|| ZoaH's OS Gallery || He Ignored Me(MN OS) PG 29 - Page 5

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

maine to tujhse pehle hi kaha tha that i loved it......
i am speechless.....
its beyond words.......
its magnificent........
its terrific........
loved each bit of it........
do write more......
and do i have to tell u that u have to pm me??????

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Zoah,
At first congrats4m opening ur OS gallery
Hope now we will get more and more shot.
ok now come to ur update-
it was really very nice shot.
it was toooo gooooooood.
i can easily imagine my mayur in that situation.
they are awesome.
loved mayur confession. it was so sweet.
and u describe their feelings in a nice way.
thanx a lot 4 ur lovely shot.
do write more.
And again HAPPY BIRTH DAY SANA.
MAY ALLAH BLESS U

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

Amazing One Shot..
really Loved It...
Thnxx 4 the pm...

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

grtt OS

huni loved itt

-sanam-

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Loved it

Really loved it

I thk the third perso is u😉

As i wrote and u witnessed them😉

Loved It really

The Mayank Sharma was confuse was lil shocking😆

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey Zoah,

Wow i simply simply lovedd it, you wrote such a beautiful story for MN, it was short but comprehensive and you elaborated at the right parts, the emotional side of them both was very very well expressed. Their reunion was wonderfully shown. The best part about your write up being that it was all so realistic, the reasons for separation, consequences, co incidence and meeting up later was very very well written.

Excellent work indeed, lucky lucky girl sana, happy birthday sana.

Originally posted by: rose.mn

its awesum zoah................
really amaizing
i loved it to the core....................
nupur in saree............haye yaar i could imagin her in saree
lovely os..............
n sana happy birthday............its really a lovely gift 4 you on ur birthday......
hey zoah do write more os ...............
n please also update ur ff's
i m waiting 4 them..............dont u think it has been a long u have updated yadien...........hmm?

Originally posted by: SanaHeartMayur

Zoah di i really love this OS from the begining to the end

so nicely written

i love the end too when they confess and nupur calls him saduu i love you too awww such a cute os i love it it is the best and thanks agian love you

Originally posted by: rkmnkp

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

rocking sis

what a cute OS!

I really love it soooooooo much!

Mayur confessing about the love at the end

and then their misunderstanding cleared!!!!!!!!!!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww🤗

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Do write more and more OS's

would love to read many more

congratzzzzz on ur new OS gallery

and again happy b-day Sana!

-Lina-

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

aww...zoah that was an amazing os!!
loved it to bits!