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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Mahak when u gonna to upate it.<br>i m eagerly waiting 4 ur update<br>




i am updating it.......

ho gaya bas post karna hai.........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Same here Mahak

Tera tomorrow kab aayega



behen aa gaya........

wait a minute........

bas post kar rahi hoon..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
ohk guys......

sorry faria and nidzy and aditi and sonal and sorry zoah and sorry to everyone who was waiting.....i did took a lot of time.....but it was because i was busy writing a new year one shot for you......which i will post after this gets over.....and besides i was thinking about my other ffs too.....but SORRY to everyone.....





part 2 out of 3

click here for part 1


Nupur's POV-

Kyun mayank kyun? Pata hai maine maa bauji ko jab maine mere rishte ki baat kisi aur se karte huye suna toh main kitni toot gayi thi? Main poori tarah se ghabra gayi thi....i felt like a thousand thorns piercing my heart....jaise ki koi mujhe jalaane ki koshish kar raha ho....jaise ki mei saansen ko mujhse chen dena chahta ho.....jaise koi mere seene mein khanjar bhok dena chahta ho...aur sabse pehle main tumhare paas hi aayi thi....





Flashback-

I was standing near the staircase....ready to go to the college.....when I heard something which shattered me...something that I hoped that isn't true...i heard bauji talking to ma....

Bauji- are suno...main kuch soch raha tha.

Ma- kya?

Bauji- maine hamari Nupur ke bare mein kuch socha hai.

Ma- kya socha hai aapne?

Bauji- woh main soch raha tha ki Nupur ki ab padhai khatam hone hi waali hai....uska college khatam to ho hi chukka hai....aur phir ab woh badi ho gayi hai..to kyun na ek acha sa ladka dekhkar uski shaadi kar di jaaye?

Ma- par....nupur abhi nasamajh hai....woh itni badi zimmadari ke liye tyaar hai kya?

Bauji- nahi...nupur ab badi ho chuki hai...ab woh is zimmedari ko uthaane ke kabil hai.

Ma- theek hai....phir uske liye ek acha ladka bhi toh dhoondhna padega.

Bauji- uski chinta tum mat karo....mere zehen main ek bahut hi nek ladka hai hamari Nupur ke liye...

I was shattered on hearing that.....

Ma- kaun hai woh?
Bauji- woh uska naam pooab hai.....bahut hi nek ladka hai....ekdum parivarik aur sanskari....upar se woh apne pita ka business bhi sambhalta hai....isse nek aur khaandani ladka hame kabhi nahi mil sakta hai.

Ma- are waah! To phir Nupur ke rishte ki baat usse kariye na.

Bauji- wahi toh main bhi soch raha hoon....main aaj hi rishte ki baat karta hoon....

I could hear nothing more.....i just knew one thing....it was terrible.....i had to go from there....i couldn't stand it any longer.....

Tears welled up her eyes....she was broken...she was devastated.....so she ran away from there....

Flashback ends.



Nupur's POV-

Kyun mayank? Tumhare liye to main tumhari zindagi thi na? to phir kyun? Kyun tumne aisa kiya mere saath? Kyun mujhe is daur par laakar chod diya? Kyun tumhare liye mujhse zyada tumhara career important ho gaya? Kyun? Kyun tumne us din mujhe mana kar diya? Kyun meri zindagi barbaad kar di? Kyun? Kash maine tumse kabhi bhi pyaar hi nai kiya hota....i wish ki tum meri zindagi mein kabhi bhi na aate....





Flashback-

She was running.....running to stop the storm from coming into her life......she was running to go and hide herself in his arms....from this cruel reality....

She just ran....and then she saw him standing at some distance.....she doubled her pace and went in his arms....she rested her hands on his back and her face on his chest......and she started sobbing....

He took her in his arms and consoled her....he caressed her back...and was worried about her sudden breakdown....

Mayank- kya hua princess?

Nupur- mayank...mayank....woh bauji....woh ma aur bauji meri....

She wasn't able to speak up.....her voice was mixed with tension....worry...fear of loosing something....and cries....

Seeing her in this condition.....even mayank now got tensed....

Mayank- rona band karo....aur batao ki kya hua?

Nupur- mayank...ma aur bauji meri shaadi kara dena chahte hain....

And she hid he face in his chest....the only place which could comfort her....comfort her from the rest of this world.....but mayank even lost all hopes......what will he do now?

Mayank- Nupur tum chinta mat karo....hum abhi tumhare parents se baat karenge....they will understand us.....

Nupur- mayank par.....

Mayank- Nupur is waqt kuch bhi sochne ka waqt nahi hai....tumhe mujhpar bharosa haina?

Nupur- haan mayank.

And then they went to Nupur's house.

Flashback ends.




Nupur's POV-

Mayank us din jo tumne kiya use main kabhi bhi nahi bhool sakti hoon....kabhi nahi.....us din tumne na sirf mera bharosa toda balki pyaar mein se mera vishwaas bhi utha diya.... kyun kiya tumne mere saath aisa mayank? Kyun?




Flashback-

They had together gone to Nupur's house.....both being afraid....

Mayank- uncle namaste.

Bauji- namaste beta.....bolo kya baat hai?

Mayank- uncle woh baat yeh thi ki main aur Nupur ek doosre se pyaar karte hain.

Nupur's father was very open minded.....he was the modern father....for who....the happiness of his daughters was more important than anything else....

Bauji- to beta tumne yeh baat pehle kyun nahi batai?

Nupur- bauji main bahut darr gayi thi.

Bauji- chalo koi baat nahi hai...ab tum dono ki jaldi se shaadi kara dete hain.....

Nupur was very happy....she won the entire world....her happiness knew no bounds....but something again shook her appiness.....

Mayank- uncle shaadi?

Bauji- kyun beta? Tumhe Nupur se shaadi nahi karni hai kya?

Mayank- uncle karni toh hai....par abhi itni jaldi kya hai? I mean...abhi main apna sapna poora karna chahta hoon.....ek writer banna chahta hoon......

Bauji- toh beta woh to tum shaadi ke baad bhi kar sakte ho na?

Mayank- nahi uncle....main abhi is bojh ko dhone ke liye tyaar nahi hoon......

Nupur- Mayank....tumhe shaadi bojh lagti hai?

Mayank- dekho Nupur....woh baat nahi hai....par main pehle apna sapna sakaar karna chahta hoon...ek naam kamana chahta hoon....phir hum shaadi ke bare mein sochenge.

Nupur- sochenge? Matlab?

Mayank- dekho Nupur....mujhe nahi pata hai ki ismein kitne saal lagenge...aur phir agar utne saalon baad bhi hamara pyaar kayam raha toh hum shaadi kar lenge....

Nupur- tumhara matlab kya hai Mr. Mayank Sharma? Tumhe kya lagta hai? Maine tumse pyaar nahi kiya hai kya? tumhe lagta hai ki hamara rishta hona mushkil hai...aur main tumhara intezaar karti rahon?

Mayank- dekho...hum log live-in relationship karte hain....agar hum ek doosre ko she paaye toh hum log shaadi kar lenge...varna hum dono alag ho jaayenge...

Nupur just felt someone crushing her dreams.....she felt her world spinning....she knew only one thing...mayank is fake...she now hated Mayank.....

She slapped him hard on his face....but the pain was somewhere embedded in her heart too.....

He went away from there leaving behind a girl with broken dreams...

Flashback ends.





Nupur's POV-

Us din Mayank tum mujhe yun chod kar chale gaye.....aur tumne ek baar bhi mujhse maafi nahi maangi....tumhara career tumhare liye humse bhi zyada ho gaya tha....aur tumhare jaane ke baad I got married to poorab.....




what? nupur got married to poorab? now what will mayank do? will they meet? will they be together? how?

to know this.......

do read the last part of this three part story........

do comment.......

silent readers.....it hurts when u dont get the comments when u work so hard.....

thanks a lot to all the people who comment and make my day beautiful and even appreciate my work......

thanks a ton!

do comment.......

and zoah i think i did keep up to ur expectations.......sorry this is not what u have said.....but i wanted to make the story look more wonderful......

love,
Mahak
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Posted: 15 years ago
What -Mayank did such a worst thing.
i cant believe it.
its not our mayank.
ok he has the right to build up his carrier.
but the way he explained it to nups was totally bakwas.
it was a lame excuse .
i totally hate that mayank.
if it was the main reason then i think nups should not forgive mayank anyway
accha hua ki wo purob k sath shadi karli.
Mahak dear its just my point of view.
Har ladki ka apna ek self respect hota hai, or usko kisi bhi tarase sacrifice nahi karna chaiye.
Actually mayank nupur ko deserve hi nehi karta.
i hate this type of selfish,stupid, dirty minded guy.
hope everything will go in favor of nupur.
Awesome part dear. thanx to Zoah again 4 giving u such a nice concept
plz mahi i m now more curious to know the ending.
plz try to update soon.




Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Only one word :- MARVELLOUS......👏

You remember naa, last update kaisa hona chahiye?????????????
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome hun
It was exactly the way I wanted it!
Keep it up
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

awesome hun

It was exactly the way I wanted it!


Keep it up


x x





thank god yeh vaise hi aaya!

actually i wanted to talk to u on this matter only par time nahi mila........

to apne mann se likh diya.........

thanks god tujhe pasand aaya!

thanks a ton!
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part
poor nupur
i hope everything will become as normal
but what she married poorab?why?
waiting for next part
do cont soon
and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanofmjht

nice part
poor nupur
i hope everything will become as normal
but what she married poorab?why?
waiting for next part
do cont soon
and thanks for pm





thanks.......

yup poor nupur.........

let's see if everything gets normal or not........

she maried poorab becoz her parents did that......and mayank had closed all the gates for himself......

i will update soon.......

thanks............
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Posted: 15 years ago

nice part dear!

continue soon 😊

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