mayur ff Life partner part6 upd pg33 - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

208

Views

29.5k

Users

74

Likes

357

Frequent Posters

wind453 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Aranya

awesoem one Vins...

I liked it...good going!!
Thanks for teh PM
Update soon...:))
Love
~Aru

thanx aranya
glad you liked it
wind453 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

lovely update. too good.

continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.

glad you liked it
wind453 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: -afsha-

It was really sweet one thank you glad u liked it

Liked the way they Made Adhi run away😆 ya it was funny
It was fab😆
Lets c wat will be the reaction of Nups and Mayu after meeting each other
Liked the entry of Nups😉

wind453 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 15 years ago
#64
heyyyy vinaya
Amazing start yaar glad u liked it
Really loved
Nupur n her bros fabulous trio agree they are fabulous trio
Gunjan is a lovely bhabhi
Waiting for mayur meeting
N hey plzzz update ur other ff too
Thanx for pm my pleasure[ /QUOTE]
wind453 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: daniella05

awesome update!
pls add me to ur PM list...
continue soon

glad u liked it
439538 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#66

hey huni grtt story

and i love the concept

oif arrage marriage!!

loved part

con't soon!

-sanam-

stuti123 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
#67
vinu the ff is amazing ...........continue soon ........
You-Know-Who thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Your ff is really nice..
i would love to read it..
please continue soooooon and pl pl add me to your pm list!!!
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
wind453 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 15 years ago
#69
recap: mayank comes to see nupur where he meets his best friend samrat
part 2
"waise Who kahan hai jise dekhne aayi hoon, nupur kahan hai samrat" asked mm

"yeh lijiye maa aa gayi meri shona" said samrat looking at stairs

Mayank in that direction and just kept staring at nupur. Nupur was wearing a red salwar. She was looking simple still gorgeous.

(nupur was wearing this salwar)
Mm who saw mayank staring at nupur just smiled and lightly pinched him which brought him back to his senses.

"Toh iska matlab kya samjhu mayu" whispered mm in teasing tone.

"maa…" whispered mayank giving not again look

"shona yeh inse maa hai" said samrat introducing her to mm while nupur had shocked expression on her face.

"namaste aunty" said nupur touching her feet

"aur yeh hai mayank my best friend" said samrat introducing nupur to mayank

outside nupur's room

Uday was standing on the stool and was fixing outside nupur's room. After finishing his work he got down the stool.

"Ab aayega asli maja bro ne jo kaha tha woh ho gaya" said uday smiling

soon he too came down to hall were every one was talking except mayank and nupur. Mm saw them silent and pointed samrat. Samrat soon understood it.

"Guys mujhe aur uday ko kuch kam yaad agaya hai we will be right back" sadi samrat and left with uday from there. Soon mm and gunjan too left from there leaving mayur alone. Both were silent for sometime.

"hi" both said at the same time and again silence fill the air

"to aap" both again said at the same time and silence again fill the air

"pehle app" both again spoke at the same time and this time both broke out into laughter.

"so to aap hai sam ki life uski shona" said mayank

"aur aap hain unke bestest buddy right, bhai aapke baare bohot baatien kiya karte hai" said nupur

"come main aapko ghar dikha deti hoon aur chalte chalte baatien bhi ho jaayegi" said nupur

"Why not chaliye" said mayank and both got up and nupur showed mayank the whole house while mayank was admiring the beauty of the house the way it was decorated. Finally came nupur's room.

In the garden

All four of them were sitting and chatting.

"bro aapne jaisa kaha tha maine waisa kar diya balki use bhi jyaada kiya hia" whispered uday to samrat. Samrat first got confused about what uday was talking but then remembered his and uday's plan. He soon rushed with uday towards the house to stop nupur and mayank entering the room.

As nupur was about to open the door mayank held her hand pulled her back and both hid behind the wall.

"Tum…"

"shhhhhhhhhhhh" mayank kept his finger on her lips and there was an eyelock

Both samrat and uday came running towards nupur's room and hurridely opened the door.

SPLASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The black water from the bucket which was fixed above the door fell over them. They were all wet moreover were fully black due to that colored water. Both mayank and nupur who were hiding behind wall could not control the laughter.

"tum dono yaha ho mujhe to laga" said samrat

"Sam tera dost hoon itna to jaanta hoon tu kya karnewala hai" sadi mayank with grin while nupur was finding it hard to control her laughter.

"bhai aap ek kaam kijye please jaake change kar lijiye" said nupur trying to control her laughter and sam went into nupur's room.

"bro please shower mat start karna" shouted udsay but sam did not listen to it as he opened the shower instead of water it was red paint which uday and samrat had mixd with the water to frighten the boy who was going to come.

Samrat came out fully covered in red colour. After watching it even mayank could not stop himself and started laughing.

"Samrat mujhe nahin pata tha ki ek din tere plans tujh pe hi backfire karenge" said mayank trying to control his laughter.

Both mayank nad nupur then went to nupur's room while samrat and uday went to their respective room.

In nupur's room

" nupur mujhe shaadi se koi problem nahi par main nahin chahta ki zindagi ka sabse bada faisla hum bina ek dusre ko jaane lay. Shaadi sirf do logon pe nahi balki un do logon ke beeach ke understanding, trust pe based hoti hai" said mayank while nupur was just listening to him.

"aur main chahta hoon ki main jiske saath aapni puri life bitana chahta hoon use pehle aachi tarah se jaan loon aur fir hi main is bandhan main bandhna chahta hoon hope tum samajh rahi ho main kya keh raha hoon" said mayank

"mayank tum jaante ho abhi abhi tumne yeh sab jo kaha wahi cheez main bhi tumse kehne waali thi. Main bhi yahi chahti hoon ke main aapni life jiske saath bitana chahati hoon main use aachi tarah jaan loon use samajh saakoon" said nupur and both had one one sip of cofee and kept chatting for few minutes and then decided to go down where every one was waiting for them. Mayank told his mom and samrat both were ready for marriage but both need some time to understand each other. During the whole conversation nupur remained quite. Samrat saw this and signaled uday.

"bro aapko nahi lagta shona ka naam guiness books of record main hona chahiye" said uday teasingly while nupur and others were confused while samrat was trying to hide his smile.

"haan uday tum bilkul sahi keh rahe ho aaj to shona ka naam guniess world record main hi hona chahiye afterall itna bada kaam jo kiya hai" said samrat trying to hide his smile.

"maine aisa kya kiya hai jo mera naam guniess world record main hona chahiye" asked nupur irritatingly

"aare itne dair tak jo chup thi who to aapne aap main ek bohot bada ajooba hai aur ek world record bhi" said samrat and both uday and samrat laughedbut stopped laughing when nupur gave them and angry and I would see u later look.

Soon nupur's cell buzzed. She took the call.

"What thik hai I will be there in 15min. aap operation ki tayaariya shuru kar dijiye" said nupur ended the call.

"Sorry aunty par mujhe isi waqt jaana hoga hospital main emergency hai" said nupur

"nupur main usi raaste se jaa raha hoon if u don't mind I will drop u" said mayank to which nupur nodded and went to her room to take some files.

"Samrat aaj ek nahi do do naam guiness me jaane chahiye afterall mayank kisi ko aur who bhi kisi ladki ko drop karne ki baat kar raha hai yeh bhi ajooba hi haina" said mm teasingly to which samrat also joined.

"Maa……" said mayank giving not again look. Soon nupur came down and both went towards the hospital.

ok guys here's the 2nd part

i know it's boring one

hope u guys like it plz do comment
You-Know-Who thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Very niceeeeeeeee.....
lovely ff..love the way its going....
thanx for the pm!!!
akansha

p.s. i am the first to comment!!🥳

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

7 months ago

SuVeer/RUhaani TS ~ Happily Ever After (Chapter 4 upd) SuVeer/RUhaani TS ~ Happily Ever After (Chapter 4 upd)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to ExoticDisaster C H A P T E R 1 After the completion of the final year exams, Mamta insisted Ranveer to come home from...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Mystic_Muse

11 years ago

~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".