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KASH_rocks

@KASH_rocks

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

hey,
that was a gr8 start......intense yes it does sound so......lets c what u have in store for us in d next part..
update soon
will b waiting for d next part...

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

superbly written kiran... look forward to the next part.. please do continue!

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Hey Kiran. Intro is cool. So there's Armaan and Riddhima. Armaan's friends Abhi and Damini (assuming) and Riddhima's friends Nikki and Mike.

Though the initial bit was a bit confusing but then what are you for??? Surely u would unfold it.

Please add me to your PM list if u plan one.

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Priya

@devilshangel

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Hmmm nice concept dear. Though i havent read any of ur ff but after reading this i think i have to start reading it.

Neways pm me whenever u post the next part.

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: hinanaziri
and luckily i even know the meaning :P

aahhahha am on hold with an indian hp cust serv guy (sucha pain) and am laughinnn....aaahhh! (faking an accent and keeps forgetting to keep a grip on it,,,,and dude he pron'ced illinois as illin-oes...ahhah!)

Didcha read my comment yet? you didn't "LIKE" it so am not sure...:P :P

(ps: i am spamming cause i luv my siggy) (my std dialogue on all)

Edited by missypatel - 15 years ago

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Sana Mustafa Malik

@sana.samir

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Heyy,

I have a confession! I've always been a silent reader of your FFs, and the reason being I never had the time to actually comment.. Silly as it sounds butnits true. However, this time I couldn't help myself, maybe because I'm confused 🤣 had to read it a few times 🤣 I know I know, I sound stupid.. Correction, I am stupid!

Well, as usual without a doubt an amazing start and so glad you've started a new FF!

Will be looking forward to read the next update!
All the best!

Love Sana

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

wow im sooo happy your writing another one kiran! i just loved the hues, and am currently going through dmg 5 years...i totally adore your work!
the intro has me very intrigued and curious! i already feel myself getting addicted! it seems like its gonna be a serious and intense one! and those are my favorite kind :D
so just to make sure i have this right, the first scene was riddhimas present situation, and everything else that followed was the past. can i assume that armaan is the one that left riddhima? and riddhima is the one that was never "his"?
i really loved the intro kiran, really deep and descriptive, really well written! its got me really excited for this! please update soon!

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mehaka

@mehaka

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

hey kiran..

mehaka from uk.. u do rock dear.. i am very fond of reading but only few things can hold me and your write ups is the one . I literally wait for posts and it makes my day when I read one.. good luck dear.. u have long way to go head..