Yaadein-Memories Forever [MN FF] #2 Note: Pg 79

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Posted: 15 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: NidzCole_ArTi
ZoahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhHHHHH it was awesome hun!!!
OMG the morning hugging scene was toooo romantic!!!

Continue soon hun! 🤗

--Nidz

Hey Nidzy 🤗 Thanks so much hun

I love the morning scene too

Will cont soon

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Originally posted by: daniella05
awesome update!!!
read all ur parts at one go......it was truly amazing......
do continue soon

Thank you so much for reading all the parts

glad you liked them!

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Originally posted by: mjht_admirer
awwwwwwwwww. it was soo soo soo awesome n beautiful. really loved it. Mayank kissing on her temple and thanking her was indeed very touching and now mayank asked her for a dinner kind date. its tooo magical. Abhi aisa hai to baad mein kitna mazaa aayega. 😳😳

i m really looking forward to ur nxt update.

& u R right. Divya's works are awesome.

U both r rockstars !! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

loads of love
vinu

Thank so much Vinu

Really glad that you loved this update!

Will update soon!

Yeah I agree Divya's work si always awesome

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Originally posted by: rose.mn
Zoah as usual amazing part
i really loved it, Mayank kissed on her temple. I really adore the way u are showing their relation growing stronger in new meaning slowly but steadily. It was amzing part.
do cont soo.........

Thank you Rabi

glad you loved it!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

hey jaan! i won't talk abt today...but yup i came online and every minute i am having a problem....so maybe the comments wont be long and also that tumhe "the secret admirer" ka first part likhna hai mam! remember that!

i am having butterflies in my stomach reading this part......i am loving its start! man! its absolutely fantastic! i love their closeness.....i loved the way u described their closeness.....drooling man! tune mera din acha bana diya....thanks a lot for that.....after today's horrible day, u made my day!!!!!

man! i loved the typical patni type of avatar of nupur.....i always love the women w3ho take care of their husbands! and i loved when mayank kissed her on her temple......i wud tell u the reason too...and i loved his emotional lines....u rock zoah!

wow! tumne lagta hai is update ke saath mujhe super happy karna chahti thi! u really made my day jaan....that;s why i love u....not because u made my day......but because we r frds.....close buddies......i wish yaar i cud use our siggie [ur present on my bday] in my signature! wish yaar! but i wont coz it has our pics...

i loved when mayank asked her for a dinner,.....i loved how u described the things.....and i loved the date word she used!

dont u dare call this boring......i am now most eagerly waiting for the next update! now i am gonna bully u to update this ff until u do it with ur own wish......

i am sooooooooooo happy after reading ur update.......

i really wish i cud meet u now....i really do......u know why? cause i am in a dire need to hugging someone and crying my heart out.....and who could be better than u?

love ya.......and DO CONTINUE SOON......

mujhe agar cyber cafe bhi use karna pada, then too i wud come on wednesday to check for ur update!

jaldi update karna,,,,,i cant wait after this awesome + mind blowing+ loving + marvelous update!

take care....

love,
Mahak

Thanks ton for the long comment hun

glad you loved the update!

Will update ASAP!

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Originally posted by: stuti123
its amazing zoah ....... why do you think its boring .........i loved each and every bit if it ........ cant wait for the next part ......really excited for it ............. grt update and do upate soon we all ae dying to read it ...........

Thanks so much Stuti

glad you didn't find it boring!

will update soon

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Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver
hey zoah.. wonderful part...👏.
i actually took pains & read ur ff frm d startin....

i must say u write so well....

i luvd d amazin bond which Mayur share .... waitin 4 Mayur's date....

pls add me 2 ur pm list ...& update soon....🤗

-supriya

Thanks a lot Supriya 🤗

glad you loved the update!

Will cont soon

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Originally posted by: fariaa70
Hi Zoah
Wonderful part.
i just loved it
i m really very happy for mayur.
wow wow so now they will go for a dinner.
wonderful part.
too good.
now eagerly waiting 4 ur next part.
try to update soon

Thanks a ton Faria

glad you loved the part

Will cont soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: zoya_me
lovely zoah....m loving how their relationship is improving and that mayank is making an effort.....great going.....continue soon

Thanks a lot Zoya

glad you're loving their relationship

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Originally posted by: achoose
loved it...awesome update...continue soon....

Thanks a lot hun

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Originally posted by: ..pebo..
awesome siigy!!!!!!!!!

it rocks!!!!!!!!1

Thank you

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Originally posted by: charming.angel
ohh my god tht was fab... loved it

loved it ... its soo awesome n artiz so chweet..
n mayur are simply fantastic ......

do update soon ....
😃

Thank you so much Dear

Glad you loved it!

Will update soon

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Originally posted by: mjht_admirer
awsome siggie sehar. Too too too good and very attractive.

@Ansh_Arti - i m listening tere naina for so many days and i always loved it. But after ur previous update whenever now i listen tht song i remember Mayur only. I mean overtaking SRK-Kajol from my mind to Mayur is a huge thing & the credit goes to u n ur expressing skills. Now i love this song even more specially the line, "Chahe kuch na bolu, Chahe raaz na kholu, Yeh samjhti hain meri zubaan."

loads of love
vinu

Hey Vinu

yeah the sigiges is beautiful

oh god, that's a huge compliement for me.

Thank you so much!

I guess for me, both the pair SRKajol and MayUr have equal space in my heart 😳

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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
Awesome update. too good.loved it.loved to see mayur are happy.waiting for their first date.
continue soon sweety.

Thank you Di

glad you loved the update

Will cont soon

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Originally posted by: Tasnim2623

its awesome...
plz add me to pm list

Thank you

WIll add you

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Posted: 15 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: shivangi278
awesome part zoah,
this part was truly amazing.... 👏
mayur closeness... 😳 .....haiii 😍
wow mayur date is coming up....😳
i am very excited to read the next part,
plzzzz continue soon...

Thanks a lot Shivangi

glad you loved the update!

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Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Zoah... that was just brilliant.. can't wait for the date update.. and really Divya(myownarea).. is just one awesome writer...

Thanks a lot Divya

Yeah Divya (myownarea) is one of the best writers

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Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver
hey Zoah....
amazin siggy.😃...thnx 2 saher.....
luvd it a lot....
-supriya

Glad you loved it

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Originally posted by: sariska_mjht
loved the siggie

Me too

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Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Thank you

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Posted: 15 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: Senny
hey zoah i am soooooooooo glad to see your dedication of this part to divzzzzzz and annie, i loveeeeeeee these two amazinggggggg people, they have always inspired me to fight for what i believe in and continue and esp being patient, this show has at least kind of made me patient.
Coming to the update, awwwwwww i am so glad that Mayank is moving ahead in his life and beginning to realise how much important nupur is for him, i am looking ahead to the part of the date and picnic, Great work, keep it up!

Thanks so much Senny

glad you loved the update!

Will update soon!

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Originally posted by: mayadika11
awesooooooooooome......
superb.....
excellent...
fantabulous........
wonderful.........
and thanx a lot for the pm..........

Thank you so much Dear

glad you loved it

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Originally posted by: mayurlovers

Hey, Zoah...

Thanks for PM...

I just caught up with this FF...

You have described everything very nicely. Their feelings, problems, fears...

I love this FF...

Update as soon as you can, Zoah...

I am eager to read the next part... Mayur date.. And then picnic... Wow! That will be great

Love,
$hrey@

Hey Shreya

thank you for reading the whole FF!

Glad you loved it as well!

Will update soon

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Originally posted by: -afsha-

Mayur gng on a date Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Liked the way their relation is gng ahead

It was really beautiful the way Mayu Thanked her n the way Nups replied was awesum

Evn i was lil shock wen Mayu asked Nups out

Liked teh whole update jana

Plz update soon

Hey Afsha

thanks so much

glad you loved the way Mayank thanks NUps!

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Originally posted by: PheliNazar

heyyyyyyy zoahh

sorry for late comment!!

anywayyyyyyyyyyy fabulous update yyarr

and mayur were so cute..

i can't even tell you how much i loved it

I'm sooooo happy that mayu is making the efffort

&& haiiiiiiiiii 😳mayank asked her for a dinner....

kitna cute hai

and very nice siggy saher awsome wrkk

-sanam-

Thanks a lot Sanu

gald you loved the update!

Yeah I love the siggy too

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Originally posted by: mayurg2010
hey i love ur ff . and also this part..........pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee do pm when u update as i am in ur buddy list

Thank you

WIll PM you for sure!

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Originally posted by: ghtk1
lovely update dear.loving the gradual progress of their relationship....plzz continue soon.😊

Thank you hun!

glad you loving MN relatioship!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#356

Hi Zoah
r u updating now?

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Posted: 15 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Hi Zoah
r u updating now?

Hey Faria

No hun, I am not updating today.

Will update 2mrw hopefully 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Hey Faria

No hun, I am not updating today.

Will update 2mrw hopefully 😛

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okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

but i want a big, cute mayurish update .

So try to update a longer part.

take care dear.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#359

Hey guys

Okay, sorry to keep bugging you.

Can't help it :P

Anyways, here is the prmo for the next update and I am damn sure you all going to love this one. MN are so romantic in my next update *sighs*. I know it's wrong to praise your own work, but I am loving MN more and more 😍

Okay, enough of my non sense (which apparently made sense to me 🤣),

here is the promo!

Enjoy the MN fever *sighs* ☺️

Ge Ge Re, Ge Ge Re, Ge Re Ge Me Ge Re
Re Re Sa, Re Re Sa, Ni Sa Ni

Mayank kneels down on the floor and asked Nupur for a dance while offering her his hand. Nupur, who looked amused first, slips her hand in his.

Ghunji Si Hai Sari Fiza Jaise Bajti Ho Shehnaiyaan
Leherati Hai Mehki Hawa Gungunati Hain Tanhaiyaan
Sab Gaate Hain Sab Hi Madhosh Hain
Hum Tum Kyun Khamosh Hain
Saaz - E- Dil Chedo Na
Chup Ho Kyun Gaavon Na
Aao Na.. Ao Na... Aao Na... Aao Na...

Mayank placed his hand on Nupur's waist, making shiver run down her spine. She shivered at his touch but she was loving it at the same time. Butterflies made their way in her tummy.

"Nupur, in the past, I gave you many sorrows, be it unknowingly, but I was the cause for your tears but now I promise I will never let you shed anymore tears. I promise you that. You deserve each and every happiness in the world and it is my job to ensure that you get them." Mayank finished his speech with a tears in his eyes, while Nupur was staring at him with joy tears rolling down her cheecks.

She didn't know what she should do at that moment. She ran and hugged Mayank as tightly as she could. She didn't want to lose this moment of love and affection. She wanted ot tell him that what he means for her.

On the other side, Mayank didn't take a second before responding to the hug. The hug of passion and love.

Another thing:

Saher aka saher_90 made a siggy for this FF.

OMGSH , I am so loving this siggy!

You like it too na?

Thank you Saher 🤗

Isn't it simply awesome?

I know LOL

Do comment

and

let me know what you think about

the promo and the siggy!