Mera Intazar Krna(Mayur ff)new thread link pg 150 - Page 21

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

omg! wow
nice updt

Originally posted by: mjht_fan

*EDITED*

it was a really nice part

but i feel bad for mayank he's gonna be heartbroken when he finds out

plzzzzzzzzz can u make suhaani or someone tell him the truth

plzzzz

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Rabi!!!!!!!!!!! Meri dost!

Wow, I thought that Mayank would be in love

but this misunderstanding,

I hope this doesn't make it a problem

even though it will

but awesome part

loved it

continue soon!

Originally posted by: maria_awan

ur ff is great i loved it and thansk 4 pm dear i love mayur moment and his i love u

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Hey Rabihey nidzy

gr8 update dear thank you so much dear

I dont have words to describe how much I loved it

The whole part was Awwwsome

simply loved Mayanks confession

loved the way you describedhis feelings thanks yaar............i m so happy that u liked this part this much

and the song was really nice thats one of my favourites you know😉

I hope Nupur falls for him soon

but then Mayank should come to know about the truth well lets see kya ho ga...........

do continue soon dear sure yaar

hamein zyada intezar mat kara ok my dear nahi karwaon gi............😆

luv

Nidzy
btw thanks 4 such a lovely comment yaar...............😊

Originally posted by: Aranya

Lovely update!!!

Its supeerb!!!

I am soooo loving this story...:))

Thanks for the PM

Love

Aranya

Originally posted by: fariaa70

wow wow Rabi,
What an update yaar.
totally loved it.
It was an awesome update.
Aww mayur love nupur.
But there was a misunderstanding.
loved the confession part and then the hug scene.
it was too good.
i loved the following sentences-
M: (with serious tone)main wahan tumhara ban k jaa raha hun nupur, wahan per bi sirf tumhara ban k rahon ga.........aur main wapis aaon ga nupur...........sirf tumhare liye...........i promise main wapiss aaon ga.mera intazar krna nupur...............main wapiss zaror aaon ga
mayu is so sweet. i loved
Oh Rabi this sentences touch my heart
And I can easily imagine embarrassed nupur.
poor mayank- he totally unaware that nupur came there just 4 suhani.
but i think soon she will fall in love with mayu also.
May b she recall the word that mayu told her-mera intezar karna.
Oh Rabi i m now fida over this ff.
plz do as nidzy said-hum logo ko jaida intezar mat karana.
Many many thanx 4 ur lovely,cute, mind-blowing pat.
plz plz try to update next part soon.
Zilion of luv

Originally posted by: Nishithini

really nice part.