Attracted to You !?!? RM & AR *Part 13, Page 38*

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Posted: 15 years ago

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word. 🤣

omg, totally! i can imagine us in like some dramatic serial, going nahiiii!! , throwing our hand on our fohead with the camera panning that scene like 5 times with the dramatic music! 🤣

lolz, i know, and i needed to justify my standing so im proving my point, lolz i love this stuff, i do it in mock trial all the time!! =)

i know, and i loved your part btw!! i'l try shilps, when i get another brainblast i will for sure, lol. but i said earlier in their i would update later on and i did!! next week, i have like a billion tests =( and this week is more free so i'll update again this week!!

yeah i do!! heard it from the source, myself!! 😉 =)

oo, ok, great!! i like it too, lolzzz!! =)

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Posted: 15 years ago

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haha seriously!! We do soo much drama!! the nahi!! the pinching oneself!! haha i think we would have fit in like the 70's heroines better though, or a saas bahu type serial haha. And ofcourse!! The dramatic music is a must!! lol.

haha ofcourse!! you are a to be lawyer!!

haha dont worry, brain blast is not needed!! Just right anything that comes to your mind lol, gundas could come after them, or they could just go back home lol. Trust me, as the writer, you are thinking through all this and you think wow this sounds stupid, but being on the other side as the reader, it just might be what they wanted to read!! You never know, so dont even under-estimate your part!! Just write whatever, for god's sake it is not an english class you are sitting in lol. 😆

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ahahhah, 70s heroines... yesss i can totally imagine that!! 🤣

dude, it wouldn't be possible with out the dramatic music..thats like separating

peanut butter from jelly 🤣

awww, ily!! thats what im aiming for..i cant believe it in less than like 10 months from now, i'll be starting my internship at a law office..ahhh im so excited!! lolzzz

haha, yeah im trying to free myself from like ap english writing, its taking over my brain 🤣

im just gonna go with the flow!! its hard for me though. oo, maybe even a dramtic part!! haha. when i write i cant help but try and bring them together and write something thats getting towards romantic-ness (thats not a word, i know, lol). i want them to get together in the story already, lol im being a selfish RMian 😆

thanks for the assurance, shilps!! 🤗

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haha.. peanut butter and jelly lol. Actually to tell you the truth, i have never tried a peanut butter and jelly sandwich 😆😆. Only peanut butter on mine!! haha

haha i knowww!! AP english is such a pain, I hate analyzing those boring books haha, but looking forward to checking out Love from the Sidelines! 😉. OMG!! I love romantic-ness!! Who says we cant coin our own new words?? LOL. You should totally write a romantic part!! and ya a romantic part might not seem right at this moment in the story. But yaar.. this is a story!! a dream sequnce is always welcome!! 😉 That is what you do when you want a romantic par but cant have one, write a huge long romactic part, and at the end of it be like poof it was a dream!! 😆😆😆 Works all the time, when one is craving for romance!! Nothing selfish about that haha.

Sure dear!! always there to encourage u!! 🤗

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lolzz, ohhk!!

yeah, i dont really dig them but they go together don't they!! 😆

ohh noo, i love those books, most of them!! and im waiting till i get that book😉 soo excited!!

lol, its just the constant essays and the ap format that kinda sucks out my creative writing abilities 🤣

no one, but we were talking about english and writing so i decided to stick with real words, but yes we can make any words up!! 😆

lolzzz, i'll keep that in mind!!

thanks, girlie!!

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hey shilpa di..awesome parts..

Rahul got a CD..and he heard a beautiful voice..he seemed 2 b really impressed wid it..btw i love the way u describe each and everything they do :)

Muskaan was bonding wid Mrs.Sharma well..n she got the job and a contract too..Mrs.Khanna seemed to be really impressed wid her!..n she felt gr8 gettin her cabin..tats normal..

Ridz brings him food from home..n Armaan starts teasing her..lol..but atleast they feed each other..tats cute..

update soon

-aish

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Posted: 15 years ago

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lolz u must have guessed why me in dreamland☺️

Awesome ..awesome part shilps...both the parts were lovely .....evrything u write is so perfectly described ...i feel as if its happening just right in front .....cant hardly wait for RM to meet ....and is muskaan an architect too😕?

Thanks for the PM 🤗

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@Sab: Umm.. i dont know if they go together Sab, i have never tried it.. and for some reason, just the thought of pbj doesnt appeal to me 😕 lol. haha really?? wow a first!! No one else i have met has said that they actually enjoy the books suggested by the teachers lol. I love reading books, but not those lol. Did you order ur copy yet? I ordered mine just yesterday!! So psyched for it to arrive in the mail!! NP Sab!!

@Aish: Thanks Aish! Thank you soo much!! Glad you enjoyed the details in it! Yup getting your own cabin is a big thing!! Must feel awesome for sure! haha glad you enjoyed AR part too!!

@Munnaza: Thanks!!

@Saba: haha I think i can guess the reason behind ur dreamland 😆. Umm.. let me guess.. Rahul's workout? 😉 lol. OMG thank you soooooooo much abas!! 🤗 means alot to me! RM will meet soon enough!! Don't worry!! 😃 Nope Muskaan is a wedding planner 😉. Thanks for sweet comment!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Shilpa! Wah!! Do Do updates! :D great!! and LOVED both of them!! :D I'm really liking both the characters! :D they are different..and the CD, is it Muski's voice? :D hehe.
Can't wait for the next!! :D
TC!
Sneha!