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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Hey mahima nice ff dear.
Loved the conversations b/w the kids & also the scene b/w mayu & his mom.
waiting for their arrival in New Zealand.
Thanks for the pm.
Continue soon.
Posted: 15 years ago
#52
so im guessing that shilpa is miss navina's sister? i guess thats prolly how mayur will meet again!
anyways amazing start! continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
hey mahima it was awesome plzzz continue soon!!! 👏 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
PART 1- PAGE 4

PART 2

SUNSHINE SCHOOL

Miss Navina is scolding someone in her class.

SHILPA:- (suddenly entering) Gussa to hamesha naak par hi rehta hai'.
NAVINA:- Di aap'.. kab aayi?? (hugging her)
SHILPA:- Abhi abhi sedha airport se
MAYANK:- Namaste massi (to Navina)
NAVINA:-Arre mayu beta kitna bada ho gaya hai'. Akhri baar dekha tha tab 7 saal ka tha'' phir bhi tere saansar nahi badle
SHILPA:- Akhir beta kiska hai
MAYANK:- Massi aap toh Mayank bulao



NAVINA:-Thik hai Mayank (touching his hair)
MAYANK:- Massi balon ko maat chuo
NAVINA:-Sorry
THE ENGLISH BOY WHO NAVINA WAS SCOLDING:- Miss why did you say sorry'' Wat did he say
ANGEL:- He said 'aunt don't touch touch my hair'
NAVINA:-Absolutely right'.. ok kids'' this is my elder sis Shilpa
SHILPA:- Hi kids''' I am your new assistant teacher till the time your old teacher Miss Anupriya comes'''.
KIDS:- Welcome maam

The bell goes.

NAVINA:-You are free now. Its break time.

All the kids except 5 of them rush out.

SANAYA:- Miss Navina, Miss Anupriya ko kya hua
MOHIT:- Sis'' wo aapna tota dil jod rahi hai
RATI:- Tuta dil?? Unka dil kab tuta
MOHIT:- Jab maine unhe reject kar diya''..
ARJUN:- To unhe dher saara food khana chahiye''
RATI:- Dumbo'.. phir wo moti ho jaaygi aur koi bhi boyfriend nahi milega kyunki who sunder jo nahi hongi'
ANGEL:- Aisa kucch nahi hai'. Sundarta toh dil se hoti hai''. Ensaan ka dil saaf hona chahiye'.. uski shkal ka sundar hona zaroori nahi hai'' sacha pyaar to ensaan se hi hota hai''. Naki uski shakal surat se'..
SHILPA:- Wah beta kitne achi soch hai.
ANGEL:- Aisa maa kehti hai aur who most bestest hai.
NAVINA:-Bacho'.. waise miss Anupriya ki shaddi hai isleye who India gayi hai
MOHIT:- Maine reject jo kar diya tha'.. bechari ke paas koi aur option baccha hi nahi tha'''
SANAYA:- (scolding) Bahiya''''
MOHIT:- (cutely) Haan bolo meri sweet se boli bhali twin sissy'..
SHILPA:- Kitne pyaare bache hai
MAYANK:- Massi yaha bahut Indian families hai kya??
NAVINA:-Yeh sab ek hi family ko belong karte hai'. Bahut badi family hai''
MAYANK:- Ok massi
SHILPA:- Bacho apne naam toh batao
ANGEL:- Yeh hai Sanaya, Mohit, Rati aur Arjun (pointing to each one and saying)
SHILPA:- Aur tum
ANGEL:- Angel''
SHILPA:- Kitna pyaara naam hai
ANGEL:- Maa ne jo rekha hai'..

Bell goes again. The break ends. Students start studying. Shilpa mainly interacts with Angel, Sanaya, Mohit, Rati and Arjun. The bell goes again.

NAVINA:-Play time kids'. Have fun

Everyone rushes out. Even Shilpa and Mayank go out as Navina has to do some work.



Suddenly a ball hits Mayank.

MAYANK:- Who threw this ball?
ANGEL:- Sorry uncle who galti se lag gayi
MAYANK:- (shouting) tumhe dekh kar khelna chahiye tha meri shirt gandi kar di na'.
SHILPA:- Mayu bachi hai''jaane de
ANGEL:- Maine sorry bola tha'. aur waise bhi akhein hai ya button' dekh kar nahi chal sakte thae'.. yeh ek playground hai''.

(Mohit, Sanaya, Rati and Arjun come there)

ANGEL:- Aaj tak meri muma ne bhi mujhse itni uchi awaz mein baat nahi ki'
MAYANK:- Lagta hai tumhari muma ne kuch aur bhi nahi kiya'.. bado se baat karne ki tameez tumhe nahi sikhayi .
ANGEL:- Apne meri muma ki insult ki'.. apki itni himaat'.. main aapko'..
SANAYA:- (cutting her) di bas bhi karo'. Kitna ladogi
ARJUN:- Haan meri same blood group wali sis' sadu loge se baat karne ka kya fayda
MOHIT:- Chal na hum basketball khilte hai''
ANGEL:- Thik hai'.. chalte hain'' waise bhi faltu logo par time waste nahi karna chahiye'.. Sanaya, Rati and Arjun tum log bhi khelo hamare saath.
ARJUN:- Mujhe bhuk laag rahi hai
SANAYA:- Mujhe padna hai
RATI:- Aur mein khilugi toh meri frock gandi ho jayegi
MOHIT:- No problem guys

Mohit and Angel go to play basket ball. Sanaya, Rati and Arjun go and do their respective works.

SHILPA:- Tujhe Angel se itne guse mein baat nahi karni chahiye thi''..
MAYANK:- Maa aap ne dekha na ki who kitni batameezi
SHILPA:- (cutting him) mayu who bahut saaf dil ki bacchi hai'' tu usse sorry bol
MAYANK:- Maa par
SHILPA:- Par war kuch nahi'''. Tu usse sorry bol raha hai'''
MAYANK:- Thik hai maa kal bol dunga who abhi khel rahi hai
SHILPA:- Ok mayu''. Aab andar chalte hai

They go inside. After sometime the bell goes. Its chuti time. All the kids go home. Angel, Rati, Arjun, Mohit and Sanaya remain. Mayank and his mom come out.

SHILPA:- Bacho tum aab tak ghar nahi gaye''' half an hour ho gaya hai chuti ko huae''..
ANGEL:- Muma abhi tak nahi ayi''' aisa pehle to kabhi nahi hua (almost in tears)

Dia and Benji enter.



RATI:- Muma''. Papa''.

All the 5 kids rush towards them.

ANGEL:- Massi'' muma kaha hai''
DIA:- Angel wo tumhari muma ka ek
BENJI:- Chota sa ancident ho gaya hai'' wo sidhiyo se phesal gayi'..
ANGEL:- (had tears in her eyes) muma thik toh hai na
DIA:- Haan'' doctor ne kucch din bed rest bola hai''..
ANGEL:- (still in tears) agar muma ko lucch ho jata toh main

Mayank and his mom were seeing all this. Mayank couldn't see tears in Angel's eyes. He rushed to her.

MAYANK:- Don't worry'. Tumhari muma ko kuch hua toh nahi na'' ab rona baand karo'' (wiping her tears which were not stoping)
DIA AND BENJI:- Tum!!!!!!



ARJUN:- Aap log es sadu uncle ko jante ho???
BENJI:- (laughing)sadu''..

Arjun, Mohit, Sanaya and Rati tell about the bal incident.

DIA:- Bacho car mein jakkar batho'.. hum abhi ayye

Kids go to the car.

BENJI:- Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho Mayank
SHILPA:- (coming to them) actually hum yaha shift hue hai'' wo main Navina ki behen hoon''.. tum sab kaise ho'.. aur yaha New Zealand mein''



DIA:- Hum sab perfect hain'' 6 saal se yaha hain''
MAYANK:- Aur Nupur
BENJI:- Don't you dare take her name''.. otherwise i'll kill you'' aur
DIA:- Hum sab ke ya bacho ke paas jaane ki koshish bhi maat karna''.
BENJI:- Especially Angel ke''.. warna
DIA:- Hum se bura koi nahi hoga'..
MAYANK:- (shocked at their sudded outburst) main toh bas pucch raha tha''..
BENJI:- Aage se kabhi maat poochna''.
DIA:- Benji mujhe lagta hai ke aab hume chalna chahiye''. Byee aunty''.

They go leaving Shilpa shocked and Mayank shocked as well as hurt with there sudden outburst.



PART 3- PAGE 14
Edited by MJHTFANMAHIMA - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
#55
is angel mayur's daughter?? idk y i think she is
anyways amazing updt
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
excellent part.....

loved the update!

is angel mayur's daughter?

do continue soon..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
hye. angel keya mayank or nupur ki beti hai?

its a outstanding update

pls update soon

i cant wait
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

is angel mayur's daughter?? idk y i think she is
anyways amazing updt
continue soon



you are the first to comment

and youf guess is right as usual that angel is mayur's daughter
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

excellent part.....

loved the update!

is angel mayur's daughter?

do continue soon..........



yup angel is mayur's daughter
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Tapoor

hye. angel keya mayank or nupur ki beti hai?

its a outstanding update

pls update soon

i cant wait



yup angel is mayur's daughter

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