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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Tapoor
wow linu. tune to kamal kardiya. nupur bhushan ko behenji banadiya. teri himmat ki to daat deni padegi. 😆Thanks but nupur ka make over to hoga na? Of corse warna mayank pasand keise karega He could love her the way she is too.😳

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#12

Originally posted by: mayur_fan
hey lina.... Hey
u dint pm me.....😭😭😭 Oh I am so sorry again
ok...comming back 2 the ff....
it was really nice dear..... Thanks
poor nups....she cant be that ugly.... She is not, just that she doesn't care about all those stuff.
it was quite rude of mayank to say that 'agar kisi ne dekh liya to problem ho jayegi' I know😡
otherwise, loved it.... Thanks
plzzz pm me the next time u upd8.... Ok
loads of love,
jigi.

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Ally

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#13

Originally posted by: fariaa70
hey linu,
at first i thought u want to dedicate it someone special. but now i found its the title of ur ff.lol😆😆
Wow 😆😆😆
wow lina nice start sweety. Thanks
really loved it.
u r awesome dear. Awww thanks
keep updating. Ok

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Ally

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#14

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
nice start lina! Thanks
loved it!
pehli mulakat mein hi nupur ko mayank s pyaar ho gaya...... I know😍
and nupur is behengi types?????
baap re bap! 😆I know
and why did mayank asked her to go? That waz mean of him
let's see........
continue soon..........Ok Mahi

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Ally

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#15

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank
Hiii....nice concept....
Pls pm when you update.....

Thanks I will pm you

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Sana

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#16

Wow, Nupur a behen ji types? Kool, do continue soon, wanto know what will happen next.

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Rabi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

great part n ff lina....
do cont soon n dont forget to pm me

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Ally

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Originally posted by: _Komal_
Wow, Nupur a behen ji types? Kool, do continue soon, wanto know what will happen next.

Thanks will add you deffi Komi

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Jassica C

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey really nice

aww

i feel so bad for nups

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Ally

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#20

Dedicated to Someone Special

Part 2

Gunjan-Come on Nupur yeh kapre pehen lo na, itni beautiful laago gi.

Nupur-No Gunjan, mein yehi kapre pehenoon gi, warna mein nahi jaaon gi.

Gunjan-Ok ok, then hurry change.

Gunjan is my bestest friend, No one is like her, she is sweet, and very nice.

Well anyways, I go and get ready, my hair in one braide, and waering my glasses.

Gunjan comes wearing jeans and a green shirt. she looks nice.

She sees me and smiles.

Gunjan-You look beautiful, par sirf ek kami hai, inn kapre ko utar do, and glasses too.

Nupur-Gunjan please-

Gunjan-Accha baba, lets go then.

Nupur-*Smiles* Ok.

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We went in the party. Gunjan was with me the whole time.

Gunjan-Nupur lets go with Sammy, and the rest.

Nupur-No tum jao.

Gunjan-No you are coming with me.

Nupur-Ok par mein ek drink le ke aati hoon.

Gunjan-Fine par hurry.

Nupur-Ok.

She goes with Samrat, Dia, Uday, and Benji, and also that same guy I always used to see jogging, in front of my balcony.

Theyw ere telling him to sing.

But he said no

and was struggling.

Dia-Come on its my b-day.

Mayank-Par-

Samrat-Plez

I turned around, thinking about what he said before to me.

I wanted to cry, but then I hear a voice.

I turn around, he was singing.

He was singing a song, but I don't know which, because I don't see movies, or hear songs.

His voice was so sweet.

It was fab

too good.

I got lost in his voice.

Pata bhi nahi chala ke kab party over hogayi,

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Gunjan drive me to my house.

She was mad at me,

because I didn't come back to her.

Well we arrive and she goes in my room.

Nupur-Gunjan suno toh-

Gunjan-Nahi, you are so mean, didn't even come back.

Nupur-Ok sorry.

Gunajn-Sorry se kuch nahi chale ga.

Nupur-Ok baba kann pakar ti hoon.

She looks at me.

Gunjan-Ok fine, I forgive you.

Nupur-Thanks, par mujhe appne friend ka toh bata. The one who was singing.

Gunjan-Kaun Mayank?

Nupur-I think, the one wearing black shirt.

Gunjan-Yeah Mayank.

Nupru-Ok, par mein soch rahi thi, why doesn't he become a singer? His voice is too good.

Gunjan-Agree, but you see usske parents passed away 4 years ago, and from then he went to collage, and did a part time job. He lives alone. And well, he doesn't have money to become famous and all.

Nupur-Ohhh I see.

Gunjan looks at the time.

Gunjan-Oh shooo, I am late, mummy mujhe chorre gi nahi, mein kal milti hoon, collage mein. Acha bye,

Nupur-Bye.

She goes, and I think about what I could do to help Mayank.