FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago
wowow tht was cool and sad part
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey lovely update

Had so much fun reading it

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 15 years ago

part 18

after sometime doctor came out from the ICU.everyone gathered him and mayank asked-'doc...doctor voh thik...toh hain na. doctor-'i am sorry....'
just then the nurse inturpted him by saying-'doctor patient ki heart beat phir seh chalne lagi hai... jaldi aaeye'
the doctor hurriedly went inside the ICU where mayank's heart beat was stopped and he was not responding. after half an hour doctor came and said-'maine asa chamatkar apni lifetime mein aajtak nahi dekha hai'
samrat-'matlab'
doctor-'mera matlab hai ki the patient was already dead but suddenly unki heart beat phir seh chalne lagi and now she is out of danger.'
just then the nurse came and said 'patient kisi mayank ka naam le rahi hain...yaha peh mayank kaun hain'
mayank-'jee...main'
nurse-'please aap ander aaye patient aapka he naam le rahi hain'
then mayank slowly went inside and saw nupur lying on the bed with her eyes close.
mayank slowly holds nupur's hand and kisses on her forehead and nupur opens her eyes.
mayank-'nupur agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh main toh.....'
just then nupur placed her hand on his lips and says-'asa kabhi mat kehna....tum jante ho jab main mar chuki thi tab mujhe bhagwan dikhe aur unhone mujhse kaha ki mujhe tumahre liye jeena hoga...apne mayank ke liye jeena hoga aur tab he main vapis zindagi mein aa paayi...tum jaante ho agar main aaj zinda hoon toh voh sirf tumahre liye...tum mere liye bhagwan ho...'
mayank-'nupur ab aur kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai...tum abhi kamzor ho isliye aaram karo...main abhi aata hoon tab tak tum gunjan aur suhaani seh millo'
nupur-'thike mayank'
and he went outside where he saw samrat talking with the doctor so he comes to him and samrat says to him-'bhai...doctor keh rahe ki hum aaj he nupur ko ghar leh jaa sakte hain magar uska poore tarah seh khyaal rakhna padega'
mayank-'doctor aap chinta naa kare main nupur ka aache seh khyaal rakhoonga'
then they all took nupur back to the acadamy and all of them welcomed her.
mayank-'main nupur ko kamre mein le jata hoon'
and he took nupur in his arms and went to her room.
gunjan to samrat-'mayank nupur seh kitna pyaar karte hain hena'
samrat-'haan gunjan...tum jaanti ho bhai ko pyaar naam ka matlab he nahi pata tha infact voh toh har ladki seh door rehte the magar jabse nupur unki zindagi mein aayi hain usne bhai ki zindagi badal de hain maine apne bhai ko kabhi itna khush nahi dekha hain'
gunjan-'haan samrat meri dost nupur bhi hamesha apne sapno keh rajkumar keh baare mein kehti rehti thi lekin aaj lagta hain ki use aapna sapno ka rajkumar mil gaya hain'
samrat-'gunjan tumne toh aaj subhe seh kuch nahi khaya hain isliye chalo jaldi seh khana khane chalo'
gunjan-'tumne bhi toh nahi khaya isliye tum bhi chalo saat mein khana kha lenge'
and they both went to gunjan's room.
gunjan-'samrat tum yaha baitho main nupur aur mayank aur hum dono keh liye khana mangvaakar laati hoon.'
samrat-'thike par jaldi ana'
gunjan-'hmmm'
and she went out of the room.
samrat was getting bored so he started roaming here and there and suddenly he heard of breaking noise at window so he went out in the balcony and saw here and there but found no one then he came inside and found a stone rolled with a note lying in the floor.
so he opened it and it states that-'lagta hain tum logo ko apne zindagi seh jyaada apne career ki padi hain isliye toh yaha seh jaate hain nahi ho bechaare...tumahri dost nupur ki kismat achi thi jo bach gayi varna voh bhi....lekin ab bhi vaqt hain bhaag jaao varna yaha peh jagah banaane pade gi laasho ki....'
samrat gets very angry and frustated so he went out of the room to give this note to the police.
after sometime gunjan came inside but found samart nowhere so she gets a little tensed and she calls him but his mobile was switched off.
after sometime samrat came and gunjan hugged him tightly and said-'kaha chale gaye the tum haan! apna phone bhi switch karke rakha tha...mujhe pareshan karne mein maza aata hain kya?'
then samrat cupped her face and touches her head with his head and says-'tum mere bina 2 minute bhi itana pareshan ho jaati ho mujhe nahi pata tha...i am sorry agli baar batakar jaonga okey'
gunjan-'thike chalo ab khalo'
gunjan was eating but samrat was still thinking something so gunjan firmly kept her hand at his shoulder and said-'tum pareshan ho na'
samrat-'nahi gunjan main...main pareshan kaha hoon'
gunjan-'jhoot mat bolo mujhe sab pata hai'
samrat-'haan thoda sa hoon...'
gunjan-'acha thike abhi pareshan mat ho aur khana khalo'
they both smiled at each other
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a knock came at nupur's room so mayank opened it.
a delivery boy has came to deliver the food.
mayank-'thankyou'
and he closes the door
mayank-'nupur khana kha lo'
nupur-'mera mann nahi hain'
mayank-'asa kaise nahi hain dekho main bhi toh khaonga na isliye tum bhi khalo chalo'
he holds nupur to get up and both chopps food at each mouth.
nupur-'pani!'
mayank gives her a glass of water and helps her to drink it.
nupur-'mayank main kuch din practice nahi kar paongi'
mayank-'toh main bhi nahi karonga'
nupur-'nahi mayank tum mere liye practice kyon nahi karoge'
mayank teasingly-'kyoki mere paas koi partner nahi hogi aur waise bhi main itne short time keh liye ek aur nupur kaha seh laonga?'
nupur pretending to be annoyed-'kyaaaa?'
and they both started laughing.
to be continued................................................................
i hope u all liked it.comments/critisize r required.i shall be waiting for it.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeee update...
fantastic.. mindblowing..
luved it..
pllzzzzzzzz continue soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

luv
jyotika
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey mind blowing part

Really enjoyed it

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
mayur are fab
thank gog nupur's saved
cont soon
thx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: t-mayur-sajan-j

awesome update
mayur are fab
thank gog nupur's saved
cont soon
thx for the pm

thanks a lot t-mayur-sajan-j
455394 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update dear
Thank God Nupur is ok
loved mayank taking care of Nupur
do continue soon
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update.I hope they catch the killer soon.Suspence is killing us.Plz update soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey arushi loved d mystery that u have got going here so wonderfully 👏 👏 👏

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