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Posted: 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello Priya jee aap kab next part update kar rehe ho jee?
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Hello Priya jee aap kab next part update kar rehe ho jee?

Jab tum kaho...main toh ready hi hun...😃...bass aap sab k comments ka rply karna baki hai...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Jab tum kaho...main toh ready hi hun...😃...bass aap sab k comments ka rply karna baki hai...


toh deri kis baat ki priya jee, jaldi kaor, I'm waiting for the update.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


toh deri kis baat ki priya jee, jaldi kaor, I'm waiting for the update.😊

Jo hukum sarakaar...!!! tum do min ruko...main do din baad ud karti hun...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Heloooo Lioness !! Haiiiii...😆

Welcome back !!! kyoun...??? main kahin chali gayi thi kya...😛
SO MY GUESS WAS RIGHT !!!
Chachaji hi Raj ke Sasurji nikle !!! 😃 jee nahi...aap abhi bhi galat hain...😆
Ab start pe aate hai... thik hai...😃
Naina is sorry as she slapped him 😆 😆 ( Achcha hai...pehle haath saaf karlo, phir sorry bolo !😆😆) tu bhul rahi hai kya ki yeh fic ek superb DIMAGLESS writer ki hai...toh us k fic ki heroine bhi toh DIMAG se LESS hi hogi na...😆 😆
But Raj is guilty for whatever he did when he married her first.... Naina is right....it's better to forget past and move on ...as they love each other now.... dekha...mere fic ki heroine itni bhi buri nahi hai...😛
Now Cut to Arjun and Ankur....😆 😆 😆 😆
The answers which Arjun singh gave Ankur were damn hilarious....😆
And to add to it, Vishal was there !! 😆 😆 😆 I tell you, whatever dial and explanations these both gave Ankur regarding the " Dysentry" thing...was....well.....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 doctor hai na...isiliye bimari ka naam aaya nahi ki tu medicine k sath hazir ho gayi...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
So RN ki shaadi hogayi !!! And then Vikram and Gaurav bhi bahar aagaye Aashirwaad dene !! 😆 ab shaadi me bujurgon ka ashirvaad toh lena hi chahiye na...😛
Raj ka dial...jitna bada jism, utna hi bada dil...was hilarious !! 😆 😆
WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT !!! 😲 Woh Vikram pehle Gayatri devi se shaadi karna chahta tha !😲 maine is fic k suruwat me hi Gayatri devi ko 'Choti maa' likha tha...ek reason hai is k liye...baad me batayungi...!!! par jaisa ki maine kaha hai ki main Vikram aur Gayatri devi par koi FB nahi likhnewali...!!! yeh sab k liye boring hoga...tum sab k liye bhi aur mere liye bhi...😆
Abey uski age exactly hai kitni???😲 mujhe us k naam-karan par thode hi na bulaya tha...jo main tujhe us ki xactly agae batayun...!!! par hoga...40-45 k aas paas...😛
muyaan besharam !! Pehle Raj ki maa aur ab Raj ki Naina se shaadi karna chah raha tha 😡 arre voh koi pyar me pagal ho kar shaadi nahi karna chahta tha...us me us ka koi faida tha tabhi voh yeh sab bakwaas karna chahta tha...😃
Par...chalo...abhi keliye toh theek hogaya !
Woh log nandini ko bhi waha se bhaga laaye !! good !!! ab voh bhi kya karegi....jyada din tak vahan rah kar...jab ki yeh fic toh khatam karni hi hai na...😛
And then Naina met her Papa !!😃 shaadi ka gift hai yaar...
So " Yasmin" gets to do cameo 😃 haan...voh Arjun ko like karti hai...toh maine socha ki kyoun bahar k kisi heroine ko lun arjun k opposite ...jab ghar me hi koi behetarin hai toh😛
Woh terrace walla scene and Raj ke dial were funny !
Arjun ne sahi kaha hai....sabse jyaada nasha toh paani mein hai...😃 haan...isiliye toh hum sabhi roz peete hain...😛
And now Arjun ko bhi gaana sunaai de raha hai ! 😆 Yasmin se takraane ke baad....do i see new pair in making??? may b...😆
Last waala RN scene was nice... shukriya😃
LRL joke was awesome !! dhanyavaad...😃
Dekhle ! Subah subah jaldi mein reply kar rahi hoon...gotta rush ...issliye isse plzzzzz kaam chala lena ! chala liya hai yaar...koi gall nai😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

finally updated sorry...😳

awesome
amazing
mindblowing
superbbb
fantastic
loved the whole part
loved everything Thanxxxxxxxxxxx a lottttttttttttt Ammu😃
cont soon
and plzzzz post the other ff also pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee sure Dear...lekin pahle ise toh kar lun...😃
tc
ammu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Priyaa tu kya paagal ho gayi hai bina comments ke hi like button press kar rahi hai......lagtha hai vikram ka asar pad rahaa hai tujh pe............sambhal jaa warnaa musibath mein pad jaayegi yaar....😉😆😆 arre mujhe pata hai na...ki tum jo likhogi...voh mere bhalai k liye hoga...isiliye LIKE button press kar diya...😃 😃 😃

iss baar tune shuruaat hi RN scene se ki hai ab isse jyaada khushi ki baat kya ho sakthi hai......and that too a romantic one........haa thode past ke yaadein jaroor the par jaise Naina ne kahaa ab jab sab thik hai toh vo sab yaad karke kya faayda.........aur fir unn dono ki nok-jhok....it was also very sweet perfectly complementing the situation they r in.......... shukriya...aap ko itna achha jo laga...😃!!! actually main yeh soch rahi thi ki jab main next part post karungi toh tumhara reaction kya hoga...matlab voh part bhi complitely dedicated hai RN par...😛

aur Ankur-Arjun ki convo toh highlight hai iss update ka.........yaar kya dialouges likhe hai tune..........wow.....aur Arjun ke so-called 'PATI-BHAKTHI' ke bhaashan sunn ke toh mere hosh udd gaye....... i mean hass hass ke.............i think har patni ko ye bhaashan jaroor sunna chahiye.......it'll help a lot u see 😆
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 dhanyaavaad...😃 😃 😃!!! sare patniyaan...agar yeh sunenge...toh patiyon ka kya hoga...???voh sabhi toh mere khilaf morcha khol denge...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

aur Vishal aur Aslam ne baat ko bohuth achche se cover kiyaa hai Ankur ke saamne..........it was good.aur Viram ki 'dysentry' ka bahaana toh bohuth funny tha......aur Naina ke behaviour pe Arjun singh ki explanation bhi kamaal ka tha......aur ek tarah se sahi bhi........par Vishaal ka ye kehnaa ki "politician hai na...subah 10 baje ki prog me raat k 10 baje pahunchna...hamare desh k har politicians ka janm-siddh adhikar hai..."..........it was so true....... yaar...yeh roz ka lafda hai...humare politicians ka...!!! aur aate hi bhashan me opposition ki burai karna suru kar dete hain...jaise khud dudh k dhule hue ho...

finally Raj-Naina ki shaadi ho gayi.....iss baar sab ke saamne,sab ke aashirvaad ke saath.....very very good.......
achhe kaam me deri kyoun karte...😃

aur ye Ankur ko police waala kisne banaa diyaa bina kuch soche Vishal aur Arjun ke baaton mein aagayaa aur ab jaakar Vikram se pooch rahaa hai ki ab usski tabiyath kaisi hai?bechaara khaamokhaa ullu ban gayaa iss khel mein......😆😆 ab agar sare sayane niklenge...toh meri fic ka kya hoga...!!! aur rahi baat Ankur ki toh...use toh pahle din se hi sabhi ullu bana rahe hain...
😆 😆

aur ab Rajveer jale pe namak chidakne kaa kaam kar rahaa hai Vikram ke saath par sahi bhi hai usske saath aisaa hi karnaa chaahiye balki isse kahi jyaada ......
kahin jyada toh hoga hi...😛 😉

aur yaar vikram ne Gayatri devi se shaadi karne ki koshish ki thi ye baat jaankar toh i was really shocked😲😲😲
dont worry is baat ko next ud se pahle main ek NOTE me clear karungi...!!! kyoun ki tum sab sayad is baat ko kuchaur hi samajh rahe ho...

aur abb vo unke bete ki patni se yaani literally apni beti jaisi ladki se shaadi karnaa chahtha hai........how disgusting!!!!!!!!!😡 tune sahi kahaa i din't remember when Vikram said anything abt this and i had to go back to the previous update..... toh doubt clear hua kya...

aur ye Gaurav toh Vikram se bhi jyaada gayaa-gujraa hai.......koi bhi bhai apni hi behen ke saath itnaa sab kar sakthaa hai sab kuch jaanthe hue bhi......even more disgusting!!!!!!!!!! voh koun sa naina ka saga bhai hai...yaar...
ye toh bhai ke naam pe dhabba hai......bhai ho toh apne 'NAVEEN SINGH AHLUWAALIA' jaisaa..... aur naa ho toh 'GAURAV' jaisaa.......par ye Adi ke baare mein kyaa bol rahaa tha........yaar tu isske baare mein kab clear karegi hamaari confusion..........kab se pooch rahe hai tujhe..........ab bataa bhi de Adi ke saath hua kya tha jis ki wajah se Raj aur Naina ki pehli shaadi hui thi?????? ek do uds k baad sare suspense khatam ho jayenge...

Nandini ne kitni achchi decision li hai Gaurav ko divorce dene ka faislaa karke.....jo insaan khud ki behen ka bhalaa nahi kar sakaa vo kya kisi aur ka bhalaa karegaa?chaahe vo patni ho yaa fir beti?kamse kam ab toh Nandini ki zindagi sawar jaayegi aur usse bhi ek mauka milegaa apne pyaar ko waapas paane kaa.....aur Shagun ko ek achchi future dene kaaa...... good, tum ne toh pura future plan bana liya😛
Rajveer ne achcha kiya jo Vishal aur Aslam se keh kar Nandini aur Shagun ko pehle hi vahaa se bahaar le kar aagayaa.... aur iss wajah se Vishal aur Nandini ka rishta bhi thik ho gayaa..... isse achchi baat aur kya ho sakthi hai....... haan...nandini abhi apne ek aise bhai k paas rahegi...jo us ka sach me care karega...

Rajveer ne Naina ko apne papa se milwaa diyaa.....isse badaa tohfaa toh usske liye kuch aur ho hi nahi saktha......... shaadi ka gift aisa hi hona chahiye na...ki jo akhiri saansh tak yaad rahe...
and i guess Yasmin uski behen hai,right?toh pichle update mein jo Rajveer Aslam se baat kar rahaa tha vo inke baare mein hi tha.......... Yasmin kisi kib bhi bahn nahi hai...😃

ab ye beech mein Ankur aur Arjun singh ka ye 'DOSTAANA' ka track kahaa se aagayaa?Priyaa tu kar kya rahi hai........kahi tu sach mein pagal toh nahi ho gayi naa itne saare fics likh likh ke???????? arre yaar...maine toh yeh socha bhi nahi tha...jo tu guess karr rahi hai...!!! ankur bass...arjun se sachhai jann na chata tha...isiliye use confident me lena chahta tha...aur tum sab pata nahi kahan pahunch gaye...😆

par ye kya lagtha hai tere saath saath tere fic ke characters bhi paagal ho gaye hai--Rajveer,Vishal,Aslam aur Arjun singh....sab ke dimaag kharaab ho gayaa hai....ek kehtha hai rum mein jyaada nashaa hai.doosra kehtha hai whiskey mein hai,toh teesra ko 50/50 lgtha hai.......aur choutha toh inn sab se bhi jyaada paagal hai kehtha hai ki paani mein jyaada nashaa hai.....waah kya baat hai......woh kehthe hai naa sab 'EK SE BADH KAR EK' hai yahaa pe........ustaad hai sab ke sab!!! arre nahi...Raj k samne koi nahi...😃
aur ab ye Rajveer khud apne hi izzat ka faludaa banaane pe tulaa hua hai ye keh kar ki voh Naina se itna dartha hai.......jiyoo beta Rajveer!!!!!!!!!😆😆
😆😆😆😆😆😆 ab bichare ki dil ki baat zubaan par aa gayi toh kya kare...

Yasmin aur Arjun singh.......pairing kaafi dilchasp hai..........dekhthe hai kya hotha hai inn dono ka...... vohi hoga...jo manjur-e-priya hoga😃

aur ab Naina ne Rajveer ka kahaa maan liyaa.......usske tohfe se jitni khushi Naina ko hui utni hi deep kiss Rajveer ko milaaa, very good Naina😉😳.aur iss kiss ke saath saath Rajveer Naina ke har feeling ko mehsus kar rahaa tha. ab dono ko hamesha...ek dushre k kareeb hi toh rahna hai...hamesha k liye...😃
par jab Naina ne khaa whiskey tab Rajveer ka jawaab bohuth badiyaa tha......."tumhe galat-faihmi ho rahi hai jaan...yeh toh Rum hai...!!!"😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 sach mein ye ladka....... haiiiiiiiiii allah!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳 he he he...dont worry next part me sab kuch clear ho jayega...!!! na Rum hoga aur na hi Whiskey...sirf hoga pyar hi pyar...be-sumaar😃😛😉

aur tere April fool note ke baare kya kahaa jaa saktha hai yaar........ tu ne firse prove kar diyaa ki hamaara paala Priya ke saath padha hai.............. ab kabhi kabhi yad toh dilana hi apdega na...😆

aur Lrl joke toh iss baar bhi bohuth achcha hai.....Raj ka Naina ko tease karnaa bohuth achcha tha........Naina ko dekhkhe rotiyaa bhi jal gayi.......kya baat hai.........😆
😆😆 he he he...chalo yeh bhi tujhe achha laga...matlab meri mehnat par flowers barash rahe hain...😃😛😉

ab jab ki tune already next update likhhi diyaa hai toh jaldi post bhi kar de meri maa.............. karr rahi hun beti...bass tum sab k comments ka rply toh kar lun...😃

P.S. PRIYA MUJHE NA EK DOUBT SATAA RAHI HAI......AGAR TU HAR SHAADI MEIN AISE HI SOTHI RAHI TOH JAB TERI SHAADI HOGI TAB TERA AUR TERE DULHE KA KYA HOGAA KAALIYAA........I MEAN PRIYAA??????ZARAA SOCH AGAR TU AISE HI SOTHI RAHI TOH TERA DULHAA BHAAG JAAYEGAA YAAR...........SO PLEASE AB TOH JAG JAA..........😆
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 toh phir bhaag jaye na...mujhe kya farq padta hai...!!! main is duniya ki unique piece hun...koi bechara lucky insaan hi mujhe bardast kar payega...sabhi k bass ki baat nahi hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hey Lioness...!!! First of all, thank you for the bday wishes...!!! arre yaar...tumhe toh mujhe galiyaan deni chahiye thi...ki maine itne dino baad wish kiya...lekin tum toh baht sweet nikli yaar...THANX bol diya...😃

Update was as usual...sada hua, boring, pakau....extremely nonsensical....!!!! 😡😡 mujhe pata tha...tabhi toh post kiya tha....!!!😆 😆 par aap k in uchh vichaaron k liye dhanyavaad😆 😆 😆 😆

Aur yeh comment bhi tumhara April fool joke jitna hi rite hai...!!!! 😆😆😆 Vaise Dhara...mujhe aisa kyoun lagg raha hai ki April Fool k bahane tum ne apne dil ki bhadaas mujh par nikal di...matlab tum ne sach kah diya ...mere fic k bare me...!!! hmmmmm...sochnewali baat hai...nahi...???😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya hiiii Suhana...

How r u? f9...ab tum batayo...kaisa hai...!!! matlab main tumhare bare me ya Jeeju k bare me nahi bal k Obama k bare me puch rahi hun...!!! kyoun ki mujhe pata hai tum dono ek dushre ka achhe se khayal rakhte hoge...!!! mujhe toh bichare Obama k bare me jan na tha...hamesha bhagte rahte hain...😆 😆 😆
Update was brilliant as usual..👏👏 Dhanyaavaad suhana😃 😃
I really cant stop laughing while reading your updates.😃 lo main itne serious ud deti hun...aur tumhe hassi aati hai...hadh hai...😆 😆
Naina ne Raj se sorry bola but Raj to past ko lekar kaafi guilty fel kar raha hai..Naina ne sahi kaha ki past ko bhoolkar ab unhe future par zyaada dhyaan dena chahiye.. main bhi yahi soch rahi thi...lekin mujhe Flashback toh khatam karna hi hoga na...😛
Rajveer apni izzat ka faluda khud hi bana raha hai..jab dekho Naina mein kho jata hai.. agar kisi ki biwi khubshurat ho...toh us ka khud par bass kahan chalta hai...!!! tumhe yakeen na aaye toh Jeeju se puchna...i damm sure...jeeju mujhe support karenge😛 😛
Arjun Singh ke sense of humour ka jawab nahin...But ab to aslam bhi uska khoob sath de raha tha.. dono hi rajveer se inspire hain...😛
Ankur se woh log jo bhi keh rahe the woh sab bahut hi funny tha...
Jaigarh ke pani ki khasiyat sach mein bahut hi acchi thi..Patniyaan apne patiyon ko dhoya karti hain..😆😆😆 he he he...😆 😆 😆
Raj n Naina ki shadi ki baat to theek hai par Vikram ko dysentry hone wali baat padke mera hans hans ke bura haal tha..🤣 ab us k gayab hone ka koi na koi reason toh dena hi tha na...😛
Raj n Naina ki shadi dekhke Vikram ki halat to wakai kissi mariz ke jaisi ho gayi thi..
this scene was just too hilarious
"Arjun:- "yeh kaisa sawal karr rahe hain aap sir jee...!!! pet ka kachra nikal kar aaye hain...toh achha hi lagg raha hoga na...!!! aisa lagg raha hoga ki...bina ki bhari luggage k hawa me udd rahe hain...hai na Rai saheb...???" maine aisa kuch likha tha...???he he he😆 😆 😆
Raj ne sahi kaha Vikram ka dil unke jism ki tarah hi bada hai..😉
Bhawanji bhi usse pareshan ho gaye hain😊 isiliye use uthane k bare me soch rahe hain...😃
Yeh Vikram Raj ki mom Gayatri se bhi shadi karna chahta tha..😲..aakhir iss buddhe ki age kya hai?? mujhe kya pata...hoga 45-50 k aas paas...!!! vaise kaam toh 60-70 saal k insaano ki tarah karta hai...😆
Dono baar dulha baane ka uska sapna ek baap bete ki jodi ki wajah se reh gaya..😆😆
Ankur ko kya ho gaya hai..wo Arjun Singh ko dinner pe kyun le jaana chahata hai??😉 kahin kuchh gadbad to nahin hai..😉😆😆 arre nahi kuch bhi gadbad nahi hai...bass Ankur apne doubts clear karna chahta tha...!!! par pata nahi tum sab ne kya kya soch liya...😆 😆
Raj ne Naina ko bahut hi keemti tohfa diya...Usne Naina ko uske papa se milwa diya..sach isse bakar koi gift ho bhi nahin sakta..😛 ab shaadi ki gift toh aisa hi hona chahiye na...jo zindagi bhar yaad rahe...😃
Raj is really sacred of Naina n every1 is enjoying this..A person who is not afraid of any1 is so sacred of his own wife..
Naina ko pata chal hi gaya ki Raj ne drink kiya hai..
Wat will ahppen now??? kuch nahi...Raj ko pata hai ki Naina ko sahi track par kaise laya jaye...😃
Continue soon
Bye

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