MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139 - Page 96

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Posted: 15 years ago
great promo.. looking forward to the part!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
interestin promo.😲....
can't wait 4 d next part..😉.
suspense jaldi khatam karo yaar.😊...
luv u lots.🤗..
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Posted: 15 years ago
please sajan ko todha sa romance tym de diya hota agar kuch bura hua toh mujhme padhneki himmat nahi rahegi......
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Posted: 15 years ago
woah dear its really awesome one rocking sound interesting sorry for late reply plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
good luck Daksha 4 ur exams n nice update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
kyaaa????
Dia mayank ki behen haiiii????
ek min...ho sakta hai wo RV ki behenn ho!!
but u'r not much serious....
yani ki wo mayank ki behen hai????
oh ho!! m sooo confused!!
kisi ki bhi behen ho...
kabab mein haddi to banegi hi!!
huh...btw plssssssss do cont asap...
now i cant wait!!
thanx 4 d pm... :)
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Posted: 15 years ago

sorry for double posting

Edited by khan-anam - 15 years ago
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Scene:
Delhi Airport

Flights from Singapore and Mumbai have landed''..

Passengers are coming out of the exit gate''

Mayank is coming from one side''and Dia from other side''

They both paas out without noticing each other'.. (Itni bheed mein kaun kise notice karta hai)

Dia dials a number on his cell phone''

D: Hello Bro'.I am back in India'..

B: Kaun Dia ?'..tu yahaan kaise''tujhe to India nahin aana tha na''

D: Yes bro''.but mujhe apne job contract ko poora karne ke liye aana pada''

B: Oh toh tu ab Mumbai aa jaa'..

D: Aaungi''par pehle yahaan kaam khatam kar loon'..accha ab main chalti hoon

Scene: Hotel Conference Room

Mr. Williams (W): Welcome Mr. Sehgal''

Mayank (M): Sorry'.but I am Mayank'.Mayank Sharma'.CEO of Sehgals'..

W: Oh'.I am so sorry to identify you wrongly''

M: Its Ok'..lets start the meeting''

W: After the world wide recognition we are in India to deal with the Sehgals''a great empire and we would surely like to start our business with the cooperation of Sehgals''.

Meeting is going on with signing agreements'..discussions'..etc''Finally the deal is signed''.

M: Conratulations''Mr. Williams'..at last one question''for the promotion of this product we would require a model''for advertisements and all''

W: Oh yaah Mr. Sharma'' we have our model Ms. Dia''she is from Singapore and has also worked for many of our brands''.she will be here in any moment'..

M: Oh '..thats nice'..

Then Dia enters''

W: Here she comes'..Ms. Dia''

D: Hello Sir''

M: Hello Ma'am'..

D: Hello'..so when is the schedule of shooting''

M: For the shooting and other brand designs'..we work in Mumbai'..so all things will take place there only''.if you don't mind tomorrow we can discuss all the things in our Mumbai office''

And then all of them disperse to their own jobs''.

Scene: SINGAPORE

Samrat and Gunjan are sleeping on the bed with both of them backs towards each other''..

Samrat turns towards Gunjan and sees she is sleeping''and then turns back''.

After a second Gunjan turns towards Samrat and sees he is sleeping and then turns back'..

Then again Samrat turns towards Gunjan and wants to put his hand over her waist but he hesitates and takes his hand back''.

The moment he took his hand back Gunjan again turns'..she sees that Samrat is not sleeping'..

Both of them are happy in their hearts''..

S&G (together): Aap soye nahin abhi tak''

And they burst into laughter on the coincidence''and they sit on the bed''

S: Mujhe neend nahin aa rahi thi''

G: Mujhe bhi''

S: Toh kuch karein ??

G: Kya (widening up her eyes)'..

S: Mera matlab bahar chalein walk par'' (he just said that so that Gunjan should not feel embarrassed by what he actually meant)

G (she wanted to hear something else): Itni thandi hawa chal rahi hai bahar''aur itni raat mein ?

And there was a whole silence in the room''.both of them were gazing at the walls''at the roof''. (sach mein dono ekdum unromantic hain'.)

G: Accha toh phir so jaate hain'..mujhe neend aa rahi hai''

Samrat nods his head''

And they slept again''

Next morning''Gunjan woke up early and went to bath''she came back her hairs were wet'..and her white gown was hugging her body very tightly''drops of water on her body made it more tight and skinny''

Samrat got up and saw that Gunjan was standing in front of him''..He was mesmerized by her beauty''her wet hairs were falling on her shoulders''he was driven away by her appearance'.and moved closer to her''.he holded her by her waist and turned her towards himself''.Comb from Gunjan's hand fell''she was a bit frightened''then she sees it was Samrat''.

Both of them were looking into each others eyes'''.Samrat moved closer to her''more closer and he kissed her on her forehead''Gunjan closed her eyes''.then on her nose''Gunjan was getting red''then he kissed on her lips''Gunjan wrinkled Samrat's Tshirt within her grip''she responded to the kiss'..Both of them were melting into each other'.dissolving into each others soul'..

Then they break'' both of them were looking into each others eyes''Then Gunjan tries to leave from there''Samrat stops her by holding her hand''.and turns her towards himself''. He picks her up in his arms''and makes her lie on the bed''started caressing her face'..puts her hair fringes at the back of her ears''and now they were one''.a single heart beating for two bodies''

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Its late night'..Nupur calls Mayank'..

N: Mayank'.tum kab tak aaoge''

M (he is getting down the car'.): Kyun Nupur''koi aur hai kya ghar mein''

N: Mazaak band aur itni der ho gayi'..tum kyun nahin aaye'..mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai'..

M (in the lift): Nupur'..main abhi Delhi mein hi hoon''shayad kal subah pohonchoon''.

N (very sad): Tum jaldi nahin aa sakte the''.

M: Par Nupur'..

And then the door bell rings''

Nupur is very scared that who can be at this time''.She opens the door and finds Mayank standing in front of him''.she has tears in her eyes''.and hugs him''Mayank smiles and responded to the hug''.

N: Kyun mujhe itna sataate ho''

M: Accha ab nahin sataaunga''.chalo andar chalein'..

And they get inside the flat''

M: Accha aaj dinner mein kya banaya tha''bhook lag rahi hai mujhe'..

N: abhi laati hoon''

They eat the dinner and get back to the bedroom''

Mayank sits on the bed and Nupur comes from the other side and puts her head over his shoulders'..

N: Kaisi rahi meeting'..

M: acchi thi'..deal bhi final ho gayi''ab bas Samrat wapas aa jaaye to kaam bhi shuru ho jaayega''aur tum batao''.koi aaya kya poore din mein''..

N: nahin'

M: maine kaha tha ye sab tumhaara waham hai''.anjali ki mummy bohot sochti hai''.

N (hits him over his chest): Tum bhi na Mayank'..

They both smile seeing each other and get back to sleep'''.

Next Morning''

Dia rings the door bell of a house''.

Servant opens the door''aaiye bibiji''..

Dia (making a wiered face): Bro kahaan hai''.

S: Ji wo upar apne room mein hain''.

Dia go upstairs and sees its his brother standing out there''Tall'.handsome'.6 ft'.ab toh samajh gayye hoge Mayank hai nahin''RV toh mar chukka hai'.aur 6 ft ka toh Adhiraj hi hoga''..

She goes and hugs him''

D: Bro'..maine aap ko bohot miss kiya''

A: Maine bhi'.aur tu bata'.. tu toh India nahin aana chahti'..

D: yahaan par Mr. William apna naya project shuru kar rahe hain''to mujhe aana pada''aur bhi bohot kaam hain'' Mumbai'.yahaan to mere bohot acche acche dost bhi hain'..unhein dhoondna jo hai'..

A: Kya'..

D: kuch nahin aur aap batao''kya chal raha hai'.koi ladki mili''.

They have their talks and after freshening up''

A: Ye le kuch Indian money rakh le'..tere kaam aayega''. (giving her some money from his wallet)

D: But Bro'..itno se mera kya hoga'.mujhe toh aur chahiye'..

And she snatches wallet from his hand''.She takes out the money and then she sees Nupur's photograph in his wallet''

D: Ye kaun hai Bro''

Adhiraj takes his wallet from her hands''.

A: Koi nahin''aur tujhe office nahin jaana'..

Thats it for now........saare suspense khul chuke hain aap sab ab mujhe joote maar sakte hain......MayUr scene kam the.......but that was demanded by story.....next update would have good MayUr scenes.......
SaJan ke deewano ab toh khush ho jaao.....kyunki iss baar shayad.......I know you know.... 😆 😉
Ab chalne ki ijaazat chaahungi......agli update kab hogi mujhe nahin pata......mere exams shuru hone waale hain.......
aur last but not the least.........Please comment karo......Please......aapke comments se iss kahani ka uddhaar hoga.......
Ab bas comment kardo........

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Edited by .Daksha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
i am the first one to comment!

i am so happy for that! ab main apna ff baad mein update karoongi.

who is dia's brother? am i missing something?

ohk! so i missed the promo!

but now coming to the promo- it was awesome! and my pleasure.......i would love to help my sweet friend! and i love the twist! so Dia is the sister of? mayank ho nahi sakta! RV mar chuka hai! then who?

now part-

yeh gunjan aur samrat itne zyada unromantic hain!

poor sam! poor gun!

ek doosre ko samajhte hi nahi hain!

hey!

but yeh mayur ff bhi hone chahiye!

tu bhi aur main bhi..........hum dono hi mayurians hain!

yeh kya?????

abhi touch mein bhi problem thi!

aur abhi yeh log ek ho gaye?

daksha! u give me surprise by this!

awesome yaar!

mayank kitna sweet hai!

i like him soooooo much....

nice yaar!

oh adhiraj!

use toh main bhool hi gayi thi!

nice update!

seriously! i wanna kill u!

mayur ke scenes toh the hi nahi!

but i loved sajan scenes.....

unki gaadi aage toh badhi!

do continue soon

love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
arey suspense poori tarah thodi na khul chuka hai daksha....
abhi toh yeh Adhiraaj ka bhi raaz khulna baaki hai.....😉
both Mayur & Sajan parts were cute!😳
bechara Samrat, jisse door bhaag raha tha, woh direct uski hi company mein tapak gayi!😆
Edited by bhavana92 - 15 years ago

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