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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

amazing.......
do pm me if u continue 😃

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Interstellar

@Interstellar

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

I love you! And I am willing to do anything and everything for you! You just need to ask! If I can go to any extent for my revenge, you cannot even begin to imagine...what I can do for you Naina", Yuvi kissed Naina's forehead before l
eaving the room, leaving a very shocked Naina behind.

sumi u r a wonderful writer...

Yuvi kissed Naina's forehead before leaving the room, leaving a very shocked Naina behind........ kissed sabke samne dats superb..

naina was shocked, n probably Dr.shashank had a heart attack...😆

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

@aanchal...aww thanks!!! and I just updated the ff...lol go check it out :P *hug*

@leah...this is a oneshot...lol wait...you do read my RM ff...nvm...go read the YuNa one too :P...and thanks!!! *hug*

@fizza...yayy i made you read...aww thank you sooooo much for reading and commenting on it *hug*

@javz...my faithful reader...thanks!! *hug*....lol and Yuvi should care about Naina more than his crazy revenge :P

@Shruthi...lol I guess that's your name right? hi, I am sumaiya....lol you can call me whatever you want :P...aww thanks for reading it *hug*

@sana...lol great minds think alike :P...thanks!!! *hug*

@jen...thanks!! lol I know how much everyone wants to see AA get married :P....lol and I...ughh why am I listening to you :P *hug*

@payal...aww did I make my superman sad *hug*...lol thanks!!! I know he is going to be miserable...but he is bringing it upon himself

@Abhinikiluver...aww thanks and i'll surely PM you *hug*

@Yami...aww thanks!! lol but there are better writers but thank you *hug*...lol maybe I should have given Shanky a heart attack but I feel so sorry for him sometimes

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

i looovvveee it! so much passion, so much intensity, so much love 👏

wonder if we will ever get to see that side of yuvi but i can totally imagine yuvi doing this for naina in the future when he falls for her (he has already started to fall but i am sure he wont admit it for while lol)

i love your one-shots, they never cease to amaze me :)

thanks for the pm

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

aww thanks sneha!! *hug*...lol Yuvi is falling hard and I do hope that he does go to every extent to get her!

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

sumiiiiiiiiii... i loved it to bits.. amazing.. i always knew that if he can go to such lenghts for revenge, than i only dared to imagine what lengths he could go to for love!!!

i loved it.. keep on writing.. i hope to actually see this in the serial later on !! :)

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: koolaries4
sumiiiiiiiiii... i loved it to bits.. amazing.. i always knew that if he can go to such lenghts for revenge, than i only dared to imagine what lengths he could go to for love!!!
i loved it.. keep on writing.. i hope to actually see this in the serial later on !! :)

aww thanks MJ *hug*...I am so hoping this is in the serial too...I would love to see Yuvi doing everything and anything for Naina (lol well we got a glimpse of that today...when he broke into the shop for her :P)

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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Yes! Why do you care about what I do?" Naina looked at Yuvi expressionless

Instead of answering Yuvi pressed hard on the water glass he was holding in his injured hand. When it broke, a few shrieks and his name was heard but Naina didn't say anything. He continued to press on the broken glass until she finally gave in....

"What are you doing, Yuvi? What are you trying to prove by doing this? Stop it!" Naina snatched the pieces of glass from him thus injuring her own hand.

"Why did you hurt yourself for me Naina? Why? What do you want from me? Naina...naina...I apologized didn't I? Why can't you forget it?" Yuvi's voice softened as he grabbed hold of Naina's waist and brought her closer to him

@ Red: OMG u truly r an AMAAAAAAAAAZIN writer, i think this is 1 f yr MASTERPIECES!!!!!!!!!.........👏...........the section abov 4 some reason gav me the xact same feelin i get whilst watchin a YUNA SCEN😉!!!!!!👏👏 Thnx 4 da PM!!!!😃🤗

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

U know I always imagined Yuvi chasing after Naina after she found out about him using her and her reaction would be the same. This was a really sweet one-shot! I love your writing dude! but you know that already!

hugs!

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