Zindagi Bus Yu Hi -2(RN)Epilogue on pg. 54

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Awe.....that was sooooooooooo cute!! Sarthak n Muskaam's shopping rocked!!! And chance pe dance karna koi Sarthak se sikhe....wo lady phn pe bz ho gayi aur janab chal diye andar...hehe. And Vatsal also started making 'kabab' wid Mauli.....hehe. It was a very beautiful part.

I liked Mr. Malhotra n Jyotiji's convo....very sweet!!!

And now am w8ing for the next part. Itne ahem mod par aake tum ruk gayi yaar....pls continue soon.

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Hey Vertika 😊

How r u dear ?

Beautiful part yaar 👏 👏 👏the update is really so cute n sweet 👏 👏 👏 Mauli is teasing her bro a lot,sarthak ko bahut jaldi hain muski se milne ka,tabhi to jab usne car ki horn suna nahin he ran outside

vastal bhi kuch kam nahin chance dekhkhe wo bhi mauli ke saath romance karne main busy hogaya Bechara sarthak ye kaha phasgaya,he want to sit with muski par aisa koi chance nahi tha janab ab kar bhi kya saktha hain sirf back mirror se muskan ko dekhkar khush ho raha hain

the cards r really nice,n i liked the convo between mr& mrs.malhotra

chalo sarthak ko apna muski ke saath time spend karne ka mauka milgaya i loved their shopping so much. sarthak to mauke dhundne main expert hain, when he found that the lady standing outside the changing room is busy with her phone call usne ek second bhi waste nahi kiya changing room main gus ne kha

sarthak is so naughty ,he is blackmailing muskan agar wo uska wish poori nahi karegi to he will come to meet her every day aur wo bhi window se jump maarke n utna hi nahin he will kiss her sabke saamne

Are yaar tumne yaha kyun end kiya ud ko, plz continue soon

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

lovely update .loved it.

loved the muskan and sarthak shopping part.

continue soon dear.

thanks for the pm dear.

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Hi Dear

How r u??

Update was so romantic n hot..

Sarthak Muskaan se milne ke liye kitna betaab ho raha hai.😆😉

Mauli is teasing him a lot..Lagta hai Vatsal ne romance ki tuition li hai Sarthak se tabhi to woh bhi bina time waste kiye romance karne laga😳😉😆

Sarthak to shopping mein romance bhi kar raha hai..

Woh kuch na kuch aisa bol hi deta hai ki Muski sharmane lagti hai..

Sarthak sach mein bahut besharam ho gaya hai..Aise change room mein koi andar aata hai?? Bechari Muski to phans gayi hai..😆😉

Do update soon

Bye

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375400

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

HIIIIIII VERTIKA HOW R U?
SUPERB UD
ITS VERY ROMANTIC
MUJE SARTHAK KI BETAABI BAHUT
PASAND AAYI MUSKI KE LIYE
AWESOOOOOOOOME
TOOOOOO GOOOOOD
ROCKING
I JUST LOVED IT
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART

LOVE
DEEPA

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

awesome update dear!!!👏

Abhi thoda jaldi mein hoon, issliye itna hi!

baadmein detail mein comment karungi...😃

but it was simply superb!!!👏😃

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

arre vaah congrats yaar🤗...yeh fic toh apne second thread par pahunch gaya...dekha...maine kaha tha na...yeh thread baht majbut hai...tu bekaar me bich bich me dhamkati rahti thi...!!! dubara dhamkya toh teri khair nahi...samjhi...!!! 😡

aur yeh ud toh bahat khubsurat tha...Vertika jeee👏 👏 👏

mauli bahn hone ka pura farz nibha rahi hai...sarthak ki halat kharab kar k...!!! vaise sarthak bach gaya kyoun ki agar vatsal sahi tym par entry nahi marta toh toh aaj toh bichare sarthak ki halat kharab kar k hi chodti mauli...😆 😆 😆

vatsal ne bhi chance pe dance kar liya...aur mauli ko kabab me haddi ban ne nahi diya...balki us k sath khud kabab banane me bz ho gaya...😉 😉 😉

bichara sarthak...voh aage...mushkaan piche...!!! yaar...pyar karne walon ki sabr ka bada imtihaan liya jata hai...!!! par sarthak ne mirror se mushkaan ko dekh dekh kar apni dil ki chahat ko pura karta raha...par nikki ne achha cheda us ko...😆 😆 😆

sarthak bhi kam nahi hai...changing room me ghush gaya. sach me yaar...mohabbat ne achhe khase insaan ko pagal bana diya hai...!!! ab us ne ajeeb se demand bhi kar raha hai...aur kisi bhi halat me ise mushkaan ko pura karna hi hoga ab toh...!!!😳 😳 😳

chal abb toh aage likh jaldi se...😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago