{...Beyond the limits...} - AR [Part27 - page 137]

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

hey really cute
i loved the part
thanks for the pm
really very nice

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

finally a nd r together.. Cn't wait 4 the next update.. Conti. Soon

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krazyboutkaran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

wow!!!!wow!wow!wooooow!!

wat a part..............luvd every bit of it...!!

cnt w8 2 read more!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

hey nice updates u got a gud ff going x

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Jia

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi Huda!!!

nice part

sorry for da late comment!!

was a bit busy!!!!

thanx for da PM'z dear!!!!

waiting for da next update!!!

lots of love

JIA!!!!!!!❤️

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suzanne

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Posted: 15 years ago

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😊A short note and a Promo
Hello, all of yous, well firstly i wanna thank you all for them comments you posted, they were amazing, believe me these little words of appreciation mean a lot to me, the support you all are showing is just awesome....i hope you all will continue reading my ff, and oh ya, if anybody wants a pm, you can just say that in your comment, well i pm everyone, but if someday i forget to pm anybody, just say that in your comment, hehe...ok, heres the promo, but bare with it, its a short one, infact shorter than the last time, k i should quit the shit i am talking and give you the promo...lol

Promo:
'hmm tu yeh hai hamara shezada,

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u just shut up you fat cow, ill see you when you start eating',

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ahh, i wouldnt mind
having some fun with her, she is so hot and sexy, man those legs,

ok short innit..??
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Edited by huda14 - 15 years ago

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keya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

hi huda

you had pmed me about this ff n i just read it ..........its nice n intersting.update soon

plzz keep pming me

luv
kj

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

hey
nice one
waiting for the actual update
thanks for the pm

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suzanne

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

here is the 6th part...have fun:

PART 6

'areee billly, kaisa hai dost', roy and bindi came towards their entrance, where all of them were standing hugging billy, anny and bi, armaan who was extremely tired, just sat on the nearby couch and sighed, 'yeh raha armaan', billy pointed towards armaan, 'hmm tu yeh hai hamara shezada, kitni taaarifein ki nikki ne iske baare mein', roy came over to armaan and hugged him, while he hugged him too, he knew he had to help him in every thing now, so decided to bond with him a bit,'yup uncle i am that great mallik nikki kept talkin about', armaan joked, and they all smiled, 'ye sab mere dost hai papa', nikki came in with ridhimma, helping anji and muski with their bags, 'oh acha bhai..ab tum sab jaldi se fresh hojao uske baad hum dinner karte hain', roy announced, showing all of them their rooms, 'ridzy tu bhi aaaj yahin rukegi', nikki ordered and went up with anji and muski, who giggled at how nikki ordered her.. while ridhimma smiled at her, aa ridzi she is getting married, just do as she says, she is the bride, ridhimma thought, 'riddhu beta, tu bhi yahin rehja, tere dost aaye hai to...kahan apne ghar
jaayegi, maine shanky ko bata diya hai, he doesnt mind, ab chal tu bhi jaa, kabse help karrahi hai nikki ki', roy carressed her head, he treated her as his own daughter, he just adored this little child so much, she is a sweetheart he thought, 'ji uncle...main abi aayi', ridhimma went upstairs too, following the three other girls...

'Ridzi, plzzz armaan ko bula le, modi aata hi hoga', nikki pleaded, 'tu na kabse dekh rahi hun order maarahi hai', ridzy kept her hands on her waist and looked at her angrily, 'aree wo to request thi...or ye bhi, jaa na', nikki requested, muski who was looking at rahul goggling up his food, asked him slowly, 'do you realise that you are eating like a monkey here, tell me does your mom not give you food at home', muskaan pointed her fork at him, he shot his head up, 'u just shut up you fat cow, ill see you when you start eating', he clenched his teeth, why the hell does she care...why cant she mind her own business, he was tired right now and didnt have any strength to listen to her non stop lecture on how to eat or how to live in this world, muskaan made a face and went back to eating her food, ridhimma looked at them two, and i thought they were in a relationship, when she first saw them at the airport, she thought they were together, she smirked and went upstairs to call the reason for her uneasiness...

'um..arm..armaan..everyone's waiting for you downstairs', she knocked his door, but having no answer, decided to wait, couple of minutes passed and she was still standing there, but now she was getting a bit restless, why isnt he opening the door, ridzy wondered, ok i am gonna open the door now, no ridzi what if he is changing or something, yeah but then he should have said something, even a simple 'coming', she battled within herself, she wanted to open the door, but was a bit shy, a little pink glow crept upon her cheeks, they started getting warm, she knew 'that' was happening again, nahi ridzy ab mein ise aane nahi doongi, chahe kuch bhi jojaye', ridhimma counted to 5, ok thats it, she moaned and opened the door..there stood armaan wearing that extra large shalwar kameez, he looked so cute, his hair all messed up, he was standing infront of the mirror, trying to adjust those big long sleeves, with a highly frustrated expression on his face, 'ahhh thanks ridhimma, thanks a lot, plz could you sort this out', he came over to her, her heartbeat taking a quick pace again, she came near him and started helping him, 'um...per..why are you wearing this, its not even your size', she asked stumbling in between, her fingers touching his wrist, chills running down her spine, 'ehh..thatz coz nikki asked me to wear this, because whatever i brought from there hasnt got the material which suits this freakin weather, well thats what she was saying..i dnt knw', armaan sighed 'per..i was knocking on the door continously', ridhimma looked at him narrowing her eyes a little bit, showing fake anger, girl i know, you are still feeling those goosebumps no matter how much you try to get rid of them..ridhimma thought, armaan noticed her hesitation, her uneasiness, why the hell does her body gets numb, when she touches me, ahh, i wouldnt mind having some fun with her, she is so hot and sexy, man those legs, she is going to kill me someday, armaan started checking her out, she was wearing her baby pink sleeveless satin night dress, which landed just above her knees, her hair all tied in a messy bun, she was looking gorgoeus, armaan concluded, 'doneeee', she took a step backwards, and looked at him, 'hmm..all sorted, comeon now, they all are waiting for us', ridhimma was heading towards the door but armaan caught hold of her hand, she started breathing heavily, 'thanks ridhimma', he came upto her and kissed her cheeks as a friendly gesture, holding her hand and taking her downstairs with him, while she blushed beetroot red, touching her cheeks, where he placed his lips, she smiled slightly...

'kitni der lagadi ridzy..aur ye modi abi tak nahi aaya', nikki moaned, 'tumne bulaaya aur hum chale aaye', abhi came in running towards her, his hands in air on each side, 'oohhoo, mr. armaan tu to pehle se bhi hot hogaya hai', armaan and abhi hugged and hi fived each other, billy patted his back, while ananya kept her hand on his cheek, smiling at him, he stayed in their house, during his trip to america, the rest, came up to him and hugged him, they all became extremely good friends during that time, just loved them all to bits, he sighed, ridhimma came upto him giving him a side hug with a plate, 'lets dig in, abhi', ridhimma said smiling at him, handing the plate to him, nikki looked at all of them in awe..she is just loving this time of her life, with family, friends and most importantly abhi, 'acha ab chalo bi tum sab kiya uth gaye, abi to bohut kuch discuss karna hai', bindi ordered them to sit, 'nahi bindi, aaj nahi, aaj inhe sone do, dekho is bichaare ko, khana bhi aankhein band karke kha raha hai', roy said pointing at armaan, while the rest smiled at him, they all were tired and it was best to sleep now, ridhimma looked at him, the poor guy had his head down, with those extra large sleeves, going everywhere, she came up to him, sitting beside him whispered in his ear, 'are you ok',she asked concerned, 'ehh yea..m grand', he stood up, giving her a side hug, went away bidding goodnight to everyone, she didnt know why is she being so caring towards him,taking care of him, i am taking care of all of them, her mind and heart began the battling session once again...

All were off to sleep, and it was just her, nikki and abhi now, sitting in the lounge, laughing over some joke nikki cracked, nikki was sitting in his arms, making it a bit obvious to ridhimma that they wanted to spend some time alone, ridhimma understanding this got up, 'tu chipak kyun rahi hai usse seedha seedha bolna ke main jaaon yahan se', ridhimma teased her, while abhi and nikki both gave a shy smile to her, but recovering soon abhi added, 'tu jaanti hai phir bhi bol rahi hai', abhi grinned, ridhimma slapped him on his arm, and went away after hugging nikki, who cuddled in abhi's arms.....

Ridhimma infromed her mom about the days events, who couldnt wait for the next day to arrive, she wanted to meet ananya and her family now, ridhimma couldnt stop talking about all of them, mentioning armaan every now and then, padma noticed; isse kiya hogaya hai, she thought, baar baar is bache ka naam le rahi hai, padma wondered, silently sensing something different in ridhimma's behaviour...

Ridhimma tossed and turned in her bed, she couldnt sleep, aghh ab mujhe kiya hogaya hai, neend kyun nahi aarahi, ridhimma groaned, and finally got up, sab kuch us armaan ki wajah se hua hai, she bit her nails in confusion, kal jaldi uthna hai, nikki ke saath boutique jaane hai, mein kiya karun, ye armaan bhi na, ridhimma just be friends with that hot guy, nothing more, nothing less, she leaned back on the bed, thinking about armaan, his dimples, his grin, his utterly handsome looks, his attitude towards his friends, his parents, the way he looked at them, with pride in his eyes, he loves them, she thought and drifted off to her dreamland with a smile on her face...

ok guyz, this was part 6, the story is going ahead now, lol..dont forget to comment / criticise....thanks for all your love and support...!!

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

reserved...

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😳
hayeeee.....Mr.Armaan, ek oye hoyee aur apni woh killer wink dedo, wo to tumhare bahon me aajayegi!!! 😆
As usual, my AN were shoooooo cute....all lovey-dovey!!!! 😳
So here's a big huggie from me......

🤗

On a serious note, this isnt the AR we usually see....where Ridzi is all latoo for Armaan without knowing it....
Muskaan-Rahul are the same though....pata nahin ye dono saath me kaise re sakte hain!

Is Atul not in here??? 😕

Update soon!!!!!
YAY!!! was i da 1st one to comment??? 🥳
Lotsa luv,
Sheena 😃

Edited by AbhiNikiLuver - 15 years ago