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sybarite1989

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Posted: 11 years ago

#981

epilogue plzzz... big request... 😊😊😊

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sai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#982

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...it was sooo sad...but da ending was beautifully written...perfect...AR r made 4 each other...going 2 miss da ff...Thanks 4 da pm

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prati

@Luvforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#983

It was jst so beautiful & complete part... It was d perfect ending 4 dis awsome ff... D ups & down dey faced in der relation bt stil d luv was always der 4 each oder & truly riddhima ki mehendi ka rang phika nai pada...
Bt isse end kyun krdiya i simply loved it soo much... & wil always do... D emotions u bring in ur story is simply marvellous & i love u as a writer... Can i hope 4 an epilogue atlst... Plzz...
Will miss dis ff a lot...

Prati

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jiyaa_m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#984

y u end it plz dont end it

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Sameera

@sameera_12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#985

I'll see for an Epilogue as this Thread is already Over!

Edited by sameera_12 - 11 years ago

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teenorchid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#986

Originally posted by: sameera_12
I'll see for an Epilogue as this Thread is already Over!

koi baaat nahi na epilogue k liye naya thread thori banani hogi

issi pe likh doo

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#987

awsm part.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c

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rads73937

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Posted: 11 years ago

#988

FINALLY THEY ARE TOGETHER.

GIVE US AN EPILOGUE SOON.

THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE

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teenorchid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#989

To usse Azzad kardo...

ye pichle update ki last line thiii. nd issne meri saaans roki hui thi :/

"Wo toot jayegi!"

"Wo har subha ek nai umeed k saath jaagti hai!! Aur har raat toot kar bikhar jati hai!!!

Usse Azzad kar k kitna aur torr do gay tum??

Ussne mere liye khud ko poori tarah se badal diya...

bus intezaar karti hai!

mere bazu pe goosebumps the ye sb parhte hue.. how did u manage to write theseee

iss part me mjhe ridhimaa k liye bht feeel huaaa... he suffered pehle tou baad me uss bechari ne b bht kiya..."Ab to mujhse baat he nahi karta"

how helpless she was:/

anjali ne mast tareeka bataya.. routine change krna nd bhooka marnaaa.. :P

ache ache line pe aa jate hai. par armaan jee thori thehri cheex hai. inhhe theek krna muskil hai bt na mumkin nhiii...

Jahan mauqa mile... gussa ho jao! Kyunki tum aisi ho! Aur usne saari zindagii tumhe aise he jhela hai!!

another wise advice by anjieee

iss sb me ridz ka faint hona i guess ek dewaar hatam kr gaya. atleast he panicked seeing her like that... theri confrontation after that made me too emotionalll

. Tumhe kese bhool jaoon??"( Tears made way down my cheeks too...)

"Akhir meri mehndi ka rang pheeka parr he gaya Armaan!!"

i was speechless hereee :P

"Agar wo meri kismat hai!! To usse koi mujhse cheen nahi sakta! Aur nahi hai... to koi usse mera nahi bana sakta..." ye baat tou pate ki hai

its already written. milna ho tou koi ju marxi kr le mil k rehte hai

finally jealoussyyy.. hayyyeee. or shd i say realizationnn :P

"eent aur patthar ka makaan mera ghar nahi hai!! jahan hum saath hain wo mera ghar hai!

sam how did u write this yaaar. i am amazeddd... this is awesome. i couldnt expresss myself isliye tmhari llines ko use kr rhi hu

he slapped herrr.. like realllyyy...OMGGg

A moment came and stopped making her realise that she has been slapped by him and her head is about to hit a rock and he realized he was about to loose her...

the turning pointtt...!!!!

this ws the best part of ur ff sam

really the best

"Pata nahi iss baar rung ayega bhi ya nahi?? meri mehndi to mujhe pata he nahi chala kab pheeki parna shuru hogai!"

it took my heart beat away :P

tmne muski ki shadi pe ye scene kiya, i imagined it to be on karwachauth

yehi ek ff hai tmhara jis me hamari imaginations aur thinking milti tho. warna bakiyon me tou tm subko peeche chor drti hooo

and the last confession sceneee. it ws awesomeee

beyond wordsss...😳

"Eent aur Patthar se bana makaan mera ghar nahi hai!! Jahan hum saath hain.. wohi mera ghar hai!! Aur Sukoon to ghar mein he milta haina??"

maaar daaala zalimmm😛

They were shattered because of eachother, they have gone through so much because of eachother and still they knew they are the once who can sooth saway this pain they were carrying since long...

👍🏼👍🏼

It was Dark! Darker Than Any Other, Like Always!!

har lineee itni fabolous thi sam. hatts off too u girl.

i dont have wordsss to describe about the part... it ws beyond words. nd maybe one of ur best writing...