MaYur SS When Strangers Meet Updated page 14!!!! - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
why its 2 short dear
but its lovey update
keep it up
and pls cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
Amazing part but very short..............Oh Nupur is crying..........No Yaaaaaaar please dont let nupur cry.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Part 1
It was funny
I never knew Mayu culd fight wit a gal in public
Like the way they welcomed each other
Lets c how it goes
Hop Sanju sloves their prob
Bandar and Kachre ka dabbe was literally funny😆
Part 2
Nups was actually too rude to him
She dosent respect Mrs Aha is shock
Hated their rude behaviours towards each other
Hated wen mayu was abt to Cry [Par Mayu aur Cry i doubt]
Nups felt bad good
Now both shuld say Sorry to each other
Part 3
Nups was actually very concerned for him
Like the Jija saali Convo
Evn liked wen Nups teased Sam ki Pura hall book kiya ki nahi😆
She got stuck in library
No bhi kiska dial kiya😆
Sanajna ka 😆
Mayu will be cuming to save her
My hero liked this words frm Nups mouth
Part 4
It was stoo short jana
But liked it
Why did Nups again remembered him that part of the day
Hated it wen he became rude too her
Hop her Tears make him Weak and he realise wat he said
All the Best for exams jana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
gr88
thanxxxxxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
Lovely update dear

I hope they become friends soon

but the part was really short

do continue soon next time try to make it longer

luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
Heyyyy
Really nice update
Sorry for late comment
Plzzzz continue soon
N best of luck for exams
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

MayUr FF When Strangers Meet

Firstly, I'm sooooo sorry for the horrible delay!!! Kaan pakar ke sorry!!! And here's the next part in it!!!

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Recap: Nupur is totally opposite of Mayank from her attitude to her attire. They have only one thing in common; their temper. So their first meet is anything but pleasant. The same day in excel college, she finds out that her best friend Sanjana is in fact the sister of whom she calls the 'sadoo' Mayank. So there breaks out another war between MayUr. Neither are willing to compromise and apologize to the other. But life takes another turn! Nupur gets locked up inside the college library! She calls Mayank and cries for him to save her. Once again, Nupur is left hurt because of Mayank's anger towards her…

AND NOW…

'Yehi hai ek fark hum dono ke beech.'

Mayank said in anger. I didn't know what to say. He was right after all. He was right. I looked at him and whispered.

'I'm sorry…'

Mayank's eyes flashed with anger.

'Sorry??! Main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karoonga samjhi?!'

I looked down guiltily.

'Mujhe pata hai ke maine tumhe buhot burri tarha se treat kiya hai. Par mujhe ek mauka tho do uss galti ko sudhaarne ke liye?'

Mayank laughed sarcastically.

'Tumhaara kya bharosa? Tum larkiyaan ho hi aise. Tum phir mujhe hurt karoge. Phirse. Mujhe ek baat samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Main kyun tumhe dusra mauka doon? Hum dono ka rishta kya hai? Kya lagti ho tum meri?'

He grabbed my shoulders tightly. I winced in pain.

'Ouch! Mayank!'

He didn't ease off.

'You are just a liar…. A liar….'

He shoved his hands in his pockets and walked away.

I sobbed loudly and ran after him.

'Mayank! Please Mayank! Tum aise nahi jaa sakte ho! Plz Mayank! Main sirf ek mauka maang rahi hoon!'

Mayank looked at me with tears in his eyes.

'Aur who mauka main nahi de sakta.'

He marched off, leaving me crying on the floor. Why did he have to say that? I wanted to know him. I wanted to make him feel better. But why? He was right. We hardly knew each other! Why did I want him so badly? I didn't know. All I knew was that I needed him. I needed him badly.

Mayank's POV: I got into the car and slammed the door after me. I had never before been so angry. I didn't know why! Suddenly, I heard a voice behind me.

'Mayank bhayyia?'

I turned around. It was Sanjana. I quickly wiped my tears and smiled.

'Eh chutki! Tu yahan kab ayyi?'

She didn't smile.

'Nupur se milne gayye the?'

I scoffed.

'Main usse milne nahi, usse bachaane gayya tha.'

She sighed.

'Bhayyia…. Aap mujhse kuch chuppa rahe hain. Aapko Nupur ka attitude bilkul pasand nahi hai na?'

I laughed nervously. How did she know?

'Chutkiiii…. Main theek hoon.'

She shook her head.

'Aapne jawaab nahi diya.'

I frowned at her.

'Haan. Mujhe uski attitude bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai ok? Now can we plz stop talking about her?'

She placed a hand on my shoulder.

'Bhayyia… aap Nupur ko nahi samajh rahe hain.'

I glared at her.

'Kya matlab? Aur samajhna baaki hai kya?'

I clenched my fists as I thought about her.

'Bhayyia…. Plz, ek baar meri baat tho sun lijiye….'

I looked at her and sighed.

'Fine. Bol jo bhi bolna hai.'

She smiled.

'Aap Nupur ko meri tarha nahi jaante hain. Uski maa bachpan me hi guzar gayyi thi. Usko kabhi ek maa ka pyaar nahi milla. Bhai…. Who sirf ek larki hi tho hai! Who bhi chahti hai ki koi usse behad pyaar kare…. Ek maa ki kami kabhi mehsoos na karne de. Issi liye who apni asli roop kabhi dikhati nahi hai. Usse dar lagta hai bhai. Usse rone se dar lagta hai. Who apni feelings ko dabaati hai taaki koi yeh na jaan sakke ki who kitni weak hai. Woh khush nahi hai bhai. Uske dil me hamesha ek dard rehta hai. Hum dono yeh soch bhi nahi sakte ki ek maa khone ka kya assar partha hai. Please bahi…. Usse aur dard mat do…. Usse aur dard mat do.'

I had tears in my eyes once again.

'Ch-chutki? Tu sach bol rahi hai na?'

She nodded. I rubbed my temples.

'Yeh maine kya kar diya…/ Yeh maine kya kar diya…?'

She declared softly.

'Bhaiiya… abhi bhi der nahi hui hai. Ander jaake maafi maang lijiye. Usko abhi sahaare ki zarurat hai.'

I wiped my tears and nodded. I leapt out of the car and into the building. I saw Nupur crying on the floor. I ran to her.

'Nupur! Nupur! Tum ro rahi ho?'

She looked at me and hugged me. I felt a sudden urge. A thirst. I hugged her back tightly.

'rona band karo Nupur! Main hoon na tumhare saath?'

She gazed into my eyes.

'Promise?'

She asked. I nodded. She smiled.

'Thank u Mayank. Thx so much.'

END

I hope u enjoyed the update! Plz do comment and once again, so sorry for the delay!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
Loved it
I actually cried wit Mayu n Nups
Really Nups stry is senti
Hop Mayu dosent breaks his promise
Plz add me to ur pm list
Update jaldi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
Mayank "Main hoo na"
wow too good
Plz PM me next time
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update
but not fair na
tumne itni derr kiyu ki
dont be late yaar
update next part soon

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