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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#161

hey mahak.

wow three is your lucky number thats nice, wow i loved it but please don't make it all sad. Keep writing, Great job.

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

Mahak.. mein kya likhoon tere liye? Have you ever left me with any options or words or adjectives? No swthrt... Writing a comment for you is becoming dangerous for me..... I am getting addicted to the book called "dictionary" so much.. that I can't tell you and this happens in the case of Mayur/ArTi too.... Tell me what comments you want from me....Saare toh hain tumhare pass, par mera bolne or likhne ka ishtyle nahin hai.. SO MERI MAHEK... 🤗AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!! 1 thing haan.. Mayur ki fight/ misunderstanding jaldi se sort out karde yaar.. can't see them like this...

Girl.. u rock and so do your stories!!!!!!!!

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#163

very nice update mahak!!
am really curious now!!

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mohseena

@mohseena

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#164

oye hoye i luv it yaar tot the core!!! plz update soon and add me to ur pm list!!!

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yashasvini

@Yashh...

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#165

Ohhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!
"heyy Bhagwan mein yeh suspense kaise jheluu.................."
Mahak!!!!!!
awesome update yaar.............lovd it!!!!!!.................its hard to imagine Mayank flirting wid Nupur in dat way..............I mean............its something unimaginable dat Mayank wud ask Nupur dat he cn cum 2 bathroom wen she ws in......................😳...................Bt it ws good one n vry cute update.............
Thank u sooooo muc dear fr such an awesome update.....................n ALL THE BEST fr ur practicalssss.................evn I huv xam day after nxt bt I came only 2 read ur FF.

Eagerly waiting fr ur nxt part........... 😊 😊 😊

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Varsha

@-krazyriya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#166

hey mahak......awesum update dear.... !!!

you described both past and present parts fabulously....... !!!

omg...omg....mayu is becoming more and more romantic..n...naughty day by day since he had married nupur !!

loved this naughty mayank !! loved the mayur moments......they were so cute...romantic !!! great chemistry !!

you have described mayank's feelings so beautifully !!! loved it dear !!

oh...poor mayank....his eyes have become red....n swollen....as cried whole night for nupur !!! It reflects his pure...deep....n passionate love for nupur !!

I really loved your lines....

mayank - "If you're asking if I need you.
the answer is forever...
If u're asking if I'll leave you,
the answer is never...
If you're asking what I value,
the answer is you...
If u're asking if I love you,
the ans is I do"
Now tell me what do u think? Do I don't only love u? main sirf tumhara hoon nupur.....and I only love u....utho na nupur....

Love works in miracles everyday...such as weaking the strong....making fools wise and making the loved ones recover from any phase of their life....it has so much strength that it can do anything..

these are just fabulous....brilliant...awesumm.......loved it to the core !!!

awesum part dear.....fantastic....superb !!!

plz...update next part soon.....want to know the past......will be eagerly waiting for it !!!

love u.....

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#167

hiiiii mahak!!!

1st of all sorry yaar!!! I didn't reply to ur previous posts. I m really sorry. Jhoot nahi bolungi but already itne saare FFs the that too pending usme tumhara bhi add ho gaya. Plz maaf kardena!!!

2nd of all.....Congrats for the 3rd thread. & the poster is simply realistic. Aise lag raha hai as if tumne kisi magazine se copy paste kiya hai.

last but not the least.....amazing update. thanks for the long update. maine aaj tak bhagwan ko sirf isiliye mana hai kyunki tum unhe manti ho.....
awwww😳 true love.

I'm fighting back emotions that I've never fought before, cause I'm not supposed to love you anymore..

but I love u......😭 koi kisi se itna pyar kaise kar sakta hai ki even though he knows tht he is not there anymore in her life but still he cant help himself from stopping his feelings.

I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh,
but I never knew looking back on the laughs would make me cry ....

wow!!! this line is really so touching

mayank- But I don't want you to be done! I want you to open the door now!
- badmash kahin ka 😉

they got separated on the night anniversary of their first meeting.... 😭 aisa kya ho gaya ki itne haseen din ko seperate ho gaye??

mayank - "If you're asking if I need you.
the answer is forever...
If u're asking if I'll leave you,
the answer is never...
If you're asking what I value,
the answer is you...
If u're asking if I love you,
the ans is I do"
Now tell me what do u think? Do I don't only love u? main sirf tumhara hoon nupur.....and I only love u....utho na nupur....

Yes u do love nupur from the core of ur heart. Plz god bring them together again. Bring the happiness & sparkness in their lives once again.I cant tell u mahak how much u have touched my heart with these lines. they are simply very very beautiful.

& plz make them hug or a forehead kiss by mayank.

loads of love
vinu😊

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#168

firstly.....congo for the new thread......you deserved it.....

your ff rocks yaar!

and about the chapter....it was too good!

specially the way you described mayank's feelings.....

his lines were beautiful.....

continue soon!

and thnx for the pm

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Rabi

@rose.mn

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#169

hey Mahi first of all i m really sorry fo such a lte comment
but yaar mujh se jaldi comment ki expectataions kam hi rakha karo..........hehe
anyways thank god now nupur is fine..........
i m really happy
n past was also nice
just loved the update
do cont sooooooon
love you