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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 8

Mayank and Nupur entered the Sizzlers, side by side. To an outsider it would seem that they were lovers, because there was an obvious chemistry between them. To the outside world they looked like a madly-in-love couple.
Nupur spotted Gunjan and walked towards her.
"Congratulations Gunjan," she said, hugging her friend.
"Congratulations to you too," Gunjan said, hugging her back.
Once again, to the outside world the girls looked like long lost sisters or friends. Mayank approached them and sighed.
"Now if you guys are done can I congratulating each other can I congratulate my sister Nupur?" he asked, rather rudely.
Nupur backed off, a little hurt. She looked at Mayank, wondering why he was being rude to her.
"Congrats sis!" Mayank said, hugging Gunjan.
"Thanks bro," Gunjan said. "I'm damn nervous to be here."
"Don't be sis, coz I came her just for you," Mayank said.
"Oh don't lie to me," Gunjan said. "There is no excuse for you to come to Sizzlers."
"How can you know me SO well Gunjan?" Mayank asked. "Anyways...HEY isn't that Samrat Shergill?"
Gunjan turned, 180 degrees and saw Samrat talking to a friend. She thought of approaching him, but decided not to. Just then she saw Mayank walking towards him.
"Hey dude," Mayank said. "You must know me right?"
"Erm no," Samrat lied. "Am I supposed to?"
"I'm THE Mayank Sharma," Mayank said. "And you are THE Samrat Shergill."
"Thanks for remindind me of who I am," Samrat said.
"You know since we both are the THE men in the fashion industry, we ought to be best friends," Mayank said.
"I already have a best friend," Samrat said, pointing to Mohit.
"Who says you can't have two?" Mayank asked.
Just then both Nupur and Gunjan came there. Samrat was speechless when he saw the latter. He just kept staring at her, his eyes transfixed on hers. Mayank followed his gaze and raised his eyebrows.
"I see that you've met my sister," he said.
"Your sister?" Samrat said, lost for words.
"Yes, my sister," Mayank said, coldly. "Come on girls lets go for a dance."
He took both Nupur and Gunjan by both his hands and walked towards the dance floor. Samrat simply stared after Gunjan. Nupur couldn't understand how Mayank could be so cold at one time and so warm at the other. Did he suffer from split personality disorder or something?
~~~~~~~~~~~
The much awaited dance sequence
Mayank suddenly disappeared. Nupur and Gunjan looked for him when-
Oyye bulbul hoy
Bulbul bulbul bulbul bulbul
Bulbul bulbul bulbul bulbul
They saw Mayank dancing in the middle of the stage. Some overcame Nupur and ran upto the stage. This was one of her favourite songs.

Kahin sharm varm mein chupi hun, aisi khubiyan
Kahin narm garm mein thami hun, aisi khubiyan
Kahin chal dhal mein dhabhi hun
Kahin josh mosh mein dhiki hun
Kahin chal dhal mein dhabhi hun
Kahin josh mosh mein dhiki aisi khubiyan

Nupur was dancing with full energy, shedding all inhibitions. Mayank looked at her in surprise. He couldn't believe it was the same shy Nupur he encountered at home. She was dancing in a totally filmy manner, showing her ada to te world.

Zaamane ko bida kar de
Mujhe sab se juda kar de
Ohhh aa dhikha de hame teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan , teri khubiyan
Oh loot lenge hume teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan , teri khubiyan
Show me your jalwa
Show me, Show me your jalwa
Show me your jalwa
Mayank pulled her close and almost gave her a hug. Nupur never really noticed this, because she just kept dancing, in Mayank's arms. Mayank inhaled her sweet scent and gasped at how beautiful she could get.
Tere chamach, tere chakoo, tere belan, tere ghungroo
Teri mamta, tere zevar, tere khusboo, tere tevar
Now they were joined by Gunjan who was dancing well, but not as well as Nupur was.
Tere chamach, tere chakoo, tere belan, tere ghungroo
Teri mamta, tere zevar, tere khusboo, tere tevar
Mayank pulled both the girls and twirled them around.

Teri chowki, tere gale, teri nakhre, teri chale
Teri nazron ki woh kali, tere kano ki woh lali

Teri yedi ki woh khan khan
Teri choti se ho ann mann
Tere palkhe teri bindi
Teri urdu teri hindi

Nupur went forward and danced. She had pulled Mayank and they were dancing, hand-in-hand. Samrat was watching all this from a distance.

Teri ??? jo ho nirali,
Harkate woh kali kali
Teri tithli se woh bali
Teri bigili se woh tali

Teri bigili se woh tali

Samrat decided to join the golden trio and walked upto the stage, leaving a shocked Mohit behind.

Zaamane ko bida kar de
Mujhe sab se juda kar de
Ohhh aa dhikha de hame teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan , teri khubiyan
Oh loot lenge hume teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan , teri khubiyan
Show me your jalwa
Show me, Show me your jalwa
Show me your jalwa

Show me your jalwaaaa…

Samrat danced, uncomfortably though, but still did. Gunjan watched in shock, but joined him. He took her hand and swung her around, causing her to fall into his hands.

Teri chale, tere gale, tere barche, tere baale
Tere gusse, tere jalve, teri kisse, tere talve —2

Tere josho ko junoon, tere hole hole khoon,
Tere ugde se andaaz, tere sene ke woh raaz

Teri moocho ki woh shane, tere kisse jane maane
Teri woh dhobi pathad, tere noto ki pahad

Mayank now did something that surprised everyone, most of all Nupur. He pulled her close and lifted her up in the air, twirling along. He looked at her lovingly and she looked at him, her eyes full of doubt, happiness and sadness.

Tere kisse, tere nagme, tere hisse, tere sapne
Tere agle, tere pechle
So gaye aarman jo nikle

So gaye aarman jo nikle

Gunjan slowly straightened up, embarassed of what had just happened. Samrat looked down.
Mayank slowly put Nupur down, not taking his eyes off her.

Zaamane ko bida kar de
Mujhe sab se juda kar de
Ohhh aa dhikha de hame teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan , teri khubiyan
Oh loot lenge hume teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan
O teri khubiyan , teri khubiyan
Show me your jalwa
Show me, Show me your jalwa
Show me your jalwa

All four of them danced randomly, Mayank holding Nupur's hands and Samrat Gunjan's.
End of Part 8
Guys I had a written a longer part full off romance before the song started, but I pressed something by mistake and lost it :(
Hope this was good enough.
Pre-cap:- LOADS of romantic scenes between the couples😳
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Nidz
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Posted: 15 years ago
haaayeee meriiiiii jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaann!!!!
aaaajjjj to tunneeeeeeee mujhheeeee maarneee kiii full preepaaratioonn kiiihuiii haii laggingss haii
auurr tankss to lispsiiiii u finallyyy updatedddd
*hugs lipsii*
theee updateeeee wuuzzzz kiilllnnnggggg nidzzzzyyyyy
i loveeddd itt to thee coreeeee
updatee soooooonnn!
ohhhh ndddd i forgotttt thee rituaaal-
bashiiaaanseeerrtiiii muheerrguasss bachistaaaaaaaa mastaaaaraampaaaaaa
:P:P
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

haaayeee meriiiiii jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaann!!!!

aaaajjjj to tunneeeeeeee mujhheeeee maarneee kiii full preepaaratioonn kiiihuiii haii laggingss haii
auurr tankss to lispsiiiii u finallyyy updatedddd
*hugs lipsii*
theee updateeeee wuuzzzz kiilllnnnggggg nidzzzzyyyyy
i loveeddd itt to thee coreeeee
updatee soooooonnn!
ohhhh ndddd i forgotttt thee rituaaal-
bashiiaaanseeerrtiiii muheerrguasss bachistaaaaaaaa mastaaaaraampaaaaaa
:P:P

Tu Shru ko aisa tang kyun nahin karti 🤣
Thanks Jaanu!!! Love you 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Nidz...🤗 Awesome update.... Mayank has a protective streak...😳 So adorable! And Sammy's getting all lost in Gunji...hehe...Nup's bk to her filmy avatar...


Loved it...😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome mast part l;oved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks a ton Appu!!
Also you SSizzling siz!
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh my gosh.....
it was just superb, out of this world....
I loved it soooooooooo much...
god bless you.....
keep up the good work honey and have fun 👏
Please cont soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

oh my gosh.....
it was just superb, out of this world....
I loved it soooooooooo much...
god bless you.....
keep up the good work honey and have fun 👏
Please cont soon......

Thanks Boshaa😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow dear...do pm me wen u update it next...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ya gr888 upadte awesome... u still ahvent add me to ur pom list pls do so. and continue soon.

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