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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

nice cs
update soon and add me to ur pm list

thanks aditi.....
ya i will update soon n u r added in pm list already😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

looks gr8

do conti
thanx 4 d pm

thanks dear
i'll update soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
thanks pariii😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: zummi03

very nice..
continue soon..

hey thanks dear.....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
thanks surbhi dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
nice sketching yaar.continue soon plzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ghtk1

nice sketching yaar.continue soon plzz

hey thanks dear
ya ofcourse i will cont soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
thank you so much everyone for ur comments

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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
Hey guys thank you all 4 ur comments.... now i m going to update 1st chapter of my this ff...
hope you will like it

Chapter 1
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Mayank was sitting comfortably in his room n was busy with his laptop. He was so much engrossed in it that he didn't care abt time. It was almost 1am at night n he was still awake busy with his laptop then his mom came in with a cup of coffee...mayank just loves coffee.
Taking coffee from his mother he said
M: thank you maa....u r so sweet
MM: koi zarorat nahi thanks ki.....aakhir tum aisa kya krte rehte ho apne iss laptop k sath...k dinner tak k liye tmhare pass time nahi..tmhare mama ji phir naraz ho rahe thy wo to gunjan ne unhe buhat mushkil se samjaya k tum kuch important informations le rahe ho
M: (was listining all this)... maa plz rehne dain na.......iss bare main kal baat kr lain gay
MM: mayank aakhir tmhari problem kya hai.......tum kyon itne careless ban rahe ho......you have done ur MBa na so wat is problem with you now..... tum kyon business join nahi kr rahe ho
M: ma main aap ko bata chuka hon k abi main ye sab nahi krna chahta.......main ne kuch courses k liye apply kiya tha Oxford university main.........aur mujy call bi aayi hai issliye main ab london jana chhahta hon 3 years k liye..........
MM: lekin tmhare mama ji ko kon samjaye ga........
M: (putting his laptop on bed he lay down placing his head on his mother's lap) aap ho na maa....aap samjana unhe...
MM: shut up mayu......buhat acha tarika hai yeh tmhara apni baat manvane ka.......lekin iss baar nahi
M: i love you maa.........
MM: i love you too beta(she smilingly said)........ok fine......main baat karoon gi bhaiyaa se.....ok ab tum so jao aur khabardaar jo laptop ko phir se touch bi kiya
M: ok maa.....good night(he said smilingly showing her mum his dimples)
MM: good night beta
after kissing his forehead she went out

As his mother closed his room's door he again picked his laptop n signed in (actually he was chatting with a girl whose ID was "black beauty"..........he usually used to chat with her......n may be was liking her
after 1 hour he too went to sleep saying good bye to black beauty.......actually he didn't know her name or anything else they just used to talk abt casual things....nor black beauty knew anything abt him


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Bhushan Mension

In bushan mension a lovely girl was sleeping peacefully in a beatifull room having everything of pink n white colour as both these were her favourite colours.... she was having a peaceful sleep.....she was away from every hardships of life......there was a sweet smile on her lips even when she was sleeping
Sun light streamed in through beautiful shafoon pink colours curtains

then she hears a voice.........bt didn't open her eyes
Shashank: get up beta..........buhat late ho raha hai.........aap ko college bi jana hai na
Girl: no baba.........plz 10 minutes more...........(covering her face with quilt)
S: (smilingly) its alredy 8:30 nupur..........tum late ho jao gi na
N: (she just get up) oh no 8:30 ho gaye.........aap ne mujhy pehle kyon nahi uthaya.......main ab late ho jaon gi........aaj hamne buhat impotant surgery discuss krni hai....
S: relax nupur abi time hai aap ready ho jao main app ko college chor k hospital jaon ga.......aaj driver leave pe hai aur aap ko to darr lagta hai na driving se
N: ok baba main sirf 10 minutes main ready ho k aati hon.........
shashank turned to go when nupur stopped him
N: baba...........good morning (n hugged him)
S: (smiled a bit) good morning beta...........ok now quick..........or u will get late

Nupur came down wearing a simple yet beautiful red churidaar........n was looking absloutely stunning
she hugged her mom 4rm back n said
N: good morning mama
Padma: good morning beta..........chalo ab jaldi se breakfast kr lo.........
N: ok mama........baba kahan hain?
P: tmhare baba koi important phone call attend kr rahe hain ........aate hi honge

after the breakfast shashank drop nupur to college n nupur said him that she will come back with dia.......

Medical college

Dia: (looking nupur)........nupur kahan thi tum kab se tmhara wait kr rahi hun.....
N: wo raat ko kuch important cases pe research kr rahi thi aur test bi to tha aaj to phir late soyi thi aur iss liye aaj late uthi hon subah.........thats why i got late.....sorry
D: no problem dear.......now quick class k liye late ho rahe hain
N: yeh suhaani kahan hai
D: kahan ho sakti hai..........khoi ho gi apne prince charming k sapno main.....
at this both laughed n entered their class

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Sharma mension

Mayank get up at 11 am in the morning n went to dinning hall for breakfast n gunjan was waiting 4 him before he could say anything to gunjan
some voice interrupted him
"janab ho gayi aap ki subah"
mayank turned around n this voice was of none other than his mama ji................mayank used to avoid meeting his mama ji because whenever they came across his mama ji always started his lecture.
mayank closed his eyes n then he said
M: good morning mama ji..............aap aaj office nahi gaye.....
Mama ji: nahi ham ne socha aap to buhat busy rehte hain to kyon na ham hi aap se milne ka time nikaal lain
M: (understanding his meaning) ye to buhat acha kiya aap ne
MJ: to phir kya socha hai
M: (although knowing wat he is alking abt bt still) kiss bare main
MJ: apni responsbilities sambalne k bare main barrkhudaar
M: wo maine bataya to tha k abi main aur parna chahta hun
MJ: aur kitna paro gay tum......sambalna to tmhe bussiness hi hai na.......jab main tmhare jitna tha to uss waqt to gunjan bi paida ho chuki thi lekin tm........na jaane kya chahte ho tum
mayank was listining all this silently n gujan was silently smiling looking mayank's expressions

MJ: kuch samaj aaya main kya keh raha hun?
M: ji mama ji
MJ: kya samaj aaya
M: yehi k agar aap aik saal pehle meri shadi karwa dete to main aaj aik baby ka papa hota.....(he said this innocently)
gunjan burst out of laughing n stopped at his father's glare
MJ: (he was shocked at his answer).......(maybe he was regreting now asking him to take responsbilities)tum ja kahan rahy thy (he finally said)
M: wo main aik dost se milne ja raha tha
his mama ji was falling short of words now.........
M: (innocently).....ji main jaon ab mama ji
MJ: jao jahan jana hai.........jaise mere kehne se tum jao gay nahi na
then mama ji went to office n mayank heaved a sigh of relief

Gunjan: (laughing now)....waoo mayank tmhara chehra dekhne wala tha.........
M: shut up gunjan............
G: aur nahi to kya.........tum papa se itna darte kyon ho......
M: oh really tum to aise keh rahi ho jaise tum bilkul nahi darti un se
G: of course darti hun lekin tmhare jaisa monkey jaisa muh nahi banati..........
M: kya kaha tum ne .......main monkey hun
G: of course iss main pochne ki kya baat hai........thats wat you are........MONKEY
M: i wont leave you chashmish (n started running after her)
G: (while running) dont call me chashmish
M: why not...... agar main monkey hun to tum chashmish
n then they started cushion fight

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Medical college

D: hey nupur tmhara test kaisa howa......
N: buhat acha.........after all pori raat parha tha acha kyon nahi ho ga
D: hey suhaani tum itni chup kyon ho
S: nahi to........
N: tmhara test kaisa hoa
S: mat pocho yaar........buhat bura hoa........mujh se test prepare hi nahi hoa tha
N: of corse ho ga bi kyon...........tmhe apne prince charming se fursat mile to test tyaar karo gi na......pata nahi wo idiot hai kon?
S: shut up nupur...........khabar daar mere prince ko kuch bola
D: this is too much tum uss k bare main kuch bi nahi jaanti phir bi tum kehti ho tum usse like krti ho
S: (dreamingly said) wo hai hi buhat acha
N: tmhe uss ka naam bi nahi pata to tum log baat kya karte ho.........i mean
S: (cutting her in btwn) just casual baat krte hain..........na hi uss ne kabi mera naam pocha na hi main ne
D: kya wo bi tmhe like krta hai?
S: pata nahi..........kabi iss bare main baat hi nahi hoi
N: tum pagal ho suhaani............u know na ye pyar wagaira kuch nahi hota to kyon apna time waste kr rahi ho
S: tum yeh iss liye keh rahi ho kyon ki tmhe kabi pyar nahi hoa.......jab ho ga na
N: kabi nahi ho ga..........main janti hon.........main to arrange marriage karon gi no love marriage at all

they were chating all this when a boy came to them
Boy: hey girls...........aaj ka test kaisa raha.........
Nupur actually bacame scared..........she is actually very scared of boys
S: buhat acha hoa adiraj..........aur tmhara
A: well mera bi acha howa hai.........nupur tumhara kaisa howa.......waise red colour tmhe buhat suit kr raha hai
N: (scared).....wo....wo acha hoa hai... mera bi
D: (understanding nupur's condition) ok adiraj ab ham chalte hain hame dair ho rahi hai...........see you tomorrow.......bye
A: (looking towards nupur) bye .......bye nupur
without saying bye she turned to go

D: hey relax nupur ..........kya hoa
N: kuch nahi......hona kya hai (giving her fake smile)
D: stop behaving like this nupur..........wo sirf baat hi to kar raha tha
N: dia plz........tm janti ho na mujhy larkon se buhat darr lagta hai........i dont know why bt i m helpless
S: oh god nupur tum bi na...........you know na adiraj likes you.....
N: shut up suhaani........mujhy ye sab pasand nahi hai....tum janti ho
S: ok ok fine.........tum bi na nupur pata nahi kis cheez se bani ho
D: ok girls its getting late hamien ab chalna chahiye.....i'll drop you nupur
N: han han........jaldi chalo........ok bye suhaani
S: bye dia.......bye nupur
N: bye suhaani aur haan ab kal ka test zaror prepare kr lena.........sara time apne prince charming k sath chatting main waste mat krna
S: ok fine sara nahi karon gi.........thora time parh bi lon gi........ok
N: tmhara kuch nahi ho sakta suhaani
then they went towards their homes.............

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hey guys this was first part of this ff..........
U have come to know now that mayank n suhaani chat with each other.......maybe like each other
so guys do read next updates to know how mayank n nupur will come to know each other........n how they will fall in love........or may be not........


do tell me how was this update.........maybe you all will find it boring bt as this was 1st chapter ......so this intro was necessry
plz plz plz do comment n tell me do u like it or not..........



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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
Loved the CS sooo sweeet! but wer is sammy😕

Part 1: AWESUM👏

Wow u are sooo good, long and lovable part! loved everything frm mayu's pataying his mom, chatting, telling his mamaji that he wud have a baby😆😆😆 who says that😆😆😆 to arguing wit chashmish😆😆 MONKEY😳😳
Nupur was so cute also, late wake up and she doesnt believe in love... woh i had a doubt that suhaani was the black beauty😆😆 okay so im guessing thats the prob😆😆 loved nupsi's diff attitude she studied all night while mayu was so irresponsible😕😕 im wondering will he mistake her for black beauty??? maybe when they decide to meet and suhaani pushes her jst like in the show suhaani is playing nupur😆😆 tell me im right😉 it will be sooo cool!!!!!! Loved nupsi getting scared of adhiraj😆😆 i found that so not like nupur😆😆😆 scared and morena express😆😆 but i luv it when the character is out of the shows character😉

Luved it too much👏

do cont jaldi😊 Btw first time i commented on a FF without a PM😆 see so loyal😉

Do cont soooooooon!

Luv
Nadz😳
Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago

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