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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

vinu wonderful update dear

mayur meeting was amasing

nups always lucky for mayu

lovely update

waiting for next update

thanx maria
and nups will always be lucky for mayu
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti123

its too good vinu ...........loved the update ................thanx alot for the pm .................

thanx stuti nad glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kirti123

nice update thanks for the pm wtg for the next one 😊

thanx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

so sweet.........

awesome update.......
nupur called up mayank was best......
loved nupur and mayank's thoughts.......
update soon........

thanx a lot mahima
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

sorry dear..
i'm replyin so late .. had my MBA exams...
& abt d update luvd it dear...
bechaare Mayur log kitna tease karenge..šŸ˜†.
luvd it 2 d core..
pls update soon...šŸ¤—
-supriya

thanx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhi123

awesome terrific work di...............

loved it to core...............

do continue soon................

thanx surbhi
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part4
Nupur came down and saw every one was already there and was waiting for her. she came and took her seat. Everyone started having the breakfast when nupur's cell buzzed. It flashed mayank's name. Samrat saw the name and gave a teasing smile. Nupur saw him and gave him "don't u start again" look.
"Haan mayank kaho" said nupur
"Nupur r u free today" asked mayank
"Par tum yeh kis liye pooch rahe ho" asked nupur confused
"Main soch raha tha kyun na ek- ek cup coffee ho jaaye" said mayank
"Ok I have no problem" said nupur
"Toh thik hai Caf coffee day at 3.00" said mayank. Nupur too agreed and ended the call
"Lagta hai kuch logon ke pass ab humse baat karne kay liye time hi nahi hai, kyun uday" said samrat teasingly
"Haan bhai, bilkul sahi kaha ab toh logon ko breakfast karne ka bhi time nahi hai" said uday teasingly
"Bhai please stop it" said nupur and after finishing the breakfast she went to hospital.
At cafe coffee day
Mayank was waiting for nupur. Nupur came there after few minutes late.
"Sorry mayank aane main der ho gayi actually ek emergency operation tha to hoda late ho gaya" said nupur apologizing
"it's ok main bhi kuch der pehle hi aaya tha" said mayank and both took their seats
"So what would u like to have" asked mayank
"Cold coffee" said nupur.
"Nupur actually main tumhe kisi se milana chahta hoon, so would u come with me tomorrow" asked mayank hesitantly
"haan par kis se" asked nupur sipping coffee
"Woh to tumhe kal pata chalega, It's a surprise" said mayank. Just then he saw uday entering the restaurant.
"Hi nupur" said a girl
"Hey Cj tum yahan" asked nupur
"Haan who actually uday aur maine socha kyun na ek- ek cup coffee ho jaaye" said Cj. Just then uday came there.
"Mayank yeh hai Cj uday bhaiyya ki girlfriend, aur Cj yeh hai mayank" said nupur.
"Ok Cj I need to go now, I would talk to u later" said nupur and mayur left the caf. Mayank dropped nupur.
"Nupur kal 9.00 baje be ready I will pick u up" said mayank nad nupur nodded in yes
At shergill manshion
Nupur came home early.
"Hey bhabs" said nupur hugging gunjan
"Jaldi fresh hoke aa jao main chai banati hoon" said gunjan
"Bhabs chai nahi coffee" said uday in teasing tone. Nupur gave him not again look.
"Haan bhabhi coffee banaiye woh actually shayad uday bhaiyya aaj coffee nahi pi paaye onge afterall unke sath..." said nupur teasingly
"Uske saath kya nupur" asked gunjan
"Woh actually mere saath ek client tha is liye" said uday before nupur could say any thing. Nupur went to her room and freshened up and came down. And all the three of them chatted and had coffee.
Next day
Nupur got ready and came down for having breakfast. Just than mayank too arrived.
"Hi mayank" said samrat
"Hey samrat" said mayank
"Waise nupur tum itni subha , kahin jaa rahi ho kya" asked samrat
"Who actually main aur nupur....." Before he complete his sentence samrat stooped him
"Oh to pehle batana chaiye than a tum dono date pe jaa rahe ho lekin koi subha to date pe nahi jaata naa" said samrat teasingly
"Sorry samrat tumhara dil todne ke liye par hum dae pe nahi balki main nupur ko kisi se milana chahta hoon wahi le jaa raha hoon, ab agar sale saab ki permission ho to kya hum unke behan ko le jaa sakte hai" said mayank
"Ab itna pooch hi rahe ho to thik hai le jao" said samrat and all broke into laughter. Nupur and mayank left shergill manshion.
Mayank was driving. There was silence. Nupur decided to break the silence so she
"Mayank tum ab to batao hum jaa kahan rahe hai" asked nupur curiously
"Bus paanch minute nupur hum pohonch hi rahe hai" said mayank and both reached the place within ten minutes.
"Adharashram" said nupur and looked mayank confusingly. Both came out of the car. As the children playing there saw mayank coming out of the car. They came running towards him.
"Mayank bhaiyaa a gaye" shouted all the student and gathered around him
"Mayank bhaiyya yeh kaun hai" asked a girl pinting towards nupur
"main tumhari didi hoon" said nupur taking the girl in her arms
"baachon tum khelo main bus andar sab se milke aata hoon aur fir hum sab khelenge ok" said mayank
"Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee" yelled all the children's and went to play Mayank and nupur went inside. Nupur saw a group of old people sitting in room. Some were playing carom while some chess. The ladies were sitting and chatting. As mayank entered the room a smile appeared on everyone's face.
"Toh kaise hai aap sab" asked mayank with a broad smile on his face
"Dekhiye kaun aayi hai aapse milne" said mayank
"Ek minute yeh nupur hai naa" said a old lady
"Haan babes" said mayank hugging the lady
"Tu nahi sudhrega" said the lady hitting himsligthly
"Badi soni kudi hai yeh, par pata nahi tujh jaise shaitan ko kahan se pasand kiya isne" said the old lady and all along with nupur except mayank broke out into laughter. Nupur was chatting with the ladies while mayank was playing carom with mens. Nupur was enjoying. After an hour or two both came out and saw children's sitting upset.
"Kya hua tum sab aise kyun bete ho" asked mayank and sat between the children's
"Hume aapse koi baat nahi karni" said one of the boy
"aacha to aap sab humse naraj hai" said mayank
"Aapne toh kaha tha na bus kuch dair main aata hoon hum sab khelenge aur aap andar hi enjoy kar rahe they naa" said the another boy
"Sorry please aapne bhaiyya ko maaf kar do" said mayank making a puppy face
"Lekin aapko is ki punishment milegi, ab aap ko dan lena hoga" said the girl and blindfolded him."ab hume pakad ke dikhayie bhaiyaa" said the girl. Nupur was sitting and watching all this. She was enjoying herself. A girl came to her and held her hands and took her to play with them. It was still mayank's dan and he was still not able to catch anyone. A small girl just than pushed nupur purposely which caused nupur to fall on mayank.
"Pakad liya" said mayank and took out the cloth from his eyes. The liitle girl was giggling keeping her hands on her mouth.
"Di ab aap ki baari" said the girl and tied the cloth on her eyes. They played for about half-an-hour.after that all the children's were tired and so they went to rest. Nupur and mayank were sitting on the bench in the garden.
"thanx mayank mujhe yahan lane ke liye" said nupur
"Waise tum yahan kab se aate ho" asked nupur
"Peechle paanch saal se jab bhi waqt milta hai main yaha aa jata hoon" said mayank
"Par ek baat mujhe humesha dukh pohonchati hai woh ye ki bache aapne maa -baap ko is tarah kaise chod ke jaa sakti hai. Jinhone unhe chalna sikhaya, unhe bada banaya aur is kabil banaya ki woh is duniya main aapni pehchaan banaye un mata pita ko yeh baache jab unke mata pita ko unki sabse jyaada zarrorat hoti hai us waqt unhe chod dete hai unka saath nahi dete." Said mayank
"is liye mujhe jab bhi waqt milta hai main yahan aa jata hoon aur inke saath time spend karta hoon, shayad unka dukh thoda kum kar sakoon aur unhe thodi khushi doon" said mayank
"Shayad un bachoon ko shayad mata pita ki value nahi hai. Jin logon ke pass mata pita nahi hai unhe hi pata hai maa baap ka pyaar kya hota hai, who kitne taraste hai unke pyaar ke liye. Yeh log unlucky nahi balki woh baache unlucky hai" said nupur while teas formed in her eyes.
"Pata hai mere mom dad jab main choti thi atbhi unki death ho gayi par bhai ne mujhe kabhi mom dad ki kami mehsoos nahi hone di. Unhone meri har wish ko pura kiya." said nupur while tear rolled down her cheeks remembering her parents. Mayank placed his hands on her shoulder comforting her.
"Hey nupur please stop crying. I'm really sorry agar mujhe pata hota ki yahan aake tum upset ho jaaogi to main tumhe yahan kabhi nahi le aata." Said mayank
"No mayank main upset nahi hoon bus aaj in logon ko dekha to mom dad ki yaad aa gayi. Mujhe to yahan aake bohot aacha laga." Said nupur
"Aacha to please ab aap aapne yeh aasoon poch lijiye varna aapke bhai mujhe unke itne pyaari aur sweet behen ke aankhon main aansoon lane ke liye kabhi nahi chodega" said mayank and slight smile appeared on nupur's face. They spent the whole evening there playing with children's and enjoying with the old people.
hey guys here's the next part
hope u like it
plz do comment
Edited by wind453 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice updt thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update Vinu...........sweet and cute
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update liked it the ashram part was very touching ...........
thanks for the pm ........
continue soon 😊

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