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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988

aww...muaahs...watta chweet n chugary update!!! 😳 šŸ˜ šŸ¤—

loved d MODERN GRANDMA's conditions!!! 🤣 excellent!!! n it was so swt of mayu 2 agree 2 her conditions...dis is our mayur!!! hayee kash original mein yeh sab hota!!! šŸ˜ šŸ¤” u knw m feelin real low aftr yestrday's epi..jst praying dat d cv's mk evrythng gud n normal btwn mayur... n ur update jst made me 4get d reality 4 nw..thnx dear.. 😊 do continue soon..

luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... šŸ¤—

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -sam-

u didnt pm me, very good😔
Keep it up!!!! I was waiting for update and u didnt pm me.
May be you dont want me to read it na???? 😔😔😔😔
Fine🤢

But i cant stop commenting as i m in love with this ff since ur first update. But who cares????
Coming to the part, i loved it......😊
More than any of ur other updates....
I'll never talk to you😭😭😭

i no samu cant be angry on her chweet frnd right...!
u know i love u a lot right...!
then how can u even think that i forgot to pm on purpose...
will i do that ever...i may forgot by chance,,,
sorry this problem will never occur i promise😃😃
u do ur exams well...i will wait for ur comment
loves
jeni
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

i loved your surprisešŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰am loving u a lot but not for loving it but for being my lovely friend..u no u realy care for me i love that

mujhe laga aab kal hi update milega
but i really loved it
mera mood bahut accha ho gaya hai
the update was mindblowing
mayur confession was so cute
loved nupur's conditions
let's see how mayank follows them
i think it will be nupur who'll break these conditions
i know mayank will never cross his limits
loved mayur hugs
they were so passionate
continue soon
luv
mahima

love u a lot mahima...i no u hate thanks so am giving u a special picture...
loves
jeni!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Sorry for being so lazy….love u all….

Part 16

Mayank… really I can't walk more than this nupur said settling on a long stone....

Mmmh I too was about to say that…he sat near her..he was looking at her but she was no way near to even look at him staring this much lovelier...nupur he murmured inside his heart clenching his teeth listened to her irritatingly

It is evening yaar….we are roaming for one full day , but we couldn't find them…she circling his arms with her hands resting her head on his shoulders raising head asked they will be safer nah

he loved nupur for being this much close for being strong as he knows she was scared a lot for sammy and gunjan...looking at her eyes which was so closer said nupur actualy if you are asking much cutely then what can I say sweety they will be safer , don't worry…!

Who is that sweety? She asked raising her eyebrows in anger

Oh god … you think I can get one more..i mean I cant even manage one sweety then how can I go for next sweety…

you think i will leave you that easy...dont even look at other girls..if i found anything like that i will kill you...!
he just smiled at her being jealous of her...Mayank, I will give one idea nupur....šŸ˜†said in sudden

Wow for getting one more girl friend...šŸ˜†

Shut up...and listen to me she said hitting him on his shoulders

Ahh nupur its paining , by the way boy do only that job šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† ?

i cant get you
i mean only before falling in love all girl maintain silent...but after marriage all would changed right?
she gave an expression whether u have any experiencešŸ˜›
hey dont look like that but in our relation you the one always talk...am the one always gonna listenšŸ˜† he said mockingly, seeing her trying move from him he just holded her hands made her sit on the same position said...i only like my nupur this way...šŸ˜›
enough now will you gonna allow me to talk or not...
sorry for taking your job...just go on with your idea nupz

Mmmh listen she said smiling.. we both will go in separate roots she said with her hands showing the directions, so it will be easy for us to find them right..?

seeing him giving the worst expression she continued i know you are showing on a face beacause you havent go this idea before right...see how brilliant am i...she said raising on her coller..so we can fine sammy and gunjan earlier...she went on was stopped by mayank..
Fantastic idea nupur….wait instead of talking we can just start with your lovely plan... he said standing so I will go this side and you go on this way right he started moving from there

Nupur looked at him moving on...he went without asking were to meet again...mayank listen she shouted but he was not there at the view to look on and convey her message

She stood there alone for 2-3 minutes nothing entered her mind correctly , he had went ....god she looked at the place around in which she was standing there alone with fear capturing her slowly inside.

She was the one who said stupidly but how dare he left her alone…I will kill him for this…she walked on his direction lonelier...fearing a lot inside of being left alone...šŸ˜•

she started to scold him..i will never talk with him…

One second is he playing with her, he will never leave her alone as he cares for her a lot ..she tried to call him in louder closed her mouth tightly went bit faster stood some were hiding herself hope fully...peeped out her head with a hope...for a minute there was no reaction...she was really left scared now...

Nupur she listened to the familiar tone near her ear felt relaxed .....his strong arms encircled her waist tightly pulled her towards him...mmmh you were that much confident…

i know you will not leave she said with shaking tone..bit tears reached her eye ends were waiting to fall now and then...
he laughed holding her more tightly tried to change her mood lighter , he hate those tears which were about to fall so he continued...well nupz i havent see any one to be this bravo...

Stop playing mayank she said resting on his shoulder murmured...am sorry..yet i was the one talking stupidly still you could have tried to make understood right?

that what i had did...i like being practical he winking his eyes if havent done that you would never hugged me like this too....šŸ˜†šŸ˜³ you look so cute ...whenever you come this much closer😳, but you should not blame if I did something…he said looking somewhere...!

She pinched him and moved from his embrace said now just follow me " my dear young man."

As per you order he said following her both continued smilingly holding hands …

After little more walk mayank continued not liking the silence ....nupur am so much worried he said making her stand turned towards him just looked at her eyes...šŸ˜›

Seeing his heartbreaking tone she asked nervosley ...why mayank we cant find bhaya and gunjan huh…

common i had promised you already i will find them right but that not what am talking about....i wanted to ask is after finding your brother you will not even give look at me nah...

What mayank? I mean ...I really …she dropped her head blushing avoiding his lovely gaze....😳

He came little more closer dragging her own sentence saying ...really what nupur…he asked not moving his eyes from her

Making him move away said I mean I really like you ,

say me , what you was about to say he said pulling her more closer
now better stop romancing, am really very much concerned about my brother he will be searching for me...

Oh really I couldn't see anything like that he said looking at some direction

What? she followed his eyes...

See your brother and gunjan having a cute eye lock ....i mean their romancing a lot

Nupur looked at them standing near the car ,

The car they had left at the midnight she was about to run stopped by mayank you told you will not leave me...by the way disturbing them romancing is not fair...he went on and on was stopped as...

nupur removed her hands from his hold just went near him kissed mayank on his cheeks ran towards her brother shouting Sammy bhaya…mayank was stunned at her kissing in sudden smilingly followed her…joyfully...

She went and hugged samrat who was happy looking at her sister it was like a dream they had been seperated and now they were once again together …nupur watched mayank who was hugging gunjan ...watched him holding his cheeks winking at nupur lovingly.... which she went red…!

To be continued…!

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh god i can't believe after so many days i was commenting first
jenni what a update yaar
i was blushing mupur's idea nad maynk he did not leave a chance to romance and i really like this idea
and the kiss was really sweet well i want to give you a jadu ki jappi for this
nupur was jealous and this was cool and the sweeti
luv you jenni for this sweet update
Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey.... Awesome update ... Very Nice....
Edited by mjhtnupurmayank - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update dear..pls update ur other ff "locked love to be found"...pls.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Jeni, Delayed but very nice uodate.
Do continue soon.
Thanx a Lot for PM
Love
-Prachi
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing part plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

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