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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: samratrocks

awesome part yaar...luved it...thnks for da pmm...do cont soon plzzzz

ok ill try 2 update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome job
perfect update yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb update dear!
continue soon
nd plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago

part 6
Recap: De 3 of dem(mayu, nupz n nups mom) share a laugh
M: (lukin at his watch) aunty i think mujhe nikalna chahye main chalta hun
NM:acha beta par aate rehna
M:ji aunty bye nupur bye aunty]
N&NM:bye
Mayank leaves for home while going home he remembers his mom who alwz used 2 call him baccha 2dai nupurs mom reminded him of his mom his dear darling sweet as honey mom
*Flashback*
MM:baccha
M:ji meri pyaari world ki best maa
MM: teri iss maa ko tere haath ki world's bst coffee chahye
M:aap ka hukum siraankhon pe
MM:acha bacha samrat kahan hai
M:kahan hoga? apne doston k saath ghoom phir raha hoga MM:iss lade ko itni baar kaha k khane pe tym pe pohancha kar
M:meri pyaari maa wo baccha hai usse njoy karnedo
MM: tune usse bigaad k rakh diya hai
M:maine kya kiya hai?
MM:teri wajah se itna bigad gaya hai wo tu uss ki har khwaish poori karta hai
M:pyarr bhi to utna hi karta hun na
MM:baccha promise me ki jab main iss duniya main nahi rahoongi tum uska aisay hi khayal rakhoge
M:maa ye aap kaisi baatein karrahi ho plz pehle baouji hume chod kar upar chalegay aur ab aap aisi baatein mat kariye
MM:acha baba gussa kyun karraha hai
Mayank hugs his mother
S: mujhe bhul gaye??
M:aaja tu bhi aaja
dey share a hug

suddenly Mayank is pushed off the road n hesees a truck passin off at full speed n den hears a voice shouting
V: r u crazy? aapko kuch ho jaata to? konse khayaalon main doobe huwe ho?
M:samrat tum yahan kya karrahe ho?
S:wo aap ne ghar pe note rakha tha ki aap nupur k ghar jaarahe ho lekin bohat l8 hogayi aur aap nahi aaye to mujhe chinta hona shuroo hogayi to main aapk paas aaraha tha
M:sry sam par emergency aagayi tumhe call nahi karsaka
S:its ok bhayya as long as ur safe btw aap itne careless hokar kyun chal rahe the
M:<his face goes pale> kuch nahi bus aisay hi
S:nahi bhayya mujhe batao
M:wo.... wo m ujhe... mujhe maa ki yaad aarahi thi
Samrat hugs Mayank n dey both give each oder a supporting shoulder 2 cry n mourn de loss of de most important person of deir lyf after a few mins. dey break off n go home
M:sam sam kidhar ho??
S:ji bhayya
M:aakar doodh piyo
S:<whining> bhayya main bada hogaya hun do saal ka baccha nahi hun jo aap mujhe doodh de rahe ho
M:<gives him a deathly stare> isse peeyo abhi
S:acha theek hai gussa kyun horahe ho peeta hun na mere pe to sub raaj karte hain
M:tumhare liye acha hai
S:oh cummon bhayya aap mujhe roz yahi story sunate ho
M:ab tumhe ek baar ki baat samajh main nahi aati to roz sunani to paregi na
S:acha theek hai bhayya o aap ki marzi
M:sam tu kitna badal gaya hai
S:matlab??
M:jab maa thi tu kitna out goin fun luvin tha u knw roz pub jan doston ke sath hang-out karna tujhe kya hogaya hai sam
S:pata nahi bhayya bus jab se maaa gayi hai tab se iss main se kisi cheez ka mann nahi karta
M:par sam uss baat ko 8 saal hogaye hai
S:jaanta hun
M:tu aise gham main kab tak dooba rahe ga??
S: pata nahi bhaya jab mann karega tabb phir se wohi samrat banjaoon.... acha bhai wo sub chodo aur apne din k baare main batao
M:well zyaada kuch nahi tha
S:to aap ko itni der kaise hogayi
M:well.... he tells sam de whole story
S:to ab nupur theek hai na
M:haan wo abb theek hai chal abb jaa k soja
S:ji bhayya aur aap?
M:haan chal main bhi aaraha hunn
den dey both go to sleep

that's it guyz. i knw its short bt i wanted it 2 b full on Sayank nxt part will b long 4 sure
hope u liked it
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Edited by mayurian-artian - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful part dear loved sayank confo update soon n thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Heyy..

Its the first time im commenting!!
I noticed one thingg!!! you wrote in the flashback this:
MM:acha bacha samrat kahan hai
M:kahan hoga? kisi pub main gaya hoga
MM:iss lade ko itni baar kaha k khane pe tym pe pohancha kar
M:meri pyaari maa wo baccha hai usse njoy karnedo
N then l8r you wrote ki iss baat ko 8 saal ho gaye hain!! sam cant go 2 the pub when hes sooo young!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mjhtrox11

Heyy..

Its the first time im commenting!!
I noticed one thingg!!! you wrote in the flashback this:
MM:acha bacha samrat kahan hai
M:kahan hoga? kisi pub main gaya hoga
MM:iss lade ko itni baar kaha k khane pe tym pe pohancha kar
M:meri pyaari maa wo baccha hai usse njoy karnedo
N then l8r you wrote ki iss baat ko 8 saal ho gaye hain!! sam cant go 2 the pub when hes sooo young!!!!

well its a blooper as anything cn happen in mjht lol
ill edit it
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear nice part loved it and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

thnks for da pm..

gr8 job.. n lovely updatteee

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