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PART 7- PAGE 36

PART 8

FLASHBACK

13 FEBRUARY, 2010

Excel college

Nupur is walking through the corridor of EXCEL COLLEGE when suddenly she is pulled in a classroom.
NUPUR:- Chor''..chor''. bachao
MAYANK:- I love you
NUPUR:- Mayank, tum ho. Main toh darr hi gayi thi, by god
MAYANK:- Yeh kaise jawab hua
NUPUR:- Matlab??
MAYANK:- Maine I love you kaha aur tum ho ki'' (taking a step forward)
NUPUR:- Mayank, who mujhe''. (taking a sterp backward)
MAYANK:- Tumhe kya, nupur?? (taking another step forward)
NUPUR:- Mujhe kucch kaam hai (taking another step forward)
MAYANK:- Mujhse important aur kya kaam ho sakta hai (taking another step forward)
Nupur is pinned up ahainst the wall by mayank who is just a few centimetres away from her.
NUPUR:- Koi aa jayega
MAYANK:- Aane do
NUPUR:- Koi dekh lega
MAYANK:- Dekhne do
NUPUR:- Koi kya soochega
MAYANK:- Yehi ki MAYANK SHARMA apni girlfriend se kitna pyaar karta hai (moving more closer to her)
NUPUR:- Mayank (now they are just a few millimetres away)
MAYANK:- (putting his hand on nupur's lips) I love you nupur''' you mean everything to me''. You are my reason to live''
NUPUR:- Mayank (lost in his chocolate brown eyes)
MAYANK:- Aur tumhe kabhi bhi daarne ki koi zaroorat nahi''. Mere hote hua koi tumhe dekh bhi nahi sakta chuna toh dur ki baat hai'.
Nupur hugs mayank. He hugs her back.
MAYANK:- (breaking the hug) waise tumhe kya kaan tha?
NUPUR:- Woh samrat ko kucch help chahiye thi gunjan ka gift lene mein''.
MAYANK:- Gift?
NUPUR:- Woh kal''.. (changing topic) tum bhi na''. main bul hi gayi samrat mera college gate par wait kar raha hoga''
She goes. Mayank is left alone.
MAYANK:- (to himself) nupur mujhe pata hai kal valentines day hai''.. main bhula nahi hoon''. Aur ka ka din tumhare liye bahut special hoga''

3 hours later

The whole college is in the courtyard to see a special proposal.
SAMRAT:- Kneeling before gunjan with flowers in one hand) will you be my valentine, chashmish?
GUNJAN:- Yes
The whole college claps. Taking advantage of the situation adhiraj proposes suhani who also says yes.

1 hour later
Nupur, gunjan, dia and suhani are talking about valentines day.
DIA:- Samrat aur adhiraj ne toh itne romantic tarah se pucha''. Waise nupur mayank ne tumhe propose kiya ya phir who bhi pure college ke samne''.
NUPUR:- Mayank aur pure college ke samne''.. dia tuh thik toh ho na''. mayank aur valentines day ka koi connection nahi hai''. Usse toh pata bhi nahi ki kal valentines day naam ka bhi koi din hai'..
Mayank has heard all this.
MAYANK:- (to himself) nupur thoda intezaar karo''..

1 hour later

Mayank, samrat, benji, uday and adhiraj are in the canteen.
BENJI:- Samrat kya proposal tha''.. dude you rock''. Aur adhiraj tune bhi kamal kar diya''
ADHIRAJ:- Akhir guru samrat ka student jo hoon'
SAMRAT:- Waise mayank tum ne nupur ko kaise propose kiya?
UDAY:- Sam'' tu thik toh hai na''.. mayank ko tho valentines day ka v bhi nahi ata''
Mayank looks angrily at uday.
UDAY:- Sorry
BENJI:- Mayank tum uday ko angry young man wale looks dena baand karo'.. usne thik hi toh kaha''.
MAYANK:- Shut up guys''
And he leaves from there

11:55 p.m (bhushan mansion)

Nupur is roaming on the terrace. Suddenly she hears a noise which startles her. It is of bursting crackers. She looks up at the sky and wat she sees takes her to the seventh heaven.

NUPUR
I LOVE YOU
WILL YOU BE MY VALENTINE?
MAYANK

She feels someone hold her hand. She looks down. She sees mayank kneeling before her with just one rose in his hand.
MAYANK:- Main tumhe pur college ke samne nahi balki puri duniya ke samne propose karna chahta tha'.. main valentines day kabhi nahi bhul sakta'' kyunki ek saal phele issi din ki wajan se mujhe pata chala ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon'''. I love you nupur''
NUPUR:- I love you too (taking the rose)
MAYANK:- (still kneeling) Will you be my valentine for life?
NUPUR:- For life?
MAYANK:- Har saal kaun propse karta phirega
NUPUR:- Mayank'..
She turns to leave.
MAYANK:- Tumne jawab nahi diya?
Nupur turns and nods her head.
NUPUR:- Aab jao aur so jao'' good night''.. sweet dreams''
MAYANK:- Good night''.. and 'mayank' dreams''..

14 FEBRUARY

Bhushan mansion

The minute nupur steps out of the house, red rose petals fall on her. She is wearing a white suit.
Dia, uday and gunjan also come there.
DIA:- Mayank tum yaha kya kar rahe ho''.
Mayank is wearing a red shirt and blue jeans.
MAYANK:- Apni valentine ko pick karne aaya hoon''..
DIA:- Oooooooooo''
UDAY:- Waise mayank tumse itne romantic proposal ki umeed nahi ki thi''
MAYANK:- Nupur chale (stretching his hand)
Nupur nods and puts her hand on mayank's hand.
They leave. Mayank goes to a bike and sits on it.
MAYANK:- Nupur baitho
NUPUR:- Tumna bike kab li?
MAYANK:- Kal? Aab koi aur sawal maat poochna warna hum college ke liye late ho jayege.
Nupur sits on the bike and puts her one hand on mayank's shoulder. Mayank removes her hand from his shoulder and puts it around his waist. He then takes nupur's another hand and also puts it around his waist. Mayank then gives a sudden brake. This brings nupur closer to him and he hugs him tigthtly.
NUPUR:- Mayank thik se chalao''
MAYANK:- Nahi'.. main toh aise hi chalauga'.
NUPUR:- Mayank''.
MAYANK:- Nupur'.. tum bhi na''. agar main thik se chalaoga toh kya tum mere itne kareeb hogi?
Nupur blushes. They reach college. Nupur is hugging mayank tightly.
MAYANK:- College aa gaya (whispering in nupur's ears)
NUPUR:- Kaha? Itna jaldi
MAYANK:- Nupur half an hour ho chuka hai college ko aaye
NUPUR:- Kya (getting down) tumne mujhe phele kyun nahi bataya
MAYANK:- Mood nahi kiya
NUPUR:- Main ja rahi hoon college mein''. Tumhara jab mood kare aa jana''..
Nupur is about to leave. Mayank holds her hand.
MAYANK:- Kabhi mujhe chood kar maat jaana''. Main mar''
NUPUR:- (putting her hands on mayank's lips) aisi baat phir kabhi mat karna''. Cholo class mein chalte hai warna der ho jayegi

Classroom

Shukla sir's lecture is going on.
Mayank and nupur are sitting together. Suddenly mayank holds nupur's hand under the desk.
NUPUR:- Mayank, kya kar rahe ho?
MAYANK:- Akhen hai ya button''.. pad raha hoon'..
NUPUR:- Mayank tum''.
SHUKLA SIR:- (before she could complete) mohodaya nupur bhushan'.. kya aap uthne ka khast karegi'..
Nupur tries to stand up but mayank dosen't leave her hand. Nupur gives him a kick.
MAYANK:- Ouch (leaving nupur's hand)
SHUKLA SIR:- Mayank kya hua?
MAYANK:- Sir woh''.
SHUKLA SIR:- Koi baat nahi''. Toh aap yeh bataye ki aap ki nazar mein pyaar kya hai''. Aaj valentines day hain na isliye''.
MAYANK:- Meri nazar mein pyaar sirf aur sirf "nupur" hai'..
Nupur looks at mayank. Both are lost in each others eyes. At that time the bell rings. Everyone goes out only mayank and nupur are left.
Suddenly they hear a coughing sound. This breaks their eye contact.
NUPUR:- Samrat tum kab ayye?
MAYANK:- Haan samrat tum kyun''. Mera matlab kab ayye?
SAMRAT:- Sorry dude'.. mera tum dono ka romance kharab karna ka irada nahi tha'..
DIA:- par hum sab 1 hour se tum dono ko bula rahe hai''.
BENJI:- Aur tum ho ki''.
NUPUR:- Mujhe kucch kaam hai'.
SUHANI:- oooooooooo
UDAY:- Kaam?
GUNJAN:- Really di?
Nupur blushes and leaves.
SAMRAT:- Kya baat hai dude maan gaye aapko''.. aapne toh guru samrat ko bhi picche chod diya''.
ADHIRAJ:- Right mayank, not fair''. Hume toh tips de diye hote''..
MAYANK:- Sudhar jao'..
GANG:- dost dost na raha''. Pyaar sab kucch baan gaya
They keep on teasing mayank.

Locker room

Nupur opens her locker and sees a teddy. It was holding a heart that said 'I love you'
NUPUR:- So cute (to the teddy)
MAYANK:- Teddy cut hai''.. aur teddy gift karne wala
NUPUR:- Sabse cute
MAYANK:- Sirf cute kehne se kaam nahi chalega'' mujhe toh ek thank you kiss chahiye''.
Nupur blushes and kisses him on the cheek.
MAYANK:- Not fair'' tumne cheeks par kiss kiya''.
NUPUR:- Tumne specify nahi kiya tha kaha par''.. aur waise bhi tum hi kehte ho na everything is fair in love and war''
MAYANK:- Meri billi mujhe hi meow''
NUPUR:- Tum ne mujhe billi kaha''' main tumse baat nahi karugi'.
MAYANK:- Nupur suno toh'..
Nupur leaves.

Canteen

Nupur is sitting by herself.
NUPUR:- Us mayank ki toh''
MAYANK:- (putting a chocolate box in front of her) chocolate kha lo''. Phir shayad mee baare mein kucch sweet bate kar lo''..
NUPUR:- Mujhe nahi chahiye
MAYANK:- Maine kab kaha tumhare liye hai'.. main toh yeh chocolates ishika ke liye''.
NUPUR:- Tumhe mere alawa kissi aur ladki ko gift dete hue sharam nahi ayyegi'..
MAYANK:- Tumhe nahi lagta tum over react kar rahi ho'' main toh'..
NUPUR:- Yeh chocolares main hi khaugi.
She opens the box. Inside there were heart shaped chocolates and a piece of paper which read sorry. Nupur looks towards mayank who bows his head down.
MAYANK:- Sorrry''' dil se sorry''' duniya mein jitne sorry sab sorry''..
NUPUR:- Tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge''' 'nupur bhushan' ne tumhe maaf kiya''.
They share a cute hug.

Valentine ball
Nupur is standing. Mayank comes and hugs her from behind
Love you
NUPUR:- Love you too
MAYANK:- Chale
NUPUR:- Kaha?
MAYANK:- Surprise hai
NUPUR:- Surprise? Kaisa surprise
MAYANK:- Chalogi tab pata chalega''' chale
Nupur nods her head and they go outside.
Mayank puts a blindfold on nupur's eyes.
NUPUR:- Kya kaar rahe ho?
MAYANK:- Barosa rakho nupur''.. main tumhe kidnap nahi karuga''. Aur kucch maat poochna bas chup chap bike par betho''

Nupur does as mayank says and holds him tightly. Mayank stops the bike after an hour. He helps nupur gets down, holds her hand and helps her to walk. After walking for 5 minutes he removes the blindfold. Nupur feels like she is flying.
The place was beautifu. There were rose petals all over the grass. There was a small shade in between of the place. Under the shade there was a table and two chairs with a candle in the middle.

Nupur looks at mayank and a background tune starts. Mayank starts singing.

dil ibaadat kar raha hai, dhadakane meri son
tujhakoo main kar loon haasil lage hai yahin dhun
(taking nupur towars the table)

Zindagi ki shaak se loon kuch haseen pal main chun
tujhako main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahin dhun
(making nupur sit on the chair and he sits opposite her)

dil ibaadat kar raha hai, dhadakane meri son
tujhakoo main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahin dhun
zindagi ki shaak se loon kuch haseen pal main chun
tujhakoo main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahin dhun
(they finish eating and mayank takes nupur in the open)

jo bhi jitanee pal jiyo, unhe tere sang jiyo
(putting his hand on her waist)

jo bhi kal ho abb mera use tere sang jiyo
(she puts her hand across his neck)

jo bhi saansein main bharu unhe tere sang bharu
(bringer her closer to him)

chaahee jo ho raastae use tere sang chalo
(swaying to the music)

dil ibaadat kar raha hai, dhadakane meri son
tujhakoo main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahin dhun
(it starts raining)

mujhakoo de tu mit jaane abb khud se dil mil jaane
kyun hai itana faasala
(kissing nupur on her lips which sends a chill down her spines)

lamahe yeh phir na aane inakoo tu na de jaane
tu mujhape khud koo de luta
(nupur turns to leave and mayank holds her hand)

tujhe tujhase tod loon kahin khud se jod loon
meri jismoo jaan pe aa teri khushbu odh loon
(bringing her closer to him)

jo bhi saansein main bharu unhe tere sang bharu
chaahe joo hoo raasta use tere sang chalu
(twirling her)

dil ibaadat kar rahaa hai dhadakane meri sun
tujhakoo main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahin dhun
(as the rain gets heavier they go inside to change. Mayank removes his shirt and is topless. Meanwhile nupur wears a night dress as she couldn't find anything else. The minute she comes out mayank gets lost in her.)

baahoon mein de bas jaane sine mein de chhup jaane
tujh bin main jaau toh kahaan
(he hugs her tightly caressing her back)

tujhase hai mujhakoo paane yaadon ke woh najraane
ik jinape hak ho bas mera
(kissing her lips again but this time deepening the kiss)

teri yaadoon mein rahu tere khaabon mein jagu
mujhe dhundhein jab koyi teri aankhon mein milu
(carring her in his arms and making an eye contact with her)

jo bhi saansein main bharu unhe tere sang bharu
chaahe jo ho raasta use tere sang chalu
(making her lie on the bed and he lies on top of her)

dil ibaadat kar raha hai, dhadakane meri sun
tujhako main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahin dhun
(gibing her a passionate kiss on her lips and this time nupur deepens the kiss submitting herself to him)

Lights out

PART 9- PAGE 48

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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lovely update
do cont soon
Edited by fanofmjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
u used the scenes really well.....

i loved what u wrote....

the flashback was really superb..

now i am blushing.....

i know how it feels when u write romantic parts.....i have faced this...

but awesome part.......

loved it loads......

do continue soon........
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear.....
omg omg omg!!!!
juss stunning upd8!!!
m blushing!!!!
i juss luvd the upd88888!!!!!!!
hey!! plssss plsss plsss do cont asap...
thanx 4 d pm... :)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Hi dear.
it was just wonderful
fantastic.
mind blowing.
Oh i loved their confession.
then valentine day+class scene every thing was superb.
and then the manao part was too good.
awwww mayu gave her chocolates . he is so sweet.
and then their dating.
I enjoy the whole part.
it was just awesome.
outstanding update.
keep updating.
Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing
no words
thnx for pm
waiting for next part
gnt take long time to continue

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OMG!What a fabulous update for Valentine Day:)
Read it all...U rock!
Mayur were too CUTE+ROMANTIC= PASSIONATE!
The kiss!! They were lost!
OMG! Is it really:)
Love how Mayu surprized Nupuz!!
DIL IBADAT! One of my fav song:)
Love ur editing, Every n each part!
Keep rocks jaan/updating,
Your Aisho.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Mahima

wat an awwsome Romantic update

loved it to the core

Loved the way Mayank asked Nupur in front of the whole world

The scene in the shade was too good...

I'm blushing......😳

Dil ibadat is my fav song

loved the whole update dear

do continue soon

luv
Nidzy
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wow Mahima
totally rocking hai ji
i loved the part
amazing
superb
kitna cutie pie tha
never imgined mayank like this
thanks for the pm

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