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zoya

@tingtingteeding

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Posted: 15 years ago

#351

mahak such a sweet update....man i loved it....too good...continue soon

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#352

mahak kya part tha yaar
truely im a big fan of your writing now ,ye kabir wala doha
mein to roj he sunti hoon ,,,,,,
i just love you write nupur's and maynk's emotion
lovley update mahak

and i like the line which you write

didn't wanted to hear that thing once more...for her mouth....agar koi kaam na karo to woh har baar yahi kehti hai....hamesha se hi....i mean agar iron nahi kiya to yahi doha....music sun rahi hoon aur kaam na karo to yahi doha....bachpan mein jab main padhai nahi karti thi tv dekhne ke liye to bhi yahi doha.....i am just sick of it......

Mujhe lagta hai yeh life to pal do pal ki hai....so let's enjoy it.....and do the work later....but I always do the work at time...i always somehow manage to do extra work at the last minute....well what's the problem when u can do the work later? And what difference does it make until you are able to cope up at the last minute?

every word is true love it mahak
write more

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thenarcissist

@thenarcissist

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#353

lovely part mahak!
so mayu's dimples are from his moM'S!
thnx for the pm!

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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#354

hey mahak, i lovedddddddddddd your update and the song bit was soo wonderfully put, keep it up mahak, hope they meet up soon and this long wait would end soon hehe.

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#355

v nice mahak.........thnkx 4 pm.....
continue soon

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#356

OMG Mahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Mahi Mahi Mahi

love this part soooooooooo much

love how you showed two different point of views

Mayu's and Nupzs

too good

and the ending where you say their paths are different and all

love that soooooooo much

mein toh bata bhi anhi sakati

sach mein

I always told you

to update it long

aur mujhe keh ti ho

ke my updates are small

this is pretty small too

well anyways

wondering if they will meet

plez make them meet in the next part

and you better update soon

warna mein damkiyaan de ne aati hoon

-Lina-

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Lipsa

@-Lipsa-

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#357

Great Update Mahak! I Loved the Picture of Uncertainity You gave between the couple and How You focused n Making them Different.

Ok, If You look at it..Tommorow is really Kinda Soon..Not for us 😆 But surely For the Young Couple. Anyways That leaves Us Readers in all the more anxeity and anticipation. You imagine Yourself na, That way

Kabir Das..That's one of my favourite Qoutations Ever. But never really Bothered to Implement it in my life 😆

Mujhe lagta hai yeh life to pal do pal ki hai....so let's enjoy it.....and do the work later....but I always do the work at time...i always somehow manage to do extra work at the last minute....well what's the problem when u can do the work later? And what difference does it make until you are able to cope up at the last minute?
^^
My Motto 😆

Aww! Mayank Gets Dimples from her mother..He cares for her soo Much! Yes everything Was fast But Good for us na 😆

I love the tussle between His MOM and Him And I knew his Mom would end up winning😳

Great SONG selection.Love the update! Thanks for the PM. Update soon.

Love,
Lipsa

Edited by Lipsa_mjht - 15 years ago

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#358

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

mai kya kahoon Pagli !!!!
mujhe iss part ne deewana bana dia :)

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PureBliss

@PureBliss

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#359

I saw this FF today only and read all the parts. Simply fabulous! I just love this idea and its quite different from the others. The way u have shaped up the story is brilliant! I'm hooked to this FF now. Pls PM me whenever you update. I am really very eager to read the next part. Hope u update soon.

Love,

Avani