ - No problem guys !! Meri taraf se bhi tum log hi tease kar lena. Aur waise bhi kal college to aa hi rahe hai na??? & se winked at Benia. & Benia........Ok guys byee

Everyone: Byeeee

SA - Chalo bacho tum log enjoy karo main chalti hun apne room mein aaram karne.

Dia ' Arre nahi aunty. Aap bethiye na.

SA ' Dia ! bacho jaisi baatein mat karo beta. Main andar aaram karne ja rahi hun. Tum log enjoy karo. Hmm

D ' actually aunty, hum log to abhi jaane hi waale hai. Kaafi der ho chuki hai na?

N ' arre itni bhi jaldi kya hai Dia?? Abhi to baatein bas shuru hi hui hain. Hain na maa????

SA ' haan bilkul. Aur waise bhi main budhi aurat is young generation ke beech mein bethke badi bore ho jaungi. Isilie main chali apne room

M ' maaa............ kuch zyada hi filmi nahi ho gaya???

SA ' kya karun beta??? Aas paas sab filmygiri hi to chalti rahti hai. Kyun nupur??? Kyun suhani???

N n Su ' bilkul maa/aunty.

SA ' Chalo. Good night bacho. Tum log yaha aaye mujhe bahut khushi hui aur hamesha aate rahna. She goes near Benji n Dia n keeps her palm on Dia's cheek but addresses both of them. Aur tum dono hamesha khush rahna. Ab kisi se bhi darne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Aur Benji, mere mayu ki tarah Dia se ladna nahi.

M ' maaaaaa.......????

SA ' hehe. Aur agar lad bhi lia na to use pyar se mana bhi lena mere Mayu ki tarah. Ab khush Mayu???

M ' haa. Par maa please Mayuu to mat bulao.

SA ' kyu na bulao?? Yeh mera janamsiddh adhikaar hai. Aur tum yeh adhikaar mujhse nahi cheen sakte Mr. Mayank Sharma. Everyone smiles at the mother-son duo. No one knew and neither imagined that the akdu, sadu mayank has such a cool and outgoing maa.

M ' Ammmm...maa aapko aaram karna tha na???? Smiles wickedly

SA ' acha acha ja rahi hun. Aise muskuraane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Aur tum sablog aate rahna. Good night

Everyone ' good night aunty/ maa n she enters her room.

Now everyone moves their attention towards Benia. Dia had an idea that this was going to be tough now. Earlier it was she who used to tease people. Be it Sajan, Mayur or Adhiani. But today she was the victim of all this teasing. Of course along with her Benji. Btw, i should tell u all one secret that after coming in relationship with Benji, she has always wishes for such a day where she would be the centre of attraction n everyone will tease her n benji n will actually ask both of them about their journey. Anyway,....Dia was internally very happy but nervous also. What sort of questions they will be asking? Pata nahi.

For a change boys dragged Dia to their side and girls dragged Benji. What else can be expected now? Total dhamaal n lots of masti. This dragging thing was totally unexpected and Benji-Dia were very surprised but a more surprising act was done by Mr. Mayank Sharma who initiated the teasing session n can u imagine his 1st question to Dia????...........

M ' Dia??? Sabse pehle kisne kisko propose kiya??

S ' Arre waah dude ! Tum to hum se bhi zyada utawale lag rahe ho !

M ' Shut up Samrat ! Bolo na Dia???

D ' Exactly Mayank. Sammy is right. Tumhe kabse in sab cheeso mein interest aa gaya???

M ' Jab se aap meri saali sahiba bani hai Miss Diya Bhushan ! Aur jijaji hone ke naate mera itna to haq banta hain na jaanne ka ki meri saali ji ki lovestory kaise shuru hui thi???

S, A & U ' ohhhhhhhhhhhh..........nice dude !

D ' blushes

Now coming to the girls side n who else can we expect to take the initiation....???? of course, hamari Jhansi ki rani Nupur kumari.

N ' Mr.Ben....

B ' jiiii?????

N ' aap to bade chupe rustam nikale. Pyaar bhi ho gaya, ikraar bhi ho gaya aur humein khabar tak nahi. Waah miya !!

Su ' Exactly Nupur ! Benji, tum humse yeh baat kaise chipa sakte ho? Aur waise bhi humein pata hota to hum pehle hi Dia ko warn kar dete ki, "Sambhalkar Dia. Benji se door hi rahna". Giggling icon

B ' arggggggghhhh......

G ' Suhani??? Aur dii tum bhi??? Aise nahi kahte. Benji, tum in dono ki baton mein mat aao.

B ' feels proud of Gunjan and says, "dekha??? Gunjan hi meri true friend hai. Jo mujhe ache se samjhti hai".

G ' Bilkul Benji. Yeh log aise hi hain. Lekin tum mujhe to bata sakte the na? Main to tumhari 2nd best friend hoon na? Tum mujhe bata dete to main Dia se kah deti, "Dia, zara Benji se bachke rahna. Kuch aisa waisa na kahde".

And she starts smiling n Suhani, Nupur can't control their laugh.

B ' Haaaaawwwwww...Gunjan tum bhi??? Ahhh ahhh ahhh !! in his nautanki style, keeping 1 hand on his forehead, closed eyes n facing other side, "Dost dost na raha !"😭😭😭(imagine this dialogue in typical Benji style, hehe)

G ' She holds her ears n makes a cute puppy face. "sorry!!"

B ' seeing her like this how long can he not forgive her? Afterall she is his 2nd best friend. "Jao !! Benji ne tumhe maaf kiya".

N ' Lekin humne nahi Mr. Benji.

Coming back to boys' side. Adhiraj was searching for something. In his pocket, in Dia's hands, her purse, behind Samrat and everywhere. Others got confused for what he was searching for???

U ' Adhiraj????? Kuch dhund rahe ho kya??

A ' haan dude!! Woh main.......Dia ka chashma dhundh raha tha.

D ' Chashma??? Par Adhiraaj, main to chashma nahi pehanti.

A ' Ohhh right !! Exactly ! tabhi to......

M/S ' tabhi to Kya???

A ' tabhi to tumne Benji ko pasand kiya.

D ' Adhiraajjjj!!! Not fair..

U ' Dude !! mere saamne meri hi deedz ki tang khichayi kar rahe ho????

A ' Acha??? Jab Mayank teri deedz ki taang khichayi kar raha tha tab to tera mooh bada band tha.

U ' haan ! janta hun. Lekin ek baar ke liye kaafi hota hain. Hain na deedz?????

But his deedz' attention was somewhere else. When this little tom n jerry fight of Adhiraj n Uday was going on, Dia got a golden opportunity to take a glance at Benji, who himself was struggling to get out of the volcano. Poor guy !! Dia was trying her best to get attention of Benji. She so much wanted Benji right now at her side. Finally they were free birds now, were together forever and these ppl were having fun with them. Bad luck !! Very Very bad luck !! Damn their friends!!

Her curious n not so patience looks were noticed by Samrat, Mayank, Uday n Adhiraj. All 4 decided not to waste this precious moment. At that very moment Uday found his deedz very cute, like a small 5 yr old kid who was searching for her favourite doll. So he took his cell phone n clicked her deedz' pic n showed to Samrat. Sammy being Candy's Sammy had something else in his mind. He directly attacked her. He started roaming around her, observing her expressions, giving a wicked smile and was doing his little nautanki act and of course others were no less in the race. Today everyone were displaying their nautankigiri.

S ' Waah Waah !! Waah Waah !! Kya baat hain Candy !! Khadi ho hamare saath par poooooora dhyan hai Benji ke upar. Waah waah ! waah waah !! Not fair Candy !!

M ' Exactly Dia ! Tum to humein bhool hi gayi. Ab Benji kya aa gaya tumne to mooh hi pher liya. Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!

A - Yeh dekhne se pehle meri aankhein kyun nahi phut gayi???? Haay !!

D - Guuuuuyyyyssss !! Please. Aise mat chidhao.

U - Kyun deedz?? Tumhe sharam aa rahi hain kya??? Dia's mouth left open. But Uday was right. After 10 secs she again started blushing. Awwwwwwwww my Diva doll!! So sweet n cute. Her cheeks' tomato red colour were giving a tough competition to her outfit.

Coming to girls' side.

B - What do u mean by "humne nahi???"

N - Well Mr. Bennnji !! Ham sabko itni der se batane ki sazaa to milni hi chahiye na?? Aise kaise hum tumhe aur Dia ko asaani se maaf kardein?? While saying this she dragged Benji to boys' side n made him stand beside Dia.

Awwwwwwwww.....Ab lag rahe hain na Kamaal ki Jodi!!! Kyun samrat??? Theek kahaa na???

S - Bilkul Nupur ji !! Humse itne dino, na na na, mahino tak chupake rakha to achi khaasi punishment to milni hi chahiye.

SU - Ab hum tumhare dost hain. To hamara to poora poora haq banta hain na tumhe sazaa dene ka???

B n D - Sazaa???

N, SU, G - Yes!!! Sazaa.

M - Hmm.....Ab sochne ki baat yeh hain ki sazaa de to kya de??? N everyone starts thinking. Here Dia was getting nervous second by second. Though Benji was not showing any frown but he was also a bit tensed. Normally in such situations punishment is like doing something practical in front of others. Like proposing, saying ILU, or dancing, etc.. And these two were sensing that they may punish them in these ways. God!!! Please them.

U - haaan !!! mujhe mil gaya idea. Hum deedz aur Benji ko dance karne kahte hain.

B - (in his mind) phewww!! Aaj pehli baar Uday ka deemaag chala. Dance is ok. Right Dia???

D - (also in her mind. Well she kinda understood Benji's expressions n feelings) ' Absolutely!! Dance is wayyyyy ok. But poor guys !! Who the hell will accept Uday's idea??

SU -Nahi !! kuch aur. Kuch damdaar !!

A - Kuch jaandaar !!

M - Nice dude !!

G - Mujhe pata hain inse kya karvana chahiye???

S - Kya Chashmish???

G - Benji ko..... abhi isi waqt....... hamare saamne....... Dia ko.......

B - Dia ko????(oh god! Please mujhe bachalo!!! Plz plz plz plzzzz!!)


G - Dia ko propose karna hoga....


S - Arre waah Chashmish !! Not bad !


B & D - Kya????? Propose???


B - No way!! Main aisa kuch nahi karne waala. Samjhe tum log??


U - To theek hain. Tum raho yahin pe hum Deedz ko apne saath ghar le jayenge. Hain na Gunjan???


G - Haan Uday bhaiya !! Bilkul! Aur Dia yaha nahi rahegi to Benji bhi yahaa ruk ke kya karega? Kyun Benji???


SU - haan ! Aur waise bhi Benji ko to jaldi ghar jaane ki thi na?


A - Exactly !! Benji?? Tum jao apne ghar. Theek hain?


Ahaaaaa!! This is what they call a smart card. They all knew very well that this was the most crucial time when Benji & Dia needed some time alone. Bechare, abhi abhi, infact aaj hi to real sense mein free lovebirds bane hain. But afterall friends are friends and if they don't have some fun with them how can they easily let them go? They never got such a golden opportunity in case of Benji and Dia. That's y they wanted some fun.

Benji's POV:-

God damn these friends of mine. Why i didn't realize they are n were always much more sharp minded than me. Kitni achi chaal chali hain. Ab kya karu?? Mujhe to Dia ke saath time specd karna tha. N i m sure they will not let us free this easily. Kya karu?? Idea........


B - Waise sorry guys! Agar main karna chahu na to bhi main abhi propose nahi kar sakta.


M - Kyun??? Abhi propose karne mein kya problem hain?


B - woh kya hain na ki Dia ko yeh sab publically pasand nahi. Isiliye.


D - ammm haan ! Benji theek kah raha hain. (thank u so much benji dear 😳)


G, N n SU - Ohhhhhhh!!


SU - Haan bhai! Ab to jo Benji kahein wahi Dia ke liye sahi hoga. Hain na Dia????


A - lekin tum dono bahut badi cheating kar rahe ho, huh....


Benji-Dia thought that they had an easy escape but how can they forget that these people have done PhD in Dramebaazi. Itni aasaani se thodi na jaane denge. Samrat starts his drama engine and everyone becomes his boogies.


S - (in his nautanki way) lekin Candy, tum logo ki is baat se humein bahut hurt hua. Tum logo ne humein public bana diya??? Huaaaaaaaaaa 😭😭 n keeps his hand on his forehead.


N - (she stands beside Samrat in the same posture as Samrat). Bilkul theek kaha Samrat tumne. In dono ne......in dono ne......humein ek hi pal mein paraya kar diya. Hey bhagwaan! Yeh tune kya kar diya???? And starts fake crying.


M - (ab yeh mahashay kyun piche thehre??? His posture was something like this. Both hands on his ears, facing above as if praying to the god n eyes closed. Ab in bhaisaab ne kya kiya???) Nahiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!(everyone is shocked by his nahiiiiiiiiiiii) Hey bhagwaan ! yeh sunne se pehle tune mujhe utha kyun nahi lia??? (everyone starts laughing silently. Nautanki kahin ke!! hehe)


Uday was not that much enjoying this as he was feeling sad for his deedz but then he too changed his mind n joined the train. Ab thodi na baar baar mauka milta hain apni deedz ko chidane ka!


U - Deedz!! Tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho? Hamare saath itni badi naainsaafi kaise kar sakti ho??? He makes a cute little puppy face. You can imagine how cute he looks in a puppy face. Deedz. Tumne apne dodo ko bhi paraya bana dia???.......jao main tumse baat nahi karta n faces opposite direction.

Awwwwwwwww !! Poor Benji-Dia. Again lost the game. It is so strange to know this that so far Benji-Dia were hesitating to accept their challenge. They even don't know why??ab friends ke saamne kya sharmaana na? But it was because of Uday that Dia changed her mind and signalled Benji too to change his mind and not let him down, not let them down.

Recently Dia has developed so much love and care for her dodo that she can never see him sad. Even his fake sadness melts her heart. So what Benji decided was that he will not propose Dia in front of them but he will be just romantic and will say i love u. That's it! Nothing else. Because proposal is a very big thing n he always wanted to propose her in a very special way. The way she loves to have her 1st ever proper proposal. In this way, Dia will not feel bad, their friends will also be satisfied and he doesn't have to miss the opportunity of proposing her in a special way.



B - ammmm....theek hain. Ab tum log itne hi desperate ho to hum log bhi kaise mana kar sakte hain? Jao ! tum sabko baksh diya !


N - Benji??? Ehsaan kar rahe ho kya???


B - of course miss Morena Express ! Ab dekhna hain ki nahi? Warna hum to chale.


S - Arre nahi nahi nahi ! Humein dekhna hain ki tum dono tumhara punishment kitni bahkhoobi se nibhaate ho.


They all decided to go to the garden.

In the garden – all have taken their seats and left the centre for Benji-Dia.

Benji-Dia are staring at each other. Lost in each other. Very close to each other. With the continuous gaze of Benji a small blush was creeping her cheeks. She was feeling too shy to directly look into his eyes. She dropped her eyes down n started playing with the hem of her duppatta. Benji was so much enjoying this moment. For the past few days he had been noticing that she was blushing alot these days and fortunately he never missed a single blush of her. But this blush was something different. Something new, something refreshing, something more beautiful. He was not getting what it was. He slowly tilted his head to his right to get a better view of her tomato red blushing face.

B - Dia ???


D - Haan....


B - Ek baat poochu??


D - haan. Poocho.


B - Tum aajkal itna kyun sharma rahi ho???


D - Finally she faced Benji. She was surprised by his question? Lekin kya karein??? Aakhir Dia pakadi hi gayi. He was right. The amazing thing is that he actually noticed her each n every blushing moment and also captured some of them.


D - abbb....mai.....main thodi na sharma rahi hoon.


B - Acha?? Tum nahi sharma rahi?? To is waqt isi baat ko meri aankhon mein dekhke kaho. Tab jaake main maanunga ki tum nahi sharma rahi.


D - hawww!! Yeh to cheating hai Benji.


B - Arre!! Yeh thodi na cheating hain. Main to bas wahi karne bol raha hoon jo tum kah rahi ho. Ab ismein kaunsi baat tumhe cheating jaise lagi?


D - mujhe nahi pata. She was just about to turn the other way round when Benji caught hold of her wrist n pulled her slightly towards him. Now her back was facing him n her wrist was still in his hand, but she didn't mind. He bent a little to her shoulder level n whispered softly.


B - Acha theek hain mat batao. Lekin......ek baat kahu??


D - her heartbeat was racing by the proximity......hmm.

B - tum sharmaate hue bahut hi cute lagti ho. Bilkul doll ki tarah.

Butterflies were doing summersaults in her stomach. She was on cloud 9 by his compliment. Now he came in front of her.


B - Waise is Doll mein ek khaas baat hain.


D - Khaas???


B - Hmm. Khaas. Bahut khaas.


D - Kya??


B - ki yeh Doll meri hain, hamesha hamesha ke liye. To hui na khaas baat???


D - Really Benji???


B - Haan


D - Thats so sweet of u ! n tum theek hi kah rahe the.


B - Kis bare mein?


D - woh......mere blush ke baare mein.


B - ohhhhh... to tum kyun itna blush karti ho aajkal???


D - Tum.........tum kaise lover ho Benji??? Yeh bhi nahi pata ki kab kaunsa sawaal karna chahiye???


B - Acha??? Ammmm.......to tum hi bata do ki kab kaise sawaal karna chahiye??? (he was actually teasing her)😉😉😉


D - Benji please zyada chidao nahi. Tumhe nahi pata ki kyun main itna blush karti hoon????


B - Arre Dia!! Kamaal karti ho. Nahi pata isiliye to kab se pooch raha hoon. Please batao na


D - pata nahi. Jab bhi tum mere paas hote ho, mere bahut kareeb hote ho to.....


B - too?????


D - to kuch hone lagta hai.


B - Kya hone lagta hain???


D - Jao main tumse baat nahi karti.....n she walks away from there.


He runs behind her n comes in front of her with holding his ears.


B - acha acha. Sorry! Ab tang nahi karunga. He takes her hands in his and continuously stares at her. Both of them are again lost in their magical world.


B - Dia ! Tum mujhe kuch batao ya na batao. Mujhe pata hain ki jab mai tumhare kareeb rahta hoon to tumhe kuch ajeeb sa hone lagta hai, pet mein butterflies waali feeling aati hain. Hain na???

She just nods her head.

B - Kyunki woh feeling mujhe bhi hoti hain jab tum mere kareeb hoti ho. Pata hain Dia? Maine kabhi dreams mein bhi drema nahi kiya hoga ki ek din aisa bhi aayega jab tum aur main is tarah saath rahenge. Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki main tumse pyaar kar bethunga. Par woh kahte hain na ki pyaar mein dimaag nahi dil apna kaam chup chaap kiye jaata hain aur tumhe uska ehsaas bahut baad mein hota hain. Mere saath bhi kuch aisa hi hua. Par main bahut khush hoon. Thank you so much for accepting this joker in your life Dia.


D - Joker nahi Benji. Tum bahut ache ho, joker se kahin gunah better. Pata hain maine bhi kabhi nahi socha tha ki aisa hoga. Hum hamesha se to ache dost the par aise ek doosre se pyaar kar bethenge, it was completely unexpected.


B - Exactly !!


D - N tumhe thanks kahne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Benji. Thanks to mujhe kahna chahiye. Tumhari wajah se aaj main itni change hui hoon. Tumhari wajah se mera attitude itna kam hua hain. Aur tumhari wajah se main apne friends and tumhari value jaan paai hoon. Isiliye thank you Benji for coming in my life and accepting me as i m. I Love You Benji !!


B - I Love U too Dia !

Both hug each other n remained like that god knows how long. They were so happy today. It was the first time that they confessed their love for each other. Their hug was an indication of how much badly they wanted each others' company in their entire life. They can now never imagine their life without the other. They never imagined that they can find comfort and love in such poles apart personalities.

They were still in the same position.

D - Benji???


B - Hmmm....


D - Tumhe kuch ajeeb nahi lag raha???


B - Kya???


D - Offo Benji !! Bhool gaye ki hum yaha kyun the???


B - (It strikes him for what reason they were here. Suddenly they broke the hug and when they turned they found no one there). Arre Dia !! Yaha to koi bhi nahi hain.


D - Haan Benji. Humein sach mein woh log yaha le aaye the na?? Ki ab tak job hi hua woh sapna tha???..............Ouch!!! Benjiiii!!! (Well he actually pinched her when she doubted this to be her dream)


B - Sorry Dia !! Woh tumhe yeh jatana tha ki yeh sapna nahi hain.


D - To pinch karne ki kya zaroorat thi???


B - awwwwwwww sorry Dia !! zyada zor se lagi??? Dikhao.....n he starts softly rubbing her arm and blowing air. She is touched by his love and care for her. It melted her heart and also vanished the pain.


D - Its ok Benji ! He looks up and smiles. Mujhe itni bhi nahi lagi.


B - To chale andar???


D - Okay!! N they go inside, hand in hand.

They guessed it right. All were comfortably sitting in the living room and were talking. They all saw Benji-Dia coming.

U - Lo aa gaye dono.


N - Ho gayi tum dono ki meethi meethi baatein????


D - Guys ??? Tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho??? Tum sab to bahar the na???


B - haan! Aur tumhe to hamara proposal dekhna tha na???


S - My dear Benji and Dia. Ab hum itne bhi dumbo nahi hai ki tumhare itne haseen pal ko socialize banake bigaad de.


D - Matlab?? Tum log waha the hi nahi???


M - Nahi ! Hum to pehle hi wapas aa gaye the. Jaise hi tumhe waha choda hum chup chap andar aa gaye.


B - Pehle hi???


U - Haan mere Benji!! n keeps his hand on his shoulders.


SU - To??? Kaisa laga hamara surprise???


A - Mazee kiye na???


Dia again started blushing.


G - Lagta hain kuch zyada hi maze liye. Kyun Dia???


Gunjan already gave both of them so many surprises today and Benji was totally shocked by her behaviour. He left Dia's side and went near Gunjan.


B - Gunjan??? Tum theek ho na???? Shaam se dekh raha hoon tum to shock pe shock diye jaa rahi ho. Tum kab se aise?? Itne bhi shock mat do warna mujhe chakkar aa jayenge n he does his fake consciousness act. Meanwhile Samrat takes Gunjan's side, keeps his hand on her waist which sent shivers in her body.


S - Jab se Chashmish ko mujhse pyaar hua hain, tabse! Ab mera kuch to asar dikhna chahiye na???


Everyone - oooohhhhhhhhhh!!!


N - Chalo chalo bahut raat ho gayi hain. Tum sabko ghar nahi jaana kya?? Kal college bhi hai. Bhool gaye???


B - Offo Nupur !! College ka bahana kyun bana rahi ho??? Saaf saaf kaho na ki tumhe Mayank ke saath time spend karna hain, isiliye bade pyaar se humein bhaga rahi ho.


M - Benjiiiiiii.........Tumhe sahi salaamat ghar jaana hai na???


B - haan haan jata hun Miss Morena Express ke Mr.

Chalo Dia.


D - Smiles....haan chalo.


A - Okay guys hum bhi chalte hain. Thanks Mayank for the invitation. Aur aunty se kah dena ki humein bahut acha laga yaha aake.


S - Haan dude !! Yeh to sach hain. Humein sach mein bahut acha laga.


G - Haan dii. Tum bhi kah dena aunty se.


M - No problem guys. Hum bata denge. Tum log nikalo warna aur late ho jayegi. And Benji-Dia, sorry tum logo ko itna pareshaan kia.


D - Arre its ok guys !


B - Ab tum log humari tang khichayi nahi karoge to kaun karega???


Everyone - Okay !! Bye then. Good night !


MN - Byee!! Good night !!


N - Sambhalke jaana.


Everyone:- Okay Boss !! byeeee....

N all of them for their respective places. Sajan went together in his bike, Adhiani in his car and Benia with dodo went in his car. 1st dropped dodo and they both of them had a long chat in her garden.



Thank you so much guys for reading it.
Please comment guys - good or bad - everything is accepted.
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loads of love
vinu


Edited by mjht_admirer - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
Amazziinngggg part....
Loved Benji teasing Dia...
And like always you are too good...
And like to say that its okii if you came late coz..
Sabar ka faal meetha hota hain...😆
Cont soon...
Thnnxx for PM....
Sorry for short reply...Bussyy

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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
And I am the first oneee....
Yaaayyyyy......
Hope I always comes first too read your FF...
And you keep rocking....👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
re phew im second
dolly i beat u😉in place ofcource
he he he kuch aur socha kya
n vinu had not read from start this ff so will read n comment till tomm
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

Amazziinngggg part....
Loved Benji teasing Dia...
And like always you are too good...
And like to say that its okii if you came late coz..
Sabar ka faal meetha hota hain...😆
Cont soon...
Thnnxx for PM....
Sorry for short reply...Bussyy

---Sana---



awwwwwwwwww thanku so much sana dear.
n yippie !! m happy that u r the 1st replier.
Ur encouraging words always encourage me even more.
no problem yaar !! tumne reply kiya yeh mere liye bahut badi baat hain.


loads of love
vinu


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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

re phew im second

dolly i beat u😉in place ofcource
he he he kuch aur socha kya
n vinu had not read from start this ff so will read n comment till tomm



hehe lo ho gaya shuru tum dono ki race. main soch rahi thi ki is baar kaun 1st aayega aur kaun kisko chidayega. but Sanu is baar tu 2nd hain, nxt time i want u to be 1st. samjhi???😆
good good. keep it up.
Ab Dolly ka chehra dekhna padega. 😆😆
no problem yaar. jab time mile tab ache se padke reply kar dena.
waise bhi teri jagah reserved hain 😉


loads of love
vinu


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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
wow i just started reding this ff
but loved it
wow this benji is more like samrat at times
it was hard for me to imagine benji in thoes romantic moments
but i did it
and loved every bit of it
plese continue soonand pm me when u do
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
rocking huuuggee update.. luved it.. do cont
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
Awesome, mind blowing, brilliant update. loved it.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg yaar
what an amazing funny adorable part
ha ha ha all gang teased benia a lott
poor them....but gang ye chance kaise chor te?..lol
and loved benia confession
actually i loved all
great work
cont soon
see yaaaa
love yaaaa

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