It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10 - Page 48

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: johnangad

such an unexpected surprise! kripa called her mother thrice to get one permission! angad and electricity!



yeah,just goes to show the difference between the two😃

[quote=spvd]that was fantastic di...................loved it completely......................angad has become an expert in chess..................and what a deal................win win deal like karthik said..................and why do i feel angad is instigating kripa to decide on her own instead of asking her parents for each and everything?????????????????or is he making fun of her??????????????

Probably both....we should have a MCQ for this too😆


hes like making kripa to come out of that strict territory her dad has made to her..........the ice cream scene was very lovely.............angad feeling like he tasted her...........oh my..............angad and kripa's appetite and cleaniless are like poles apart...........but opposite poles certainly attract.................gayathri knows angad very well and the pic was very funny..............and those multiple choices were awesome................esp the second one physics or chemistry was the excellent one......................wow angad felt something happening inside him when he rubbed her hands in his..................ohho he said he will meet kripa at lunch for chess and here hes listening to the song with matt...................or is it actually two different times?????????????

yeah,chess club is after school😃


cont soon dear...................enjoyed a lot reading it.................in fact i enjoy it everytime and how i wish to read the whole story in one go.....................
i depend a lot on ur comments before writing next part😊

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Thanks deepa.

[quote=angadkirpa_fan]Awww the cutest part ever!!! Thanks Di!! I hate the snow!! Its been snowing so much here in Canada! URGH! LOL. Anyways wow. All of them seem like such elementary kids instead of high schoolers. LOL Aww Angad and Kripa are starting to like each other. So cute. Update soon and Please PM me.
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I can imagine u hate the snow but here in south we love it because we get it only 1-2 times a year. yeah,i purposely showed them acting as little kids just to show that despite what they want to portray, they are still kids at heart😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: annu127

bhai, ye ff bada ajeeb sa hai... reading wise, it is quite interesting and simple, but to comment to this is looking very difficult for me..😕 Im not being able to think that why this happened.. how this happened, this was right.. that was wrong... Nothing!! .. matlab isse khushi khushi padho'muskuraao.. aur phir IF ke kisi doosre page pe chale jaao... dekhein, so much days have passed and i did not have any debate with U 🤔


Good to see u back annu. Knowing u, I am sure aap debate ke liye kuch na kuch nikaal hi lengi😆

in ice cream scene, kripa seemed to be a psycho more than a neat freak.

in romantic comedy movies and stories, one has to always exaggerate things but yes, kripa is a freak in her own way😆


aur angad ka electrical shocks ka ratt'taa reminds me of chatur's.. what is machine's definition in 3 idiots.

yes, that was def in my mind when i wrote that😃

why u wrote right answers in italics in those multiple choice thing... atleast u should have given us a chance to think about which will be the correct answer.. but interesting thing is that, that the correct answer narrator angad do not know, despite of having so much time being passed ... seems that some big tragedy happened in AK life.

yeah, i wrote it in Italics for some readers who are not as vigilant as u. well, this ff soes not have the usual twists and turns but aage aage dekhiye kya hota hai

when will these flashbacks end... Im very curious to know that who is the one reading all these events.. coz angad cannot remember these things in one go....not possible! is this angad's diary that kripa is reading? but when this diary was written, coz angad cannot maintain this over the years...this one thing can not be possible..

dekhie maine kaha tha na ki aap debate ka topic zaroor nikaal lengi....u will have to wait is all I'll say😉 All I'll say is that is a different style of writing I am experimenting with...itni creative freedom tho honi chaahiye bhai

U know, the way readers make their reservations after u update the parts, one thought that comes into my mind, that u introduced some strict condition that i would reply to only first 10 commentators.. is liye sab jaldi jaldi aa ke reserved likh kar chale jaate hein.. it looks damn cute, btw😊 I would like that too because when i come to read comments, all I see everywhere is reserved😕 like when u go to a restaurant to eat but all seats are reserved aur aap bhooke ke bhooke taak te reh jaate hain😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
GREAT PART I LOVED IT
I LOVED THE PART WHEN KRIPA SAID:Yeah, because all my friends are there in the album except you." as angad said his absence made the album less than perfect for her
i wanna ask u if kripa gonna answer all his questions like what she meant by i don't care.....ect..
and when we'll know kripa's feelings&what she thinks of angad?
I WANT IT TO BE A DIALOGUE BETWEEN ANGAD&KRIPA NOT JUST ANGAD'S MONOLOGUE

Edited by angadkripa_fan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update dii!! like always...this one was really cute <3
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bheegi

I would like that too because when i come to read comments, all I see everywhere is reserved😕 like when u go to a restaurant to eat but all seats are reserved aur aap bhooke ke bhooke taak te reh jaate hain😆


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Love the metaphor

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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for pm di fantastic part di
simply rocking...i luved it hw angad explained kripa the electrocution of his hand by hers
this fic of urs is simply superb di
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NYPunjabii

Now as per my job, it is my duty to inform you Bheegi's FF are a must read. You will get blown over not once, not twice, not trice, but many many many times. I'm still recovering from the impact😉

hmmm , toh aisi baat hai.. but in Pehchaan, bheegi once said to me, wohi ghisi piti stories likh likh kar thak gayi hoon😉

now, i dont understand to whom i believe.. either chief marketing officer or the writer.😕

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Bheegi ko kya pata...you should believe me. 😆

bheegi ko hi asal pata 😉..why should i believe U.. tum bas apni naukri bachaane ke chakker mein ho😡...😆

Some of her intense stories are really awesome. For example, Tumhari Amaanat was REALLY good. That was my fav.

To Err is Human was also great as it was about mistakes and doctor's role as a God or human.

And Pehchan wasn't bad. It was actually different from all her other FF's about a married woman and a bachelor's journey on a happily ever after.

well, i have read 5-6 fanfics of her and in each of the ff, i like some of the things and also dislike few.😳

Mujhe toh Bheegi ki koi story ghisi piti nahi lagthi. Pata nahi Bheegi ne kya khake likhe woh. 😆😆....that was actually bheegi's inner voice 😍

dekho bhai…sau baaton ki aik baat.. if the writer had herself declared all her previous work… ghisa pita, 😊 then why u r saying it Must Read!!❓👎🏼...😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NYPunjabii



I think that Angad and Kripa are totally opposites and to show that Bheegi made Kripa a girl who loves cleanliness while Angad is the dirty one. Remember how Angad left his dirty socks in his gym bag and his mom was being upset about his hygiene. 😊

jannat, how old is kripa at the moment ?? 5.. 9 or 15

why r u comparing angad and kripa habits... i know they are opposite to each other.. but if any girl of age 15, eats an ice cream by putting a napkin on her lap while sitting in the parlor (not in home, ok..) then i would consider her a psycho... coz, NO girl would do this dear... and u know this..

arey bhai, she was just having a kiddie scoop of ice cream…not eating some Alphonso Mango..🤔 but having said that, I agree with what bheegi said in her reply😊

Atleast Kripa cleanliness is not that much in Turtleneck Girl. In that one, it was an idiosyncrasy on Kripa. 😆

NO, i haven't read this one so don't have any idea about this matter.

Also, opposites attract😳


Originally posted by: NYPunjabii



Kya karein, we all want the Hot Seat 😆


yeah, but u always post ur comments on new page.. aapki wo Hot Seat wahin khaali ki khaali reh jaati hai..so whats the whole point of this reserve thing😕 😕


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NYPunjabii

Toh bada bache walla cartoom le aoo😉


kahan se laaoon bhai.... meri koi dukaan thodi na hai cartoons ki 😳😆

btw, ye aapke liye...from my side 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: annu127

hmmm , toh aisi baat hai.. but in Pehchaan, bheegi once said to me, wohi ghisi piti stories likh likh kar thak gayi hoon😉

now, i dont understand to whom i believe.. either chief marketing officer or the writer.😕

😆



Bheegi ko kya pata...you should believe me. 😆

bheegi ko hi asal pata 😉..why should i believe U.. tum bas apni naukri bachaane ke chakker mein ho😡...😆

Some of her intense stories are really awesome. For example, Tumhari Amaanat was REALLY good. That was my fav.

To Err is Human was also great as it was about mistakes and doctor's role as a God or human.

And Pehchan wasn't bad. It was actually different from all her other FF's about a married woman and a bachelor's journey on a happily ever after.

well, i have read 5-6 fanfics of her and in each of the ff, i like some of the things and also dislike few.😳

Mujhe toh Bheegi ki koi story ghisi piti nahi lagthi. Pata nahi Bheegi ne kya khake likhe woh. 😆😆....that was actually bheegi's inner voice 😍

dekho bhai'sau baaton ki aik baat.. if the writer had herself declared all her previous work' ghisa pita, 😊 then why u r saying it Must Read!!❓👎🏼...😆


Hi ladies.jannat, U will def make a goog chief marketing officer one day👏Thanks for discussing my ffs...ab mujhey bhi sharam aa rahi hai aapki conversation padhkar

Annu, when I meant ghisi piti kahani, that meant, smiliar stories. I love all my ffs and try not to repeat themes (ghisa pita theme) in all stories. If i write the same kind of stuff eg. similar suhaag raat scenes etc, I get bored and I am sure the readers get bored too....that's what i meant by ghisa pita. Please I myself wouldn't call my ffs ghisapita😆...it'sjust that I don't like to repeat the themes in my ffs...hope that clarifies the issue. But nevertheless, I can imagine that Annu must be a tough customer to sell😆


Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago

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