It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10 - Page 57

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kneeduh2000

I just finished reading this part..and i'm normaly a silent reader who doesn't comment till the end...but i just had to comment on this part. I think by far this is the best part so far...not saying that the previous ones were bad; they were amazing but i think this part was fantastic.

lol i'm sitting here with a goofy smile on my face.
Overall, i love how the storyline is going......keep up the great work buddy...can't wait till the next part :D
oh yea btw..i think the hindi version of Ride It would have suited them as well :) - pretty amazing song



Aww...that's sweet of u. thanks for commenting...it means a lot to me when silent readers comment. Hope that hanging game part increased awareness amongst a lot of young readers😊

keep commenting as and when u can...hopefully i will give u more opportunities😉 Yes, i just heard the hindi version on U tube too...that would suit them later when he is ready to confess😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful romantic part.. Though AK dint admit it!!!
so, kripa loves him as much as he is...he dint realise it..she likes to hang out wiht him, stay with him, look at him, talk to him ..everything but he dint realise..she hinted to know about her but he dint catch her words!!!
I wish all this story is on a dairy and kripa learns about it...but as my guess she already knew him!!!
as you said match making flows in indian blood..I would say it is there even in non-indian blood..the diff is we end the match making to marriage n others r satisfied with dating...lol
liked the way kripa brought Dilip to rescue angad and asked to take to doctor..it is true we need to concentrate on boys more than girls in this country
loved the conversation in the subway..kripa loves to spend time with angad but her brought up and his habits stopping her..hope they speak their hearts at the end of the story..
you explained mushkaan is playing anittah's role in AR version..I'm still smiling while reading Anittah...lol but easy to imagine as the story suits her character sketch
I too love Jay sean..my kids make fun of me for loving david archuleta and jay singing
Edited by vallanki - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ShellyB

gret part di :D

even though i was reading the a-r version didnt even realise it until armaan's name was mentioned lols
i love that song more than the words the music is really good though i think he had like 2 or 3 versions :S
that choking business my word that is sick!!!! i havent heard anyone doing it over here but does it seriously go on in U.S!!



Hi Shelly! Did I write armaan by mistake again? I hope not as i had checked it throughly this time😆

Yeah, i loved that Ride it song too...just heard it today. My daughter is crazy about jay sean😃 Yeah, there is a hindi version too of this song.
Choking game is getting very popular here in the US😕...that's why i brought it up here
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: QueenHinna12


What kind of songs did u want???
Right now I can only think of....
Watcha Say-Jason Derulo
In My Head-Jason Derulo
Crush-David Archuleta
I Need You-N Dubz
Replay-IYAZ



What about Taylor Swift? She has nice songs.

Today Was a Fairytale
You Belong With Me
I'm Only Me When I'm With You
Invisible

and she has more...😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice Olympic Cartoons, Annu. Did you watch the Winter Olympics?
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Bheegi Di !
Wonderful part....😊
i loved it a lot 😳
and im surprised i never heard of the chocking game and i live in US too.... i guess i learn something new everyday.
I love Kripa's character she is just sooooo caring.... it makes you wish you had a friend like that in your life who would be that extremely caring about your health.
I glad angad learned his mistakes and that Kripa forgave him easily.
I loved the ice skating scene a lot... if you dont mind then can you post a picture of the place as i always heard of it but never got the chance to go their and see it....
sry to butt in your other comment but i see that you need some songs so here is two songs by Jay Sean that i love a lot.....
Down
Do You Remember
~ Roshni ~
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderful update di!itz always a wonder 4 me how u write uniquely every time, using the perfect slangs & everything else keeping up with the trend!👏

Angad's too gullible internally.....try as he might, he did get almost trapped in that choking game addiction! [thanx 4 mentioning abt this dangerous game....i was completely unaware of this, as i don't think its much prevalent here in India!]
of course, Angad might've realized later, after getting rid of his ego, that Kripa had a sense of judgement much better than him!
Kripa's one of the rarest of the reserved kinda persons! shez right in telling him that he didn't know many things abt her....but Angad cud've gained access 2 her heart if only he'd acted sensibly....
good thing that Josh's behind Aaliya now....thatz one wicket down without any effort 4 Angad!😊

the skating part was totally romantic!😳 hehe, i bet anything that Kripa was lying when she told Angad that didn't like him singing the song!😉
continue soon....
Edited by bhavana92 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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goood part

angaddid the choking game....
thank god kripa kenw him well
she knw sumthin was wrong with him
she followed him
the iceskating was soo swweeeeeeeet

contineu soon
Edited by Smilesx3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
that part was amazing!!!!
i really loved it!! super cute!!
thanks for the realllyyyyy long part hahah!
and yess jay sean is awesome.
great job and cant wait for the next one! =D
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Posted: 15 years ago

This chapter took me back to the good old high school days…

"if ice creams were relationships, I am sure the guy who eventually gets you one day will be one heck of a lucky guy as you would be faithful to him all your life"

Nice line and it is so apt, but Angad doesn't realize that he is that lucky guy.

The whole choking game thing is new to me. I can't believe people would actually want to do this …

"that was probably the first trip you had taken on an unknown route to an unknown destination….just for me." I love how she is there for him even if it meant doing things that she wouldn't do…

"I averted my gaze but was stunned to see bigger tears in your eyes. Not only had I hurt my parents, but at that moment I knew I had hurt you with my word once again." His observational skills are marvelous. And he cares so much abt hurting her…so sweet.

"so are you asking me out on a date?"

This whole bit was funny. I can just imagine AK/AR in this scene.

"I have always been slow on the uptake!" So true. I think Kripa is sure of her feelings in this part. It's like she is giving him hints like the last part where she says " That's not true Angad….you just haven't figured me out yet."

The whole part where they are skating and how he whisks her away and the moments after that were too good!!! I know others have said the same thing, this part was definitely worth the wait (I keep thinking that each time u update..)

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