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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
awesome sound interesting plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm & making rishab positive ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx alot 4 da PM 😛 ........ so Rishab is against liftin hands on old n women 👍🏼 n wat is Heer up2 🤔 will b w8n 4 u 2 update😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great update di !!! loved rishabh a lot in this part ...
it was very short but liked it a lot ...
please continue soon ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Love this part very much Kanu!

We got to see another side of Rishabh, which is a good one i must say..He strictly doesn't raise his hands on ladies and old people..That shd be the way!..:)
I love this attitude of Rishabh and on top of that love the hatred thing going on between Heer and Rishabh...
Esp love that last line that Heer said " Main chahti hun ke sab ko pata chale ke tum abh mere dost ban chuke ho. mujhe tumhe khilane ki koi shouk nahi hai"...
Way to go Heer!! 👏
That's like the real fighter heer we know!! Me like alot!!....
Continue soon, i want too see what plans Heer has got by working in Rishabh's office and what's gonna happen at the Juneja's dinner..😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Hey kanu.. glad to hv ur new epi.. 🤗 n i really want to say.. this truly shows how Versatile u are.. this FF of urs is 180 degree different than the ArBi one.. n i luv both.. ❤️

Liked that Rishab cleared the air abt being a CHIVALROUS man.. u knw.. not raising hand on Aurat n Buzurg.. 😉
n Well heer..gonna parosofy ..some Kheer for Rishab. hmm.. Daal mein kala.. 😈 me like it..!! & well well.. working with Rishab.. kya baat hai..
Interesting epi.. 😉 Luvd it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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SStormy update plzzzzzz ....!😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 5



After Heer was gone Rishabh called somebody.


Rishabh: Yash, tum Heer pe nazar rakh rahe ho na?


Yash: yes, Sir, har waqt😎


Rishabh: I need no mistake. Heer is up to something. kuchh garbar lage to mujhe immediately inform kar dena.


Yash: definitely, Sir.😊


We could see Rishabh thinking very seriously with shrewd expression: "kuchh na kuchh to garbar hai, shayad mujhe aj Juneja house dinner ke liye nahi jana chahiye......no, I will go, I need to know akhir Heer chahti kya hai."😎


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Back home: Heer preparing Rishabh's dinner. Nobody is happy with what Heer is doing.😒


The vamps: Nakhre dekho Heer ki, kaise Rishabh ke liye khana bana rahi hai, isse to kuchh bhi yaad nahi hai. rehti to hai vidwa ki tarah aur nakhre dekho jaise ki karwa chaut ki tayiari chal rahi hai.😉


Mehar: Di, kya aap sach mein thik kar rahi hai? yeh Rishabh ko dinner ke liye invite karna.😒


Heer: kyun kya hua? Humne to bachpan se I yahin sikha hai ke jo hamari madat kare usse khatir karna, Rishabh nahi hota to pata nahi uss din kya ho jata😊


Mehar: thik hai, aapki marzi😒


Heer (thinking): kya karoo tujhe sach to nahi bol sakti, kisiko bhi sach nahi bol sakti.😒


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At 8' O clock in the evening Rishabh came to the Juneja's house. He was welcomed by Heer, others unwillingly welcomed him.😒 They don't want to go against Heer.😊


Nobody was ready to talk. Rishabh noticed everybody's expressions and gave a cunning smile.😉


Rishabh: to Bauji aj aap kaese hai?


Bauji (unwillingly): thik hun😔


Rishabh: waise "welcome" Bauji😉


Bauji looked at him, he was confused.😕


Rishabh: nahi aap us din ke liye mujhe thanks bolne se pehle i main "welcome" bol diya.😆 Waise Preet ko koi naukri mili ya nahi? Aap kahe to main apni company mein try kar sakta hun.😎


Preet couldn't take it😡: dekhiye humlog aapke company mein naukri karne se pehle aap ko khoon karke jail jayenge


Mehar asked him to stop. She didn't want any insult of Heer.😊


Rishabh looked at Heer, thinking: yeh mere company mein naukri join kar rahi hai is liye ke ghar mein sab ko pata chale ke hum abhi dost ban rahe hai, aur yeh abhitak ghar mein kisiko bataya tak nahi. Miss Heer Mann shayad tum apne aapko bohut hi chalak samajhti ho😡😎


Rishabh: Heer to mere company mein......then he stopped........(thinking: nahi, mujhe batana nahi chahiye......dekhte hai Heer kya chahti hai).........ana hi nahi chahti, kya bahu, I mean beti payi hai aapne😉


Heer glared at Rishabh.😡


Heer thinking: mujhe jald se jal gharwalon ko bata deni chahiye, nahi to Rishabh koi aur chal chal sakta hai.😒


Nobody was ready to talk. How can Heer invite this Rakshas?😕 The vamps were enjoying the scene thinking "ab pata chala Heer, waise tumne achcha hi kia Rishabh ko invite karke".😆😉

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It was dinner time. Heer arranged the table, Mehar helped her. Only Bauji was ready to accompany Rishabh.😒


Rishabh: aaplog nahi khayaenge?😉


Heer: pehle aap kha lijiye.😊


Rishabh was happy to see all the delicious items.😛


Rishabh (thinking): yeh Heer lagta hai bohut achcha khana banati hai provided isme zahar nahi hai😆😉 And he gave a sly smile.😉


Just when Rishabh was about to start eating his mobile rang. He was just going to put roti into his mouth, he had to stop.😒


Rishabh: excuse me, he came to the balcony, yes, Mr. Mehta boliye, how can I help you?


Mr Mehta: something something.........


Rishabh: yeh aap kya keh rahe hai? dekhiye kuchh garabar zaroor hua hai, main abhi office jaake dekhta hun😲


Mr. Mehta: something something.........


Rishabh: Dekhiye mujhe iss bare mein kuchh pata hi nahi, aap jante hai humlog aise nahi hai, aap hamare purane client hai, please give me some time, please don't cancel our deal.


Mr. Mehta: thik hai, I trust you. I'll call you tomorrow.😔


Rishabh: Thanks a lot.😊 You don't need to call. I'll call you.😳


Rishabh hung up the phone, thinking "how can it happen?"😒


He came to dining room. He looked disturbed.


Rishabh: I am sorry mujhe abhi jana parega.😒 And without telling anything he left.


Heer (thinking): Mr. Rishabh, aap sapno mein bhi mere haath se banaya hua khana khane ki bare mein mat sochna.😡😉


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Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Stormy ....sooooooo short ...!
Ab main itne chote update per kya likhun ...!😆

Nice update Stormy ...👏👏
shuru hi kiya to pata chala k khatam ho gaya ....😆😆

Rishabh k deal cancellation k peeche Heer ka haath to nahi ..!
Interesting .....😉
& continue soon ,..!
😳
Edited by Dew-drop - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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such a short update🤔 gr8 da way ur writing da story👏looking 4ward 2 wat happen nxt😛
Edited by 268143 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 6



Yes, you people are right.😉 It's Heer who is behind all this. 😊I don't want to go in technical details and my logic is also quity "soapy"😆 (now films are much better so I can't write "filmy" so I am using the word "soapy"😆 I mean "daily soapy".😆)


So actually before Heer entered Rishabh's cabin she heard somebody talking about Rishab's big business deal with the Mehta's. She recognized the name as she heard it from Prem. When she was in Rishabh's office she could see the "quotation file" on Rishabh's table. She was able to see the "quotation". (I know it's not quite logical but let's assume that Rishabh was too overconfident and when Heer entered his cabin he didn't bother to hide it. Anyways this is not important for out story.) So what Heer did was that she told the "quotation" to Rishabh's rival company. That company quoted lesser price than Rampal's and got Mehta's tender. So Mr. Mehta called Rishabh and told him that he is cheating him as some other company is giving the products in lesser price. (I hope you understood my long boring lecture).


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Finally Rishabh was able to solve his problem; he had to quote even lesser price and thus he lost a good amount of money.😒 Rishabh couldn't find out how it happened.😕


Heer joined the office from the next day. She was too cool.😎Though Rishabh asked Yash to keep an eye on her, but she was doing everything so perfectly that it seemed that she is the best well wisher of the company. 😊Rishabh tried to talk to Heer, and Heer always answered him very coolly. 😎


Heer told her family members that she is joining Rishabh 's company. They were really upset but they honor Heer's decision so they didn't tell anything to her.


Heer's behavior was making Rishabh more suspicious.😕 Actually Heer was gaining information about Rishabh so that she could plan something more dangerous for Rishabh.😎


15 days passed. Nothing happened. Rishabh noticed that Heer was not telling anything to her family, not many days were left of their marriage, but it seemed Heer has completely forgotten about it.😡


So Rishabh made a deadly plan. He planted a bomb in front of Heer's house, which blasted at midnight.🤢 Everyone was shocked. 😲They were very very frightened.


Rishabh called Heer and told her "Miss Mann, tumhare paas abh bas kuchhidin baki hai, agar kuchh garbar kii to yeh bomb tumhare pyare ghar ke andar phatega".😉


Heer was dumbfounded. She really didn't have time. Possibly she had to marry Rishabh.😒

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After 1 week: Heer was sleeping in her room.


"Chupke se Chupke se teri neendon mein
Khwaabon mein khayalon mein
Chaaunga Khojunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga"


Ek Din - Naqaab (Akshay Khanna & Urvashi Sharma)


Heer woke up suddenly, she covered her ears, closed her eyes and shouted "Nahiiiiiiii.......".😲😭


Its happening for 5 days, every night Heer sees this scene in her dreams.😒



Heer: main pagal ho jaungi, main pagal ho jaungi. Tum nahi jante main tumse kitni nafrat karti hun. Kyun main uske saath dance karne ke liye razi huyi?😡


She was not able to forget that day.😒


It was 5 days ago. It was an office anniversary party. Rishabh invited Heer and he asked Heer to bring her family members with her.


Rishabh: apne family ko bhi saath lana, akhir unlogo ko bhi to pata chalna chahiye ke humlog abh kitne kareeb a chuke hai.😉


Heer was unwilling to bring her family but she thought it will be a good opportunity. Ultimately she has to tell them that she wants to marry Rishabh.😒


Heer came in the party with her family. She was wearing a lovely white salwar kurta. She looked sooooo beautiful. Rishabh noticed her and he gave his cunning smile.


Heer was sitting with her family. She didn't want them to be bored. She was thinking whether she will go and talk to Rishabh.😕


In the mean time the DJ of the dance floor announced that there is going to be a "couple dance" competition. Heer was busy talking so she couldn't hear the announcement. Just then her mobile rang. It was one of her office colleague.


"Heer, kya tu abh washroom ke paas a sakti hai? mere dress mein juice gir gayi, kya tu help kar sakti hai?"


Heer: ha, main abhi a rahi hun


Heer had to cross the dance floor to go near the washroom. She was in a hurry and she didn't notice that Rishabh was there on the dance floor.


Suddenly somebody kicked her and just when Heer was about to fall Rishabh caught her. (actually Rishabh kicked her on purpose).😉


Heer looked into Rishabh's eyes, which was giving a very cunning look, Rishabh was smiling. 😉Heer felt very very disgusted.😡


Heer: chodo mujhe😡


Rishabh didn't leave her and she didn't fall on the ground, he rather helped her to stand up.😳


Heer glared at Rishabh. Just when she was about to leave Rishabh held her hand and pulled her towards him.😳 Heer was so very much annoyed, she looked at Rishabh with full of revulsion.😡


Rishabh: mere saath couple dance karogi? Tum janti ho ye best mouka hai, tumhare gharwalon ko yeh dikhane ke liye ke abh humlog saath hai. 😉And he winked at her.


Heer: Don't even think about that Mr. Rampal😡


Rishabh: bhul gayi wo bomb blast, tumhara pyara ghar😎


Heer understood that it's the best thing to dance with Rishabh now, It will be easier for her. So Heer agreed to dance.😒

The song started and the couples started dancing.

Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa kho jaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga

ek din teri raahon mein-naqaab




Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago

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