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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#361

Ohkay....so there has been a promo....it seems nice...gud to knw Raj n Naina had their mission successful and hav got a daughter named Rimita...the name is really nice dear!! And so the fic has perhaps two parts left....hope u can update them soon.

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Pinka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#362

rakhi its almost 3 months yaar ek chotu chotu ud to ker hi sakti ho

untill tum agar ise continue hi na kerna cha rahi ho

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#363

guys,
I'll try to update it tonight but it'll be small part.

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#364

first ,I'm really sorry for not updating regularly.
any way. m posting a new part but it's small part.
I'll update long one soon.
pls forgive me any mistake.
I"m in a hurry post this part ......

new part:-
naina lay on her bed.Raj called the doctor and after some time doctor arrived there.
doctor checked her and told nothing to worry, just cause of tension , doctor give some medicine and told raj to take care of her.
After some time puja send ome food for naina who is still sleep due to medicine.
Naina sit besides her and looking at her lovingly.......
puja :- sir, pls have some food....
Raj:-mein kaise kha sakta hoon puja when my naina .....
Puja:- sir...... her voice also chocked ......
Raj:-Puja ek baat bolo mujhe.
Puja:-Yes sir.
Raj:-kya hua tha jab jab mere accident hua, kya uss time naina aapna .mere matlab.
Shalini enter the room and replied yes raj, ur guess is right, in fact then pause and said puja u can go now.
Puja excused her self and goes away from there then naina start.before that when she know about means when she trapped by lala and lala wash her mind against u that time also she neglect her
health completely.oh uss time bahut depression mein thi, kyuon ki uska dil kehe raha tha tum sahi ho aur dimag nehi.
aur issi jung meine ussne aapne aapko neglect kya.

Raj close his eyes in anger for lala and hurt and sad for naina and himself.
Shalini placed her hand on his shoulder and told to take care of naina.
Raj nodded in positively.

here in the down stair every one sit in the couch and looks very tensed about naina and her health.
alekh:- iye sab hum logo ka wajay se ho raha hain.
Ali:-Alekh bahi sahi kehe rehe hain.
when shalini enter their and told them that naina is fine now and after some time they will meet with her.

here in the room, naina wake up and sit in the bed and raj fed her lovingly.
Naina looks sorry ...Raj :- naina iye muh kyuon banayi ho, don't be sorry jaan. it's ok.
Naina:-But, raj, I'm.....
Raj:-shhhh. first finish ur food then U'll take rest.
Naina:-mein.kyuon rest , mujhe aapke sath rehena hain, aapke sath kaam karna hain.
Raj:-of course jaan,U'll do work with me but first u'll take rest then. dekho jab meine tumahara haar baat maani toh tumhe mere itna sa chota sa baat nehi maana hain kya.
Naina:-meien toh appke haar baat manti hoon.
Raj:-hmmmm.
Naina:-kya hmmm, manti nehi kya?
Raj:-ha manti ho , now take this medicine and sleep for sometime.
Naina:-But kaam.
Raj:-ho jayga, but if u want to work with me then ......
Naina:-I have tot ake rest and listen to u.
Raj:-that's like my good naina. now sleep for some time.
Raj get up from the bed but naina hold his hand and said raj,
Raj:-yes naina.
Naina:-I'm really sorry.
Raj :-it's ok. now don't tell sorry and sleep now.
Naina:-aap agar mujhse naraj nehi ho toh kuch der mere paas baitho na.pls.
Raj smiles and said ok. just give me 2min.
then raj washed her hand and placed those plates at kitchen and informs every one about naina's health.
Every one told raj that they will meet naina in the dinner time.
Raj smiles and then goes to his office room and take some files and then goes to his room.
But naina dose off to sleep cause of medicine.
Raj smiles at her and tucked her with a quilt.
Raj sit besides her and starts his work.

Precap:-naina assume that raj angry and some raj -naina moments.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#365

note:-sorry for late updating.
it's small part. but I'm working on next part and that will be longer part.
pls forgive me for any mistake.
I"m in a hurry type it.
hope u all like it.
pls read it and comment it and pressed the liked button also.
and my silents readers pls press the liked button .
I'll replied previous all of u comments soon.

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golu_1677

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Posted: 14 years ago

#366

thanks for the update... sweet part..

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ria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

hi 😊

the up is really a sweet one😊😊😊😊

naina is ill ohhhhhhhh

but raj haia na uska dhayan rakhne ke liye 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

baki ke sab log bhi naina ke liye pareshan haai hona he chaheye naina unke friend jo haai😊😊😊😊😊

raj naina ko khanna khilaate haai 😃😃😃😃aur phir uske pass jaake baithte haai😉😉😉😉😳😳😳😳😳

plz cont soon dear and pm me whern u will up😊

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#368

sweet one...

naina ki tabiyat kharab hai isiliye Raj kitna pareshan tha...!!! puja k itne kahne par bhi voh khana nahi khaya...!!! par raj ne us ka baht khayal bhi rakha...!!! in fact naina k sabhi frnds us k liye pareshan the...

raj ka naina ko khana khilanewala scene baht hi sweet tha...

thanxxx for d ud

Plz cont soon.

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Nisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#369

Nice part

Raj is really worried about Naina's health. He realises that naina has been neglecting her health for a very long time and he never did anythign about it.

all of naina's friends are worried about her .

Pooja tries to take care of both Raj and naina but Raj refuses to eat anything.

please continue soon