'mayur' the temptation....page 44 part 12

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#161

hey pari

woderful update yaar

finally inki shaadi hogayi

im soo happy yaar

oh mayank cares soooooo much bt nups

i just love him

oh thanks a lot for this non boring update

glad that u finally updated

hope your exams went really good

tc

love pebo

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

Pari jaan....

Haaye... Kitna sweet, romantic aur funny part tha...

I loved it completely!

Loved the way Nupur was shocked and loved when mayu said aaj mere dost ki shaadi hai and then.... tum meri dost ho aur aaj tumhari shaadi hai....

I just fell off my bed laughing.... Mayu is so unpredictable...

Loved the part..... Par ending mein kiss ke beech rok diya..... *sniff* *sniff*

Par pls agla part jaldi update karna......... warna..... i won't leave you!

Love ya loads...

muah...

Mina

Edited by mina_18secret - 15 years ago

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Angle.

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Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#163

amazing update
mayank was so scared of nups
loved to see it
update soon
don't b late

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storytellerm

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#164

loved it yaar
pm me when u update

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Divya

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#165

omg wats this M dint tell N anything, poor thing :) she had to do everything in a hurry :)

but Its a real nice part :)

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#166

hey it was very nice and awesome............
cant wait to read the next part .......
do update soon and add me to ur buddy list and pm when u update
please............