Shiddatein-Part 7 pg 16 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for your response🤗
will update soon😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey !!! di ... it's a great FF ... the beginning is simply awesome .... never watched the show but i am liking your writing .... great writing 👏
continue soon ..😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2




Next morning Heer was sleeping when some body knocked the door. She got up and opened the door. She saw a housemaid.


The housemaid: jaldi tayiaar ho jaiye biwiji mataji apko bula rahi hai. Yeh hai appke kapre.


She gave Heer a gorgeous bright yellow dress.😊


Heer: Rishabh kahan hai?


The housemaid: Kunwar sahab to aj subah hi shahar wapas chale gaye hai.


Heer got ready and a followed a housemaid to Maharani's (Rishabh's mother) room.


Maha Rani: Ao Heer andar ao. (not in a loving manner rather she was ordering Heer).

Aj tumhe mere saath yahan ki gaon mein jana parega. tum abh is Raj Parivar ke bahu banne ja rahi ho. yaad rakhna tum sirf is parivar ki bahu nahi, is pure rajya ki Rani banne ja rahi ho. tumhari upar bohut bari zimmedari hai.

Meena (she called a housemaid).


A girl came with a box (which was on a chandi ki thali, I mean silver plate) in her hand. Maharani opened it and there was a Kangan. She gave it to Heer and told her. "Aj se is parivar ki beti ho tum aur tum har halat mein is rajya ki raksha karogi". She put the Kangan in Heer's hand.


Heer was wandering. What is it? is another drama by Rishabh? Why his mother is giving me this Kangan?


Maha Rani: chalo.


They went to the village. Everyone in the village welcomed them.🤗 Maha Rani met the Mukhia (head) of the gaon.


Maha Rani: Heer, yeh hai Umeed Singh Rathore, is gaon ki panchayet pradhan. Inke paon chhuo.


Heer did what Maha Rani said.


Mukhia (giving Ashirvad to Heer): jeete raho beti. Then he told Maha Rani :kitni sundar aur susheel hai apki bahu. aapko apni ghar ki laxmi wapas mil gayi.


Heer was astonished.😕


Maha Rani: Umeed ji, is khushi ke mouke par aj Heer gaon ke logo ko kuchh dene wali hai.


Then she ordered her men to bring the gifts. Maha Rani asked Heer to distribute the gifts (mainly dresses and money) to the villagers. Every body praised Heer.😊


Heer was totally dumbfounded. She was not able to understand what actually happening.😕


In the mean time a villager came and told some thing to the Mukhia. He seemed to be worried. Maha Rani asked him what happened.


He told that a little girl is very ill, she is in the hospital, she needs some medicines which is not available here. So somebody has gone to the city to bring it. But she is in a very bad condition and almost dying.😔


Maha Rani told that she wants to meet that girl. Maha Rani went inside the hospital room , she touched the girl's head and then ordered her men "Main aj idhar hi rahungi, tumlog mahal jake Meera ke paas se mere ayurved aushadi ke samaan leke ao". (actually she is a master in Ayurved)😊


Then she told Heer: Heer tum inlogo ke saath mahal wapas chali jao.


Heer really didn't want to leave, she also wanted to help that little girl. But it was Maha Rani's order so she had to come back. When she came back a house maid informed her that next morning she has to go back home.


Heer was worried about that little girl. What will happen to her? Maha Rani totally surprised her. She can't believe that she is Rishabh's mother. She seemed to be "Bahar se kathor andar se komal".


Next morning Heer got ready. The housemaid informed that the car is ready to take her to the Airport. Heer asked her about that little girl. But she said "Maha Rani abhitak wapas nahi ayi, mujhe nahi pata".😕


Heer has to leave the palace without knowing what happened to that girl.


Amazingly for the first time she forgot about Rishabh, she was only thinking about that girl and Maha Rani.


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Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Stormy ..
Nice part yaar ....👏👏
So Rishabh left her bhind ..😛...didn't expect it ..
waz expecting sum more dhamaka ...!! 😆😆
But really liked it ...Its waz quite different 4rm part 1 ..!!

pllzz continue soon ....!!! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Hey Kanu!😊

I was looking through the FF site and i noticed your post so just was curious.. And am surprised you have an FF related to KDMHMD!!
Oh i love that show so much!! Well used to! Now the story has gone all bad!
But I still like premeer!! Yea i rmb Rishabh rampal!! The evil guy!
So i read your FF and what can i say it's rocking man! Really written well!!
I like it! But Rishabh so evil i want Prem!!! 😳
I rmb i was so sad during this part when Heer was about to get
married to Rishabh.. 😭
Hahah but anyways that aside your FF is Excellent! It's Rishabh and Heer side.. Smth different!😊
Pls continue soon yea!😃



Thank you dear🤗
I will try to make you happy😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Destiny-

kanu diii meri jaan I want to come & hug u for this ........... i don't need to tellu to add me in pm list do I
????



Lekhu🤗
I have already added you in my PM list.😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: 268143

hi sorry dnt knw ur name 😛 although i hardly watch da show nw i did watch dis track 🤔 da way u wrote about it is gr8 👍🏼 awesum start 👏



Dear Sim,

I am glad that you are liking it😊
Thanks dear for your lovely comments😊
I have added you in my PM list😊
Kaninika

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Posted: 15 years ago
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read it and love it so very much hun and u did fantastic👏👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

hi there dear...guess din expect to see me here....but 'KISI' se wada kiya tha...to hume aana pada...!! 😉 LOL just kidding...

Congratulations on ur New FF...👏
n my my ...quite an Agressive start to the FF....hmm...well i watched KDMH..till Rishabs exit n Prems re-entry...n can identify with the situation..!!
keep posting...luvd it...!! 👍🏼



Thanks Tanu🤗
I wanted to write something different.
I will try to make you happy.😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Durga A.

Awesome start to the ff.

Please do add me to the pm list.
I am eager to see how this story will unfold itself.
I hope everything becomes alright for Heer in the end.



Thanks Gurleen for your lovely comments😃
Yes, I have added you in my PM list😊
I also want everything goes fine for Heer😊
Kaninika

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