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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
really nice update
loved the jealous Rohit
now let the truth or dare game begin!
excited to know what happens!
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Day 10:

Rohit: Agay kya hua phir? Batao Nisha..
Nisha: Phir...tum aur Sheena aur kareeb atey gaye aur Shruti tumse door jati gayi. Karan janta tha ki Shruti dukhi hai kisi baat ko lekar. Woh use kush rakhna chahata tha. Phir exams kay baad, Princi neh sabko 1 week ki holiday daydi, Goa mein.

Goa:
Nisha: Paani kitna sundar hai, chalo na Ansh, paani mein jaatein hai.
Ansh: Hmm..chalo!
Sheena: Rohit, chalo na hum walk par chalte hai..
Rohit: Lekin..group kay saat rehte hai na..
Sheena: Okayy..
Rohit: Are meh toh mazaak kar raha tha, chalo walk par!
(Shruti sees all this, and runs of crying)
Karan follows her.
Karan hold Shruti's from the shoulders and turns her to face him.
Karan: Bato Shruti, kya hua hai?
Shruti: (wipes tears) Kuch, kuch bhi nahii..
Karan: Nahii, meri Shruti ko kuch to hua hai..mein tumhe nahi puchunga ki kya baat hai, lekin phir tumhe ek smile dene pari gi..
Shruti: Kya?
(Karan begins to tickle Shruti)
The both enjoy a laugh..
Shruti: Acha..to yeh baat hai..
(Shruti starts chasing Karan around the beach)
Everyone is having a blast..but Rohit notices something different. He realizes that Shruti is nowhere to be seen.
Rohit: Sheena, kya tumhne Shruti ko kahin dekha hai?
Sheena: Woh dekho Rohit (she points), Shruti aur Karan kitna kush hai..
Rohit: Hmm..haan..lekin mujhe kuch tikh nahi lagra Shruti ko Karan kay pass chorna..uske saat itna waqt bitaana..
EPISODE ENDS ON ROHIT'S WORRIED FACE

Day 11:

At campfire at the beach-

Rohit: Shurti..tumhe Karan se door rehna chahiya
Shruti: Lekin kyun Rohit? Woh mere bachpan ka friend hai..
Rohit: Mein tumhara best friend hoon, aur uske naatey mein tumhe advice dera hoon..
Shruti: Ughh! Rohit, meray pass bahut kaam sache friends hain, aur Karan unme se ek hai.
-Shruti leaves angry from the campfire-
-Karan arrives at campfire-
Karan: Hey guys! Oh hey Rohit! Shruti kahaan hai?
Rohit: -furious- Acha mujhe laga tumhara saath hogi..
Karan: Well, later man..
-Karan leaves for the lodge-
Karan: -he talks to watchman- Jimmy kya tumhne Shruti ko dekha hai?
Jimmy: Haan sab, woh apne kamre mein gayin hai.
Karan: Thanks Jimmy!
Shruti: Yeh chabiyaan kahan gayi..!!
-Karan finds Shruti trying to look for her keys-
Karan: Are Shruti Tum kya dhoond rahi ho?
Shruti: Meri room keys nahi milri! Mein andaar kaise jaoon?
Karan: Don't worry, main ho naa, I'll find it for you.
-They start looking for her keys around the lodge site-
-Karan sits on the lodge lounge sofa-
Karan: Are yaar! Meri to baas! Ab or nahi mein chal sakta..
Shruti: -Gasping for air- Mein..mein bhi nahi aur chal sakti!
Karan: -Suddenly gets up- Idea!!! Chalo meray room mein chalte hai!
Shruti: Keys dhoond ne? Tumhare room mein?
Karan: There is something more important then keys in my room for you!
Shruti: Acha? Chalo phir!
-They both run towards his room-
Shruti: Wow! Tumhne kitna saaf rakha hai apna kamra...-whispers; Rohit se to bahut saaf..
Rohit: -snaps his fingers- Shruti? Tum ne kuch kaha?
Karan: Huh? -Back to reality- Oh sorry, woh baas aise hi, tum kuch ke rahe they na?
Karan: Yep idaar behto chair par!
-The both sit-

Meanwhile at the campfire:
Rohit: Sheena, mujhe kuch kaam hai, mein baas abhi aye
Sheena: Mein bhi saath chalon?
Rohit: Umm..nahi tum enjoy karo, mein abhi aye..
Sheena: -sad- Okay...

Back to Shruti and Karan in the room-
-Karan pulls out a thick red coloured, embroidered photo album, which reads Shruti on it.-
Shruti: -opens the album and is shocked as the album contains all her childhood memories with Karan, tears start rolling down her eyes-
Karan: Are are! Shruti, idhaar dekho -he takes her face in his hands, and wipes her tears-
Karan: Apne precious tears, please mere upar to bilkul mat waste karo!
Shruti: -laughs-
Karan: Na..tum rote hue jaada ache lagti ho!
Shruti-What! -hits Karan's arm-
Karan: Oww!!!! Shruti!! Tumhare nakhoon!!
Shruti: Ohh! I'm so sorry, jaada lagi hai kya? -She takes his arm and looks at the scar.
Karan: -his eyes lock into Shruti's eyes, but she is unaware-
Shruti: I'm so sorry..bandaid lekar aon?
Karan: Attention toh bahut achi hai, lekin mein mazaak kara tha!
Shruti: You!!! -she starts chasing him around the room-

Meanwhile-
Rohit: Jimmy, Shruti ne check in kiya hai?
Jimmy: Yes sir, ek ghanta pehle
Rohit: Thanks so much Jimmy! -he runs off to find Shruti, however he hears loud screaming coming from Karan's room. Rohit gently twists the doorknob, and notices Karan and Shruti are having a blast in the room. She doesn't even look like she missed Rohit...
Karan: Are Rohit! Idhaar ao na!
Rohit: Nahi, baas mein kuch dehne aye tha..
Karan: Oh really? Kya?
Rohit: Shruti apni keys campfire mein drop kardi thi..yehlo -he hands the keys to Shruti-
-Shruti and Rohit both share an eyelocking stare, then Karan snaps in-
Karan: Yehlo! Maine or Shruti ne yeh keys ko kahaan kahaan nahi dhoonda!
Rohit: Well, I'll leave now..
Shruti: Rohit....?
Rohit: Han?
Shruti: Aur kuch nahi tumhne kehne mujhe se?
Rohit: Nahi...mujhee lagta hai ki ab uski zaroorth nahi hai..-he leaves the room angrily-
-Shruti is also angy at Rohit for behaving so rudely to her today-
EPISODE ENDS ON THEIR SAD FACES
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
awesome part
Ab yeh Karan kaha se aya?
this is getting fun...
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
fabulas dhruv
really awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee
plz continue soon
plz plz plzzzzzzzzz
N thanx for the pm
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Wow yaar Dhruv,that was intense, but i like it loads! :D cuz its BOTH of them getting jealous! =D

Continue soon! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Thanks very much Snehaa..Sana, and DMGMJHT! =D

Lol...Karan is a new entry..bang entry...

thxx guys

Dhruv
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
hi dhruv,
nice part.
loved it
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
heyyy dhruv
That was a really nice update
So many misunderstandings n mix feelings
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Thank god you updated

Dhruv
par yeh bohat chota part tha.
But it was toooooo good.
And wow
poor
Nisha got hurt!
:( :( :(
And blood???????
Epppppp
I hate to see blood
also hate the sound of it.
And Ashu and Rohit found Nisha and Shruti??????
Wow
and they were unconsious?
Too good
you describe it all so well.
Do continue soon.
Waiting for the next part.
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Love day 8 and 9

too good.

can't wait to know about the past,

Plez Dhruv continue soon

I am getting so many weird things in my head about what will be their past,

Plez hurry

I am dieing to read the next part.
-Lina-

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