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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#371

hey suma

it was great as again

hmm,,yuvi confessing naina he stole for living with mac

yet she supported him

the last part was funny,,

GF poor yuvi,,

he might need a year to tell that it was for teasing naina ./ not?😆

sri:-)

Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#372

hehehehe....Sumi, i wonder if Yuvi did this to all this GF's??????
LOL....nice part.....I luv AN!!!! (ummmm....hint hint!)
LOLZ............update sumthing soooooooooooon

XOXOXO,
Sheena

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Liza S.

@Liza.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#373

aww I liked this one . it was too cute .

also looking foward to the SidNa one 😊

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sunena2293

@sunena2293

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#374

awwww.....sumi...for me..lol....you shouldn't have 😊
It was soooo cute.....I love sunsets...lol
and you said machines....lol...I was just teasing you when I called you a machine...lol....but I guess it gave you inspiration...😊
Your a wonderful writer......I looked forward to your future os...
I really hope one day yuvi opens up to naina like he did in your os....that would be soooo cute...lol

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Supriya

@sups2222

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#375

TWO LOVE BIRDS........

i have always dreamt of naina yuvi sitting quietly in each other's arms on the warm sand and staring ahead at the setting sun.......No revenge thinking , no double faces, no guilt ..................ONLY PURE LOVE..........

"Are you ever not curious?" Yuvi looked down and smiled at her..😆So NAINA have not still left her MISS PRINCESS DETECTIVE CROWN .....lolz
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"I stole..."

Yuvi looked down to see Naina's expression...she was smiling...the smile that screamed... "I knew it!"...this made Yuvi smile as well.
So NAINA Have not stopped Her UNUSUAL GIFT OF GUESSING about Yuvi's DARK LIFE.......its good to see naina has not changed a bit but instead changed yuvi .......

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My uncle never got an opportunity to find out...first of all I never got caught....hmmmn so yuvi was a perfectionist till he met naina heheh love the way naina use to pop up in every single move yuvi made......

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"So, did you ever have a girlfriend?" Naina looked at Yuvi again with a curious face.

"Too many to list!" Yuvi looked at Naina with a teasing smile

"WHAT!"

As expected the rest of the evening was spent convincing Naina that he was just teasing her...well that's what happens when you arouse the curiosity of a very curious person.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

YUP this happens when u wake up the CUTEST N MOST CURIOS SITE lamb(REFERENCE: WOKE UP THE FIERCE ANIMAL )hehehe bechara yuvi have to do lot thinking even more than his revenge to convince naina........

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BUT IN FACT MY FAVOURITE LINES WERE:

She did not say anything but simply gave him a kiss on the cheek...

"Haven't you heard of the saying...things happen for a reason! If you weren't crazy about taking revenge with Dr. Shashank...you might have become a doctor but you wouldn't have necessarily chosen Sanjeevani as your teaching hospital!" Yuvi brought Naina closer to him as she spoke to him....................................

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P.S. : I HAVE TO THINK A LOT TO GIVE YOU THE REPLY IN A CREATIVE WAY TO MATCH UP WITH UR YOURA A SUCH A WONDERFUL MASTER PIECE............ITS REALLY GOOOD A SUSUAL LOVE THE FACT THAT NAINA DID FORGIVE HIM FOR WHAT HE HAD DONE TO HER.....................WAITING DESPERATELY FOR UR NEXT PART NICE PREVIEW.....................

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#376

That was so cute.....and it was also funny.....the stealing and girlfriend and Mac part....and even the last line....lolz.......Naina was being so generous with her kisses....lolz....and a romantic Yuvi 😍....that too without any changes in his character.......loved it completely.*hugs*

Edited by Starry_night - 15 years ago

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#377

OOOOOOHhhhhhhhhhhhh ohhh iwas missing you a lot these days OF LATE!!!! aweeessssooooommeeee job sumii

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Jenifer

@Jenifer.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#378

Regardless of me saying so, I loved the end! Like Sneha, I also had the feeling that all Naina wanted to know about his past was his girlfriends but just took the long way round and scored a bingo by finding out about everything else!

The preview look good. Bring it on!