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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: topsyturvy23

hey awesome update
really liked the pic collection
sorry cudnt reply earlier was kinda busy
thanks for pm
plz update soon

thx dear...happy u have commented...
loads of love
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Posted: 15 years ago

part 12

mayank - nupur nothing much don't go too far , he mocked handing her Cadburys box (sorry)😉?

nupur -wow mayank thanks , bhaya would definitely kill you for sure, she kidded, she smiled getting it in her hands ...

samrat- nupur don't eat more ..

gunjan- nupur he means to say share it and eat right Sammy

samrat - gunjan they two were on their own track when mayank lowered his tone to nupur saying

mayank - actually I thought of giving some sort of what you have been guessing till now

nupur turned redish said stop it mayank I didn't think anything,

mayank - ohh really he smiled 😃

nupur - listen am not lying..😳

mayank ok baba your always talking the truth, saying this he turned to samrat saying Sammy let the girls move to the car lets both remove the tent and go.

Samrat - ok dude,

Gunjan- what do you guys think , we girls can help u ha, we will go along with each other.

Mayank- listen gunjan its not safer to stand here for a longer time he said in a serious tone.

Nupur- ohh its jungle nah so all the animals will be roaming around nah, you better stop your pranks

Gunjan- nupur is right you liers

Samrat - fine let us all remove tent faster and move soon, so that we can reach out sooner.

4 closed the tent they had made and walked out in pairs as the guys took lead holding stick with fire burning. Nupur had never left out gunjans hand, nupur was continuously murmuring something in order to not show her fear out.

Samrat - mayank see there

Mayank looked at the way samrat had shown, he closed nupurs mouth with his hands and said Sammy put down the fire.

Gunjan - mayank what happened, why you guys act weird.

Samrat - sssh, see there gunjan he said lowering her tone..

gunjan viewed as nupur too looked there fearing and making mayank taking his hands out of her mouth?saw there a group of elephants lying down near their car nupur had heard elephants will always be crowded?but not seen this is her first time.

Nupur- just elephant guys you were afraid as if its lion very bad

Mayank -Samrat better teach your sister something about elephants it may kill peoples, since they may think us to be enemies,they may try to defend us nupur,it will crush you , since its forest grown elephants it will be more harsher towards us.

Nupur - just stop fearing us Mayank ,this is not the time to play.

Seeing on the an elephant coming towards them Sammy you haven't Before he completed samrat said run guys it seems its not safer here.

All four started to run as an elephant was coming looking at them , 4 were splited with different directions..nupur had ended up falling on the lake.

nupur raised up from the cold water breathing heavily,shivering out of cold and she scarcely called out 3 names whether they were nearer

bhaya! Bhaya

Gunjan

Mayank

Anybody here..She looked around as she herself don't know where she was standing, she was not fearing of darkness as she was worried a lot about 3.once again she called out the names, tears rolled on her face.

What had happened...

She moved out slowly to move out of water, stopped by some hand stopping her at back, suddenly looked around to see mayank without further thought she hugged him tightly

Nupur calm down mayank slowly patted her head lovingly

She cried for minutes , slowly controled herself and came out of her fear moved away from him asked Where is bhaya and gunjan

He searched out his pocket they are not here nupur..he said in a searious tone

Mayank this is not time for jokes, she said punching him on his shoulders

He holded her hands and looked at her eyes passionately, nupur made her eyes look down the water as they were standing in the water...he came near her making her breath heavily, he controlled his feelings said

nupur its so cold hear lets move from hear first come, holding her hands safely not willing to leave, as she felt secured, she too never thought of pulling out her hands...they came out of the water sat on the near by stone..
they sat until they found some light, they both know until its bright they cant move searching for gunjan and samrat, silence was rulling over there, as they were holding hands and sitting calmly...after long time mayank spoked
Nupur cool see you haven't believed my words...it was not much darker as its dawning slowly now , she can identify his face very well..
She looked like what I haven't believed

nupur I told you before itself this place is not safer

She smiled , understanding his try towards her making her come out of fear, she said your always lying ,and your talking truth rarely then how can i

So you thought my love for you is lie...

Mayank she said avoiding his gaze..let us search for bhaya and gunjan, she said standing

to be continued...
i thought of making slight change from a normal journey....you guys liked it huh..do let me know frinds...waiting for your comments... sorry for my mistakes..
Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

first to comment....... yay.........

rocking update jenni.......
loved each and every part.......
in the begining the gang scene was so cute.........
then the elephants scene where maynk put his hand over nupur's mouth was so awwwwwww....
and best was the mayur hug scene.........
and of course a small confession.........
continue soon........
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
jeny ye keya hogaya main first comment nehi karpayi 😭 😭 😭

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jeniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
keya update tha by god
loved the every bit of this update
i wish ke tum har baar mujhe pm karna bhool jao
or mujhe itni sweet compensation mile
first the mayur and sajan scene was so cute
mayank gave her chocolate
maine to kuch or hi socha tha 😳
nups was soooooooo sweet
scared expression me bohot hi cute lagrahai thi
and mayur hug was amazing dear
or last me mayank ka wo dialogue
keya hum isse mayank ka confession samjhe?
u know this ff is my most favo
loved the whole update
pls update soon
dont be late
love u
Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Tapoor

jeny ye keya hogaya main first comment nehi karpayi 😭 😭 😭

next time i'l let u come first
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Posted: 15 years ago

ohh now tapoor chweety next time...you can...

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

next time i'l let u come first



nehi yaar koi baat nehi
actually jeni mujhe last update ki pm karna bhool gayi thi to ye update meri compensation hai 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
now say it i want to know whether u guys liked it huh
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Tapoor



nehi yaar koi baat nehi
actually jeni mujhe last update ki pm karna bhool gayi thi to ye update meri compensation hai 😃

bahut perfect compensation hai
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Tapoor



nehi yaar koi baat nehi
actually jeni mujhe last update ki pm karna bhool gayi thi to ye update meri compensation hai 😃

arey just compentation nahi..my first pm was only to you nah...😃 r u happy buddy...

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