Phir Milenge - SHAADI update pg 34 (MJHT FF) - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Hey I really like ur FF!!!!
Plllzzz continue soon!!
And also add me to ur PM list too!!!!!!
THANKS!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Awwww Dhruv,
a new mjht ff.😆😆😆
thanx a lot dear.
and wow i loved ur concept.
it eas awesome.
tooooooooooo gooooooooooood.
keep updating
thanx 4 ur pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@lucario and attractiveadya- thank you veryy much guyz! Posting da next 2 updates..! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowow dhruv ur awesome writer plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
@Sana- Hey! Thxxx! Yeahh they do knoe each other...from before!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
@Fariaa- LOL! Thanks so muchhh haha...!
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Day 3:

Tarun sir: Chalo, follow me, mein tum sabko Academy ki tour karata hoon.

*In the cafeteria*

Tarun sir: Yeh, hai Academy ki canteen..not the best..but not the worst…
Yeh hai…media room…..yeh hai humaray past students ki photographs…..medals…trophies….hmm…ab chalo mein tumhein bahar leke jata hoon.
Nisha: Tarun sir..bahar kahan?
Tarun sir: Humare Academy mein ek bahut bara sa hai practice zone…located in the woods.
Shruti: Woods…janey ki..forest….?!
Rohit: Chalo sir…

*In the woods entrance*

Tarun sir: Okay, lagta hai ki mujhe ab jana parey ga, tum sab arrows ko follow karte rehna, aur dekhte dekhte tumhare tour khatam ho jaye gi, aur tum exit par ponch jao gay. Agar tum log ghum ho jao, to yeh walkie-talkie sey, mujhe call karlena.
Anshuman: Ji, sir.
Nisha: Ab hum akela tour karenge?
Anshuman : Mujhe toh koi bahut pehla hi akela kar ke chalgaya tha...
Shruti : Waja pata hai?
Rohit : Wohi pata karni ki bahut koshish ki..lekin tum chor kay agayi....
Nisha : Shahid uski peche ek karan ho..
Anshuman: Konsa karan?
Rohit: Baad..mein baat karte hai...ab chalo
Shruti : Di, chalo jaldi say tour khatam karte hain.
Nisha: Haan, Shurti chalo.

*1 hour later*

Shruti: Yeh andhera kyon ho raha hai?
Nisha: Aur arrows bhi kahin dikha nahi rey...
Rohit: Mene suna hai Anshuman ki is jungle mein bahut sare katharnak janvar hai..
*loud scream*
Shruti: Di...yeh kya tha?
Nisha: Mmm...mujhe nahi pata...
Rohit : Mein nahi tha...
Anshuman : Mein bhi nahi..
*another loud scream*
-Shruti grabs on to Rohit's arm afraid.
Shruti: Sorry..woh mein bas…
Rohit : Huh...kohi baat nahi..hota hai..

*loud thunder*

Nisha : Nahi..! Bahrish! Woh bhi abhi! Achoo!!!
Anshuman: Yeh lo meri jacket pehan lo…
Nisha: Thh..thank you..achooo!!
Rohit: Who dekho, ek chota sa ghar…wahan chalte hai.
Shruti: Umm..phone karte hai Tarun sir ko.
Rohit : Unreachable hai connection...
Anshuman : Ab kya hoga?

Precap : Secrets reveal.....

Day 4:

Nisha: Mein puri bheeg gayi hoon…
Shruti: Mein bhi…koi baat nahi..I'm sure ki Tarun sir humay dhundre hon gay abhi.
Anshuman: Lekin tab tak humey yahan per wait karna chaiye
Rohit: Haan…*10 minutes of silence*

Rohit: Hum sab itnay chup kyon behtay hai…?
Anshuman: Kya baat kare?
Rohit: Hmmm…kyon chasmish Excel college chor ke agi?
Shruti: Kya? Tum se kya..!!
Anshuman: Aur, tum bhi Nisha…kyon school chor diya? Mujhe kya galti hogai thi?
Nisha: Umm..nahi..baat wo nahi hai…
Rohit: Phir kya hai…kyon tum dono Mumbai sai move kargay?
Nisha: Parani baaton ko bhool jao Rohit, aur tum batao Sheena ab kaisi hai?
Rohit: Kya, kon?
Nisha: Sheena…yaad hai tumhari ''girl friend''.
Rohit: O…thi girlfriend..ab nahi…
Nisha: Kya matlab…tumhair to engagement thi na?
Rohit: Haan..thi lekin..engagement toot gayi.
Shruti: Kya? Kaise? Kyon? Kab?
Rohit: Well….Sheena key paraney bhi bahut sare boy friends they….aur Sheena ka asli roop mere samna agaya…who jaise dikhti hai….waise bilkul nahi…Shruti tum usay incomparable ho!
Shruti: Rohit…I'm really sorry jo bhi hua..mujhe bilkul bhi andaaza nahi tha…jis waqt tumein meri zaaroorth thi…us waqt mein tumhe chor gayi akele.
Rohit: Nahi..Shruti…ismain tumhari koi galti nahi hai…
Nisha: Well, Rohit yeh misunderstanding kabhi hoti hi nahi..agar tum sachai dekh patey..
Rohit: Kya matlab?
Nisha: Ermmm…Shruti…tum se….
Shruti: Di, nahiii!
Nisha: Bolne de Shruti…Rohit…Shruti tum se pyar karti thi..
Rohit goes in complete shock!
Anshuman: Kya? Shruti, yeh sach hai..?
Shruti: Nahi..Rohit jaisa tum soch rahe ho…
Rohit: Nahi…yeh sach hai ki tum mujhe se pyar karti ho…mujhe hamesha pata tha ki tum mujhe dost se jada pasand karti ho, lekin mein tumhare liak nahi ho Shruti…tum mujhe bahut jada deserve karti ho.
Shruti: Nahi Rohit, mein tumhare liak nahi hoon kyon ki mein ek achi dost bhi nahi ban payi..
Rohit: Lekin..ab mein samaj gya hoon sach kya hai…pehle mein pyar ko samaj nahi pata tha..par jab tum chali gay..to mujhe samaj aiye..ki mein sirf aur sirf tumse pyar karta hoon.
Shruti stares in Rohit's eyes…
Anshuman: Ab ek dusra ko maaf bhi kardo….
Nisha: Haan bhi, ab to maaf kardo…
Anshuman: Lekin mein kisi ko nahi maaf karoon ga (he looks at Nisha, while Rohit and Shruti are frozen staring at each other).

Edited by crazyACians - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
I liked the intro
and the first part
very interesting
add me to your pm list!
So Shruti, Nisha, Rohit, and Anshuman
kay, got to remember that
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
amazing story
nice parts dhrv
plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Hey dhrv(dont know ur name correctly..sorry if any mistake is thr).......really cool update.......waiting for next one....continue soon...tc.

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