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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome character sketch......................................

great work 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyyy vinaya
Really nice cs
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey great CS..
do update soon ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1

Shergill manshion

"Good morning chashmish" said samrat hugging gunjan from behind

"Good morning aur ab mujhe chodo mujhe bohot kaam hai jaake jaldi ready ho jao" said gunjan ordering samrat and patted his cheeks

"Good morning bhabs" said uday entering the hall

"Waise ye shona kahan reh gayi" asked samrat to gunjan

"Haan bhabs kahan hai woh" asked uday

"Woh atually kal late aayi toh so rahi hai" said gunjan

After hearing this both samrat and uday looked at each other and had a mischevious smile on their face.both went up and opened the door of a room. As they opened the door they saw a girl sleeping peacefully with a smile on her lips. she was looking like an angel. They just kept looking at her for sometimes love and affection could be seen in their eyes. Then they looked at each other and smiled. They went near her and

SPLASH!!!!!!!!!!!

"Samrat bhayyia uday bhayyia" screamed the girl getting up from her bed she was totally wet while samrat and uday were laughing

"Main aap dono ko nahi chodungi , roz main aapko maaf karti hoon aaj nahi" said the girl and started running behind samrat and uday. They were running in the hall like cats and rats. Just then gunjan entered while samrat and uday hid them selves behind gunjan.

"Bhabhi dekhiye aaj bhi in don one kya kiya , main inhe aaj nahin chodungi" said the girl to gunjan

"Nupur to jaake fresh ho ja warna tu bimaar ho jayegi aur in donon ko to aaj main dekhti hoon"said gunjan pulling samrat and uday's ears

"Sorry bahbs" said uday.

After sometimes nupur came down fo the breakfast. All were having the breakfast.

"Nupur breakfast ke baad jaldi se tayar ho jaana, woh log 10 baje taka ate hi honge"said gunjan

"Jee bhabs" said nupur while samrat and uday were giving confused expression

"Kaun aa raha hai aur kis liye" asked samrat curiously

"Woh nupur ko dekhne ladka aa raha hai" said gunjan

Samrat who was drinking water split the water out as he heard this. He and uday were totally shocked.

"What????" screamed both of them at the same time

"Tumne humhe bataya kyun nahi chashmish" said samrat

""haan bhabs" said uday

"Woh is liye ki ab tak tum jo karte aa rahe ho aur pichle baar jo tumne adhiraj ke saath kiya waise hi fir se kuch na karo" said gunjan

"Woh adhiraj to nupur ko bhi pasand nahi tha is liye aur uske jaise sadu ke saath to yehi karna chahiye tha" said uday while nupur was laughing

"Nupur aur tub hi inke saath mil gayi thi pata hai woh abhi utna hi dara hua hai"Said gunjan

"Bhabhi woh mujhe pasand nahi tha isliye maine aur bhayyia ne who plan banaya tha par haan uski shakal dekhne layak thi" said nupur trying to control her laughter

"Aur teri bhi"said samrat at this nupur frowned and hit samrat on his shoulder.

Flashback

Adhiraj and his family had come to see nups.

"Agar aap bura na mane to kya main nupur se mil sakta hoon" asked adhiraj

"Woh actually adhiraj nupur niche nahin aa sakti to kyat um nupur se us ke kamre me hi milna hoga" said samrat holding his laughter as he was imagining what would be the scene once adhiraj enters the room

adhiraj agreed and both uday and samrat accompanied him to the room. As he entered the room he saw it fully dark the lights were off. He saw a gril standing there her hairs were open.he went towards her and kept his hands on her shoulder and as the girl turned around he just scremed.

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhh"

He saw the girl who aapeared to be like a ghost. As samrat and uday heard adhiraj's scream they gave thumbs up to each other and entered the room.

"Adhiraj kya hua, tum nupur ko dekhke aise kyun chilaye" said samrat trying to control his laughter

"yeh, yeh nupur" adhiraj stammered. He was totally frightened to see the girl before him

"Haan yehi humaari behen nupur hai, kyun tumhe pasand nahi aayi" said uday trying to control his laughter.

Nupur had left her hair open and had applied a lot of kajal under her eyes(just imagine chandramukhi from movie chandramukhi or manjolika). She was really looking very scary.

Adhiraj did'nt uttered a single word thereafter and just went out. he was totally horrified. As adhiraj and his parents left nupur samrat and uday gave a highfive to each other.

Flashback ends

As they all rememberd the incident they burst out into laughter.

Sharma house

"Mayank jaldi kar hume bahar bhi jaana hai" shouted a women around 40

"Bus maa do min. aa raha hoon" said mayank

"Maa kya abhi jaana jaroori hai , hum yeh program sham ko bhi to rakh sakte hai, aap janti haina aaj meri kitni important meeting hai" said mayank

"haan pata hai teri bohot important meeting hai par woh baara baje hai aur abhi sirf dus baje hain, ab tera koi excuse nahi chalne wali samjhe" said mm.

Shergill mansion

The door bell rang. Gunjan went and opened the door while samrat was in his room. She opened the door and invited the both the guests inside.

"Aunty aap bethiye" said gunjan offering both of them seats and went towards her room to call samrat while mayank was busy observing the paintings being hanged.

As samrat entered the hall he was shocked to see the person sitting before him. He quickly went and touched the feet of mm while gunjan was shocked .

"Aunty aap , oh sorry maa aap yahan" said samrat hugging mm

"Hey dude, yakin nahin hota ki main tumse mil raha hoon . after all it's 5 years ke baad hum ek dusre se mil rahe hain" said samrat hugging mayank while gunjan was standing there in shock which all the three of them noticed.

" tum ek dusre ko jaante ho" said gunjan confusingly

"haan beta yeh ek dusre ko college se jaante hain aur college ke baad mayank aur main US shift ho gaye to koi baat hi nahi ho paayi" said mm

sorry guys for no mayur

mayur meeting will be in next part

hope you liked it

plz do comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
i loved how u started.......i mean how nupur got splashed with water....

so mayank is gonna meet her today.....

bechara adhiraj! 😆

loved when sam already knows mayank......atleast now he wudn't do anything with mayank......

awesome update......

do continue soon.........
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Very Nice...plzz update soon...
thnxx 4 the pm..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
its a outstanding update
i just loved it
waiting 4 the mayur meeting
pls update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
omgg awesome and fabulas fantasticc update dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Awesome update.
it was wonderful and lovely.
loved when sammy and uday splashed water on nupur.
loved the plan bro-sis plan to cancel the proposal with adhi.
now just waiting 4 mayurs meeting .
update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
👏 👏 👏
tooo gud
liked how they did with adhiraj so funny😆
mayu coing to see nupur
oh sooo sweet
😳😳😳
cont soon
Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago

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