mayur ff-every day is spcl...pt 16 pg 129! - Page 31

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey jenni i read it today.......its great yaar.........mayank flirting with nupur.........i really like mayur bit........that was awesum.........
n mayu is really gonna be in trouble for not knowing abt samrat and nupur's relation...........n yeah i really like samrat as possisive bro for nupur.........
do cont soooooooooooon

thx rabi that was a great comment from u...
loads of love
jeni
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sam-18

Hey Jenni😃, I have been reading ur story and i just love it a lot.šŸ˜› I always wait for the update. i was a silent reader. plz pm me and pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue soonnnnnnnnnn...........................................

thx for u comming out of silence dear...
am happy u like it buddy...sure i will pm u...i have added u in my pm list..
loads of love
jeni
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 6:
Note: Friends it longer one for sure……no complains
mayank I suppose your with your own sense
of course gunjan I am with my own sense he smiled enthusiastically
gunjan continued angrily don't smile mayank, I am gonna kill you, there is no link with me here standing with you
is this java program to be linked…
very funny ,she once again continued not allowing him to open his mouth again listen mayank you standing for your lover , you had pulled me with you too that's the worse thing forever you had done for now mayank there was a irritation on gunjan's voice
nothing worse gunjan , you only told you wanted to see nupur mayank said cooly
Soo you will show her standing outside theatre huh very bad said curving her lips upside down
Just stand for me gunjan please…he begged more to her
You would have shown me in our college itself mayank…this is too much, seeing mayank and his face reactions of pleading her was worse for a best friend to over react more than that…she kept her hand on her mouth said ok mayank I will maintain silence
That's good said smilingly yet viewing at the entrance continuously
How would you know they are coming here mayank
Gunjan you throwing more questions
Mmmh yet I don't get any answer from you mayank…see there she is mayank, she showed her hands on the opposite of him….she said with an excited tone
Where he was looking around to find no one looked at gunjan to show him…find her smiling mischievously
Wow mayank you know…I promise you lost your sense… I haven't looked at her yet she said trying to control her smile
Gunjan you haven't watched 3idiots nah he diverted her
am not interested it to watch it now either mayank
common gunjan it an interesting movie to be watched I promise you will have fun

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Nupur who was silent enough called samrat slowly
All the gang turned and looked at her for stopping before entering theatre
Mmmh lets go and have a look at the exhibition, instead of watching movie
what do you say ?which exhibition nupur asked samrat
I mean nearby books exhibition is going lets go there
Samrat know she likes to read but what made her change, there should be a reason, But nupur we had planned to watch movie right
Of course bhaya
Lets go to the exhibition tomorrow nupur said samrat
I have head ache am not in mood to watch a movie
Samrat came near her touched at her forehead and asked are you alright, well then come lets go to the doctor first
Bhaya nothing much its light pain that's it watching movie may give irritation
Lets all go to the exhibition said samrat
Looked at dia, benji and uday who were throwing angry glare constantly on her for making a sudden change..
Bhaya do one thing you all go and watch the movie, I will go alone yet you no am not kid
Losing their temper uday and benji said yet your kid for Sammy seeing samrat looking angrily they closed their mouth
Please I don't want my friends to be disappointed bhaya
Yet you going alone is not good nupur
sammy I will go with nupur to the exhibition , yet I had watched the movie already said dia
fine somehow nupur made him convince and they both went viewing hands to the boys as they entered inside
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Mayank showed nupur to gunjan
Mayank I promise your selection is good I mean she angelic yaar
Mayank blown with big smile looked at gunjan asked really nah she is an angel
Mmmh I guess something ,...she stopped not completing her sentence
What is that your dragging gunjan?
I don't think she will suit you said with big smile holding on
Mayank turned seriously said why gunjan am I looking that much bad
Mayank you look… seeing him getting eager she said …you absolutely look like a handsome "monkey"
Gunjan he raised his hands for beating her viewed opposite as gunjan said
see she is leaving from here go catch her mayank
seeing her moving outside he was disappointed,yet he couldnt leave gunjan alone
seeing him gunjan felt bad for him
are you kidding you stand here alone you think… I will leave my best friend and go
ohhh god mayank am seriously dead of your dialog mayank….you know am not interested in watching the movie either
then I will drop you home said mayank
mayank your seriously gone man, yet proud of his friendship, she wanted him to go she know that he desire for going inside his heart not wanted to leave her alone
gunjan how are you? came a sweet girl near gunjan and mayank
Hey afsha am fine how r you?( hope u like it afsha …I made you happy, yet I kept my promise too 😃😃😃)
afsha smiled at gunjan and asked you came hear for watching movie
Yup gunjan nodded her mayank was watching their conversation
great to catch you hear gunjan she sounded most excited..she viewed mayank
Afsha he is mayank my best friend just then gunjan introduced him to her
Hey handsome
Hai chweety it was mayank
Gunjan looked at mayank in her mind god he had changed totally
So you both I suppose movie would start if we are talking standing here go and watch at time
Gunjan got hold of this and said afsha you came alone huh
Yup my friends haven't come so I too planned to move… seeing you I changed my mind
But afsha sorry to say we too are not watching movie said mayank
Gunjan said mayank it was too long I had met her I will give company to her watching movie you go
But gunjan he know she is saying it for him
Mayank see I will look after your friend and remember she is my friend too afsha promised him smilingly(good job babbyšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†)
That's so chweet of you dear he kicked his bike and flied smiling thanking afsha…
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Gunjan was happier , she thanked god for sending afsha and helping her friend
They both entered and searched particular seats
Excuse me samrat turned and looked at gunjan calling him
Hey gunjan you place was totally dark to identify yet he identified gunjan within seconds
Gunjan smiled and looked deep to identify him its samrat, I called out for asking whether seat is free or booked she too smiled
Samrat was flying he smiled with his soft tone said of course free for you gunjan
She sat near him and made afsha sit near her
Pleasure to meet you here gunjan
Gunjan saw his sweet gesture wondered he haven't talked much with her in the classes..but now
She smiled and introduced afsha to samrat
Hai samrat nice to meet you
Glad to meet you too he gave his hot smile to her
They maintained silence as the movie started
Samrat was fully gone out he was viewing gunjan and made a special note in his heart after some time he turned got gunjan's view but seeing her face he couldn't control himself he just asked
Gunjan anything troubling you
She looked at him with a sad face
Actually if not interested to share then leave it
Gunjan not wanted to make him feel awkward said nothing there to hide samrat its that
Am waiting…. seeing her glance on him asked seriously just then noticed her looking near by often
Actually samrat I came hear with afsha she had got something important she wanted to leave at once(sorry dear to pack u up soon)
So she can leave nah
then how will i go? gunjan panicked
Afsha interrupted samrat actually I promised mayank to company her but I have an important work
So I can drop her afsha if gunjan has no problem in it..if only that's the problem
Before gunjan said no afsha said absolutely fine samrat…so gunjan give me a call after you reach..home
Samrat smiled and viewed her a bye and looked at her hurrying
Now cool just smile said samrat
Actually you don't have any problem in it nah samrat
Absolutely not gunjan am waiting… for the wonderful opportunity he said lowering his tone
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Mayank you here….nupur looked frightened….she rolled her eyes around searching for dia, she was busy with stall searching mills & boons books,as she is fond of the romantic books.
Relax nupur am not a devil, am normal human being, act normal he said smilingly, So you read books huh
She nodded her head not much interested to talk with him
Whose your favorite author nupur…he was interested to know her likes and dislikes
Barbara cartland..i have many… she stopped not willing to continue with him looked at him said I want to go bye
She moved ahead stopped not moving as mayank holding her she turned shockingly
So love blossom to be flowered …. I will update my next ff next week…am working on that too…leave your comments friends
Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

friends i have one small request...i need ur pm list so if u want me to pm u then specify that in ur comments...i dont want to disturb anybody....so please specify...hope u like update...waiting for ur comments

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh i am first one to comment, yayyyyyy🄳
look my progress from 2nd last to first wow..........šŸ˜‰
well back to update, i loved first part of Mayank and Gunjan
n then Nupur didn't came there, well its good, else Mayank had to meet her infront of her guard oh i mean her bro sammy..........šŸ˜†
n then last scene where Mayank came to Nupur that was my fav in update. I love this changed Mayank, he loves Nupur so i love him for loving Nupur...............šŸ˜‰
But mayur was less in this part........anyways it was longer enough
do cont soooooooooooooooo. n update ur other one also........that too sooooooon..........šŸ˜‰
Edited by rose.mn - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome update....!!!!! I really liked it
keep up the gud job..!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wah! ji aap toh writer nikle you should go and join cv it would be gr8 help to him well conti..... soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
jeni
its an amazing update
but mayur part is 2 short na?
pls i want more mayur scene
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Posted: 15 years ago
grr88 jobbb anuuu dii!!
cuuudd u updatteee a smallll innocentt updateee!!
*innocent muhh*
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
cont soon
nxt part shuld b more on mayur plzzz
love sehrish

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