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t-mayur-sajan-j

@t-mayur-sajan-j

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#921

hey mahak
i love this ff
it was soo sweet
and the message that u said was absolutly true and nice
plz cont soon and write more, plz,
i want to be reading this ff forever

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Nirjhor105

@Nirjhor105

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#922

it's beautiful,I liked it very much.

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#923

That was a reality awesome update mahi.. I am telling it coz i know it... God.. ur imaginations are just precise and accurate... and no criticisms about ur writing.. only one thing to you, Nidzy, Shreyu.... you people are damn good writers.. just proof reading is reqd... so much of effort you people put in writing.. just check ur spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.. u r puttinh 99.9 % in writing,, y leave out that 0.1% for spelling and grammatical errors.. I m sorry if I have hurt you, Shreyu and Nidzy by this comment.. but I felt like telling..

Anyway, as usual loved your update.. it was PERFECT!!👏👏👏👏👏👏

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#924

mayank and nupz expression i can see through ur writting mahi..
u no i had gone entirely in the story..wow u no what?
ur really a great wirtter, u wanna criticisim mean...the one am giving, dont make us wait longer...just try to give constant updates...u know what i cant express?it is exactly superb..well i will try to find some good words for ur appreciation sweety...u rock mahi...

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@-Ishita-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#925

awesome update

loved it very much

continue soon

thanc for the pm

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#926

hey mahak i read all the part today only...it is ana amzing ff
i cant believe i missed it before..
the last part was very realistic..i felt watching a live thing...
the reaction,dialogues,everything was very real like !

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zoya

@tingtingteeding

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#927

great part mahak.....so finally the desicion has been made...good LOL....loved this part...continue soon

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#928

Wow......This is seriously awesomeee..........
I loved every part of it.....
You have described their feelings so nicely.....Great!!!!

Pls Pls Pls update soon....
Waiting eagerly for your update.....

Regards,
Pooja

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#929

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

how sweet!

tune yeh line likhi and i am blushing!

thanks for using such sweet words for my update!

i told u that this update is gonna make u in love with mayur!

how sweet!

i am happy that u loved their thoughts......

they are perfect for each other.....

both r understanding and similar......but also opposite in many aspects.....

hey!

thanks for loving this line.....

he is a gentleman!

he knew the answer and then too asked everyone to ask her.....

he wanted to know her side too......

he cudn't just burden her with an unwanted bond.....

he is a perfect gentleman!

yup! they r!

thanks for that!!

thanks for loving each and everything of my update........

u can see that in the next update.......

i would be updating sooner this time......

thanks a lot.............

Hey Mahi
thank u so much for ur nice reply.
ya i loved ur update so much and now eagerly waiting 4 next aprt.
so try to update next aprt soon.
love ya