The Lovestory of Armaan/Riddhima LAST PART pg 83 - Page 49

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Part 14
Armaan could only hear Riddhima's voice, who was calling his name to come to her. Darkness surrounded him. He couldn't see anything. He could see Riddhima time to time far away from him under the midst white light.......but, when he reached her, she would dissappear. Minute by Minute he became desperate to find her. He kept on running here and there in order to find her, but b4 he could reach her, she vanished...............
A: (looking here and there) Riddhima!!! riddhima kahan ho tum? riddhima mere saamne aao plz........
R: Armaan.........
At this sound, armaan turned around, but b4 he could see anything, a white dupatta came on his face which covered his eyes. the wind got stronger which restricted him from getting the dupaata off of his face. but finally, he managed to take it off and turned to the direction that the voice was coming from....but......to his badluck no one was there. rite then, someone tapped on his shoulder, armaan turned around and it was riddhima who he saw. she started to back up, armaan took a step towards her but b4 he could take another step......he tripped over something and fell which caused him to wake up from his DREAM!!!!!
Armaan opened his eyes to see the white stylish ceiling of his room above him, and was relieved dat it was just a dream and dat riddhima didn't realy run away from him.
A: (sits up) phew!!! it was just a dream...i don't get it, yeh ek hi sapna mujhe poori raat mein teen baar achuka hai. wats happening to me, kyun baar baar mere sapne mein riddhima ajati hai? yeh sab ho kya raha hai? kya yeh sach mein pyaar.........(interrupted by the phone) ab yeh subah subah kiska phone agaya? (picks the cell up) Rahul? isse ab ky hua hai itni subah ko phone kar raha hai? (answers it) hello, bol..........
Rahul: armaan, tu kahan hai? its 8:45am.
A: kya?! its already 8:45am? (looks at the clock and realizes) oh shit.......
Rahul: kahan hai tu? hum sab yahan par poch gaye hai aur tera wait kar rahe hai..........
A: yaar mein abhi bas 15 minutes mein ata hoon..........
Rahul: acha jaldi aja
A: ey......ek minute, basket gussa toh nahin hai na? i mean late hoon isliye? kuch ziyada gussa toh nahin hai na?
Rahul: ab total kitna gussa hai, woh toh tu ake dekhle, filhaal toh woh gusse se phoole nahin sama rahi (armaan makes a face) chal ab jaldi aa bye. (hangs up)
Armaan gets ready and leaves for riddhima's house. its 9:00am when he reaches there. the gang is waiting for him outside the house.
A: (gets out of the car) sorry guys aane mein der hogayi, am so sorry, woh aank hi nahin khuli.............
Muskaan: oye its ok, tu poch gaya itna hi kaafi hai, chal ab samaan andar rakh dete hai, warna kahin aur der nahin hojaye....
All of them go to put their things at the back of the car, but riddhima keeps on standing there. armaan goes to her.
A: i'm so sorry basket, mein late nahin hona chahta tha, lekin.........i know you're really angry on me........but.........ssly...........(interrupted by riddhima)
R: tumhe kisne kaha k mein tumpe gussa hoon?
A: matlab tum nahin ho? (riddhima nodds a no) toh phir Rahul?......(realizes)
Armaan goes to the gang at the back of the car..........and pulls rahul out of the group.
Rahul: armaan kya kar raha hai tu? mujhe samaan rakhna hai.
A: samaan baad mein rakna..........phele yeh bata...........tune mujhse jhoot kyun kahan k riddhima gusse mein hai..........jabke woh bilkul normal hai?
Rahul: oh toh tujhe pata chal gaya?
A: haan......aur ab tu mujhe bata k tune jhoot kyun kaha?
Rahul: dekh agar mein jhoot nahin bolta toh tu jitna jaldi aya hai na utna hi late ata aur hum late hojaate......aur aisa nahin hai k mein koi aur jhoot nahin bol sakta tha...par kya hai na......aj kal riddhima tere liye bohot important hogayi hai.........so you know........aur uski baat pe tu react bhi jaldi karta hai.....
A: rahul.......seede seede bata k tera matlab kya hai?
Rahul: armaan, tujhe nahin dikhta par hume dikhta hai........woh kya karti hai, kya nahin karti, woh kya karni chahiye, kya nahin karni chahiye, usse ziyada tujhe un cheezo ki fikar hai. tujhe nahin lagta dat you're in love wid her? i mean ab tak toh tujhe already pata chal jana chahiye tha.
A: rahool....tu paagal hogaya hai.....she's just my frnd.......basket sirf meri achi dost hai......aur humare beech mein sirf dosti ka rishta hai aur kuch nahin.............
Rahul: armaan.........tu shayad bhool gaya hai, pyaar ki neeve dosti hi hoti hai.........and am sure ek na ek din tujhe bhi yeh realization hojayegi.
A: acha? agar yeh baat hai toh tu aur muskaan, why aren't you guys in love? tumlog bhi toh dost ho.
Rahul: armaan........humari baat alag hai..........hum 24/7 larte rehta hai, jabke tum aur riddhima larte toh ho par ek doosre ki care bhi karte ho.
A: rahul, i don't know at you're saying, chal late horaha hai, baad mein baat karenge........(leaves)
Armaan goes and helps the ang to put all the baggages in the car. after they are finshed wid the baggages, all go to sit in the car, Atul, Kripa, Riddhima and Muskaan sit in the back while rahul sits in the passenger seat. meanwhile, armaan closes the door of the back bonnet and come and opens the door of his seat. as soon as he sees rahul in the passenger seat, he is shocked, he keeps on staring at him, since he wasn't expecting him to sit over there.
A: Rahul..........tu yahan? i mean tu toh peeche betne wala tha na? toh yahan......
Rahul: haan betne wala toh tha..........par jab tak woh chipkli wahan beti hain.........mein yahan theek hoon........
Muskaan: oye kya bola tune?
Rahul: kuch nahin........(to armaan) armaan, don't you think hum late hojayenge?
A: kyu?
Muskaan: aur nahin toh kya? armaan tu abhi tak bahar kyun khara hai?
Rahul: kahin tune is jagah pe kisi aur ko toh expect nahin kiya tha na?
Kripa: kisi aur ko? kisko?
Rahul: riddhima
Muskaan: kya?
A: kuch nahin.........kyun rahul?
Rahul: haan nothing.
Muskaan: toh tune riddhima ka naam kyun liya?
Rahul: woh toh mein.......mein.....haan i just realized woh riddhima ka dupatta darwaze mein atka hua hai.........toh meine uska naam leliya.........to tell her to pull it in.....aur by the way duppate ko utar k nakalna parega......its stuck in the clip.........ruko mein nikal deta hoon.
A: Rahul......mein nikal deta hoon..........
Armaan goes to the other side after struggling much wid it, he finally gets the dupatta out, he opens the door of the car and hands it to riddhima. they both look at each other for a while......but.......soon are interrupted by muskaan....
Muskaan: oye tumlogo ka agar ghoorna band hogaya ho toh chale?
Armaan and riddhima turn super red. armaan closes the door and goes and sits on his seat and widout saying a word, drives off. its 11:00am, till now both armaan and riddhima have changed glances a thousand times. both were in deep thought of wat was happening to them? why they felt each other as more than best frnds? why the idea of seperating scared them even if they didn't had any feeling for each other? why is this change occuring in their lives? all these questions were attacking them at once. they kept on thinking, and b4 they knew it, it was already 1:00pm.
Muskaan: yaar armaan, yahan aas paas koi dhaba ho toh plz rok dena.......woh kya haina mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai, aur mujhse aur sabar nahin hoga..........
A: sorry muskaan.....lekin abhi aur do ghante lagenge kisi daabe pe pochne k liye.......tu aisa kar........jab tak hawa khale.......(rahul starts laughing lyk crazy)
Muskaan: (to rahul) bohot hasi arahi hai na tujhe? sabar kar, tujhe toh mein.........(starts to pull his hair)
Seeing this fight that is to get worse, the gang tries to stop them, along wid armaan shouting at them to stop. muskaan gets uncontrollable and accidently she pushes armaan which causes him to turn the steering wheel to the wrong side, which ends up wid the car getting drove on pointy rocks and somehow two of the tires get flattend, armaan slams on the brakes which startles everyone in the car.
A: everyone alrite?
All: yaa.......
Muskaan: yeh kya tha?
Kripa: yeh sab kuch teri wajah se hua hai muskaan, na tu jagra karti na armaan ko dakha lagta,........na accident hota....
Muskaan: lekin mein toh.....(interrupted by riddhima)
R: guys stop fighting.........phele yeh toh dekho k itni bari awaaz kis cheez ki thi.
All get out of the car, no one sees anything wrong, armaan goes to the other side to check and sees the two flat tires.
A: oh shit..........
All: kya hua? (all come and see)
Rahul: oh no....yeh kya hogaya......ab hum farmhouse kaise jayenge?
A: apni is muskaan se poochna......yeh batayegi.
Muskaan: armaan, am really sorry yaar........i didn't mean to push you.....yeh sab is rahul ki wajah se hua hai..............
Rahul: meri wajah se?
Muskaan: haan teri wajah se........na tu mere upar hasta........na humari laraye hoti........aur na yeh sab hota........
Rahul: dekh muskaan tu.......
R: guys stop it........larne se koi faida nahin hai.........joh hona tha........hogaya......ab kuch socho.........
Kripa: ab kya karenge hum?
A: kuch nahin lift mangenge..........koi mechanic age toh mil hi jayega.
They all try for a lift, but no gain. armaan sees atul a bit disturbed so he tells rahul to stay wid the girls and try to get a lift, meanwhile, he talks to atul.
A: hey atul, kya hua hai tujhe? subah se dekh raha hoon, u're a bit disturbed, any problem?
Atul: nahin yaar (trying to hide the actual thing) aisa toh kuch nahin hai.
A: pakkah? (atul nodds)
Suddenly, rahul calls onto them that they have got the lift. its a truck, they join the car wid the truck and go to sit. they open a back ramp and see dat they're not gonna be alone here, they have a bunch of frnds wid them. a group of sheeps are sitting far in. despite the fact, they get in and take a seat. some time passes, they all get bored, then, armaan gets his guitar which he had on his shoulder, since he didn't want to leave it in the car and started to play it. muskaan starts to sing.
Muskaan: "Dil kabhi gandha, kabhi hai nek banda,
Dil ka bharosa kaise koi kare?" (Rahul continues)
Rahul: "Dil kabhi tanda, kabhi hai atom bomb sa,
Yeh dhamaka kaise koi sahe?" (Kripa joins in)
Kripa: (stands up while singing) "Dil ki yahin khata hai, Dil ko nahin pata hai". (hits atul's shoulder to tell him to join in)
Atul: (pulls kripa's hand to make her sit down) "Dil ki yahin khata hai, Dil ko nahin pata hai".
Rahul: (gets on the top front of the truck) "Ki woh chaahta hai kya?" (Muskaan, Atul and Kripa Join in) "Nazre Milana, nazre churana, kahin pe nighahen, kahin pe nishana"
"Nazre Milana, nazre churana, kahin pe nighahen, kahin pe nishana"
A: (looks at riddhima and joins in) "Niyyath toh dil ki humesha hi sahi thi"
Muskaan comes and pulls riddhima up........riddhima stands up and goes to the side railing of the truck and joins in too.
R: (looking at the fields they're passing) "Dil ka iraada bhi samjo nek tha" (looks at armaan and then back to the fields) "Kudrath awaara toh kya kare bechara" (armaan continues)
A: (while looking at riddhima) "Uska hojaye dil jisko dekhta" (Riddhima catches onto his glance, armaan quickly looks the other way)
Rahul: "Din mein toh woh saathayein"
A: (stands up) "Raathon mein gul jagaayein"
Muskaan: (puts her hands on rahul and armaan's shoulder) "Din mein toh woh saathayein" (all go to riddhima)
R:"Raathon mein gul jagaayein"
Atul/Kripa: (comes to the group from the back) "Arre Chahta hai kya?"
All: "Nazre milana, nazre churana, kahin pe nighaen, kahin pe nishana"
"Nazre milana, nazre churana, kahin pe nighaen, kahin pe nishana"
Kripa: (placing her hand below her chin) "Ankhon mein koi hai basa, jaane kyun lage yeh dil khali?"
Atul: (taps on kripa's head) "Jaan lo yeh dil baja raha hai kyun ek haath se taali"
A: (sees riddhima playing wid the baby sheeps) "Hoton se jaane kya kis ko doonde dil ki baatein hai dil mein"
All: (join hands) "Yeh raha tera humsafar kis ko doonde dil e mehfil mein, jaan hai phaasi k bina hasi aya hal dil peh......" (all start dancing in pairs, AR, RM, AND AK) "Nazre milana, nazre churana, kahin pe nighaen, kahin pe nishana"
"Nazre milana, nazre churana, kahin pe nighaen, kahin pe nishana"
When the song ends, all three couples are locked in a hug. Armaan and riddhima are the first ones to realize and then are rahul and muskaan the one's to realize, both of the couples break the hug and get seated. atul and kripa too get seated and eventually they reach the dabbah. it's 3:00pm when they reach there. they have gave the car to the mechanic to work on it.........they were told it will take some time so they decided to have lunch.
A: ab chalo jaldi batao kya order karna hai?
Muskaan: Armaan aisa karte hai hum, 5 plates parathe manga lete hai aur 10 glass lassi.......kya bolte ho?
Rahul: abe oye bhukiyari, kitna khaati hai tu? insaan hai yah jaanwar?
Muskaan: tune mujhe jaanwaar bola?
Rahul: abhi tak toh sirf poocha hai.
Rahul and muskaan start arguing after two minutes or so riddhima stands up.
A: tumhe kya hua basket? tum khari kyun hogayi?
R: woh armaan mein restroom se aati hoon.
Kripa: theek hai ridzy tu jake aaa, aur tab tak hum kuch order kardete hai.
Atul: order toh tab karenge na jab yeh do larna band karenge. (riddhima smiles and leaves)
The fight is solved between the two after 5 mins and finally they've ordered something. Meanwhile, riddhima is coming back from the restroom and accidently she bumps into a guy, they both say sorry to each other and the guy leaves, armaan sees all this and is disturbed by it, rahul notices it. Riddhima comes back to the group and they have their lunch. its 10:00pm, everybody is confused about the way they are going.
A: yaar atul, yeh kahan hai tere uncle ka farmhouse? doondte doondte tak gaya hoon mein ab. ek toh raat bhi bohot ho chuki hai.
Rahul: yeh sab us traffic ki wajah se hua hai.......khatam hote hote raat hogayi.
Muskaan: joh hona tha woh hogata guys, ab yeh socho k farmhouse kaise pochna hai itni raat ko?
Rahul: farmhouse pe poch jaye hum phir mein toh sone jaraha hoon, oye atul, saara ghar lat bhat saaf hoga na?
Now atul is in a deep thought, he remembers the phone call from his uncle last night.
-FLASHBACK-
A: hello......jee uncle boliye.
Uncle: beta meine yeh phone karne k liye poochna tha k tumlog kal jaane k liye tayar ho na?
A: haan uncle hum tayyar hai, aur waise bhi hume karna kya hai? sirf redesigning hote ve supervise karna hai na, ghar toh waise bhi saaf hai.
Uncle: woh beta ek problem hai, woh ghar abhi tak saaf nahin hua.......you'll have to do the cleaning yourself.
A: kya uncle, lekin meine toh apne dosto ko........
Uncle: i knoe beta.........lekin wat can i do.......woh workers, plz beta yeh ghar saaf karna bohot zaroori hai.........plz kardo......i have to sell this house and i have less time aur itne kam same mein doosre workers.......not possible beta........
A: theek hai uncle..........(cuts the line) ab mein kya karoo? sab razi hogaye hai aur ghar hi saaf nahin hai, and sone e suhaaga woh ghar mujhe saaf karna hai ab kya karoo? yeh log ko batao k nahin......no, i'll tell them after reaching over there, i'm sure they'll help me.
-FLASHBACK ENDS-
R: atul!
Atul: kya hua? (interrupted by armaan)
A: yeh lo farmhouse agaya.
They all get out of the car and look at the house to find it crappy looking.
A: yaar atul tune toh kaha tha k yeh ghar saaf hogaya hai? par yeh toh.
Rahul: armaan, shayad bahar se aisa ho....andar chal k dekhte hai.
All of them go inside, open the lights and are shocked to see the condition of the house.
Rahul: atul yeh?........(all look at atul)
Muskaan: tune toh kaha tha yeh ghar saaf hogaya hai and it only needs redesigning? par yeh toh.........
R: (notices atul's sulken face) atul baat kya hai? why r u so tensed?
Atul tells them everything abt the phone call and how now he expects them to help him.
A: atul hou could you lie to us? am ssly not staying here. chalo riddhima. and you all too..lets go.
Rahul: atul humne tujhse yeh expect nahin kiya tha
Atul: yaar plz understand me ridzy plz yaar tu toh kuch bol....this is really important for my uncle....plz ridzy.....kripa plz.
A: chalo basket.
R: armaan mein nahin arahi.
Riddhima tells them not to leave and makes them understand why atul did such a thing. everybody agrees, atul apologises from them and they forgive him.
PRECAP
- chor............
- finally armaan accepts his love..........
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Edited by Kirni-KSG - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Kirni...

Lovely Update yaar
Thant's one of my fav song
Loved every bit of the part
RM r irrestable yaar
AR was as usual sweet & adorable
precap was also cool
keep continue
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it ....
Great part ....
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awesome update
loved it
love RM fighting
glad everyone 4gave atul
cant wait 4 the next update
armaan realises his feelings
so excited
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice one now make armaan n ridhima realize soon about
their love
thanks for pm
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hey awesome part.....
really liked the song sequence....
thanks for the pm and update asap.........

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