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surbhi tyagi

@EtherealRati

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Posted: 15 years ago

#121

awesome one shot dear . liked it to the core . great work 👏

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#122

very interesting

Infact its true, the first time nothing really happens, usually LOL

and it made perfect sense!

well written :D

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: shruti.nil
awesum work mahak...i loved it!!

thanks.....

i am glad that u loved it.........

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

kya???????

love story????

aur woh bhi inki???????

ohk.....

i will..........if i continue it..........

isme itna shocked hone ki kya baat hai??? mayank nupur hai to love story bhi to hogi hi na.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, aakhir mayur ko ek din milna hi hai,,,,,,,,,,, to kya tum mayur ko alag alag rakhne ka soch rahi thi.......... dont even dare to separtate them............

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: surbhi123
awesome one shot dear . liked it to the core . great work 👏

thanks......

tere yeh smileys bahut hi pleasing hain.........

thanks.....

i am happy that tujhe yeh bahut pasand aaya.......

i thought it was boring.........

thanks........

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Killer

@Hello_01

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#126

i read all parts soory for not commenting before yaar...

as now i got freed from studies tou i m here to comment..

Love it... each and everything was great i loved it alot... beautifully written good work

thanks for the pm

love you

DO inform me again when u update....

maha

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

isme itna shocked hone ki kya baat hai??? mayank nupur hai to love story bhi to hogi hi na.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, aakhir mayur ko ek din milna hi hai,,,,,,,,,,, to kya tum mayur ko alag alag rakhne ka soch rahi thi.......... dont even dare to separtate them............

woh main shocked thi....

mujhe laga ki yeh kahani to yahin par khatam ho gayi,........

aaj pata chala ki yeh to shuru huyi hai......

haan baba.....

mayur ko to ek din milna hi hai......

inhe kaun alag karega?

not me atleast.....

main aur mayur ko alag?

isse pehle main mar na jaaon!

main yeh soch rahi thi ki kya ise bhi ek love story banna chahiye?????

tu bata........

i thought not to make one........

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: ArTiToTheEnd
I just loved it.....................really especially the last part when Mayank & Nupur shake hands,..................really lovely meeting.................

Do..............Con................Sooooooooooooon............how they will fall in love with each other................

Thanks for pm me.............

thanks.......

mujhe bhi woh last part zyada pasand aaya.....

thanks......

lovely meeting!

i am happy that u thought it to be a lovely meeting........

ohk.....

now as sooo many people r wanting me to continue it........

i am gonna continue it.......

thanks.......

hope so that they fall in love......

but it can never happen too.......

thanks.........

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

woh main shocked thi....

mujhe laga ki yeh kahani to yahin par khatam ho gayi,........

aaj pata chala ki yeh to shuru huyi hai......

haan baba.....

mayur ko to ek din milna hi hai......

inhe kaun alag karega?

not me atleast.....

main aur mayur ko alag?

isse pehle main mar na jaaon!

main yeh soch rahi thi ki kya ise bhi ek love story banna chahiye?????

tu bata........

yupp,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wo kehte hai na love is in the air......... aur tu to itni acchi acchi stories banaati hai inki bhi banaade........ aur kuch nahi to dono mayank aur nupur khush ho jaayenge iss ff ke........... inki boring si life mein bada sa twist leaa....... aur jo twists laaye usi ko to writer kehte hai.......... wah wah,,,,,,,,

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

yupp,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wo kehte hai na love is in the air......... aur tu to itni acchi acchi stories banaati hai inki bhi banaade........ aur kuch nahi to dono mayank aur nupur khush ho jaayenge iss ff ke........... inki boring si life mein bada sa twist leaa....... aur jo twists laaye usi ko to writer kehte hai.......... wah wah,,,,,,,,

haan i know that love is in air.....

thanks.......

i will definetly try to make a love story out of them too......

mayur ko ek karna hai na?

inki boring life to hai.......

par dekhna yeh hai ki inki life mein hota kya hai......

r they meant to be together or not?

especially when u will know abt the next part..........

theek hai

agar yeh baat hai to ek twist hoga.......

ab tum bhi dekho ki yeh ek love story banti hai ya nahi......

thanks.........

lekin haan this will be a short story........

so that log bore na ho jaayen...........

dekho ki ab main ek writer ban paati hoon ya nahi..........